As the Developmental Editor for this chapter of *The Starfall Accord*, I have evaluated the structure, emotional beats, and voice signatures. Here is my assessment:

### 1. STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
*   **Voice Accuracy (Mira):** The use of "actually. No." as a mid-sentence correction is perfectly executed. *Quote: "I leaned into him—actually. No. I didn't lean; I collapsed into the gravity of his stillness."* This anchors her internal monologue in her specific character profile.
*   **Voice Accuracy (Dorian):** His use of the "Formal Understatement Scale" is chillingly effective. *Quote: "The circumstances are... not as they appear,"* and his reference to the student brawls as an *"expected variable of the first residency cycle."*
*   **The Somatic Hook:** The concept of the "somatic anchor"—where Dorian must physically siphoning Mira’s excess heat to prevent accidental incineration—is a brilliant literalization of their "fire and ice" dynamic. It provides a grounded, plot-driven reason for forced proximity.
*   **Climatic Outcome:** The "Binary Dance" serving as both a political performance and a moment of genuine vulnerability (Mira seeing Dorian's grief through the "bleed") works structurally to move the romance from "rivalry" to "alliance."

**VOICE SIGNATURE CHECK:**
*   **Mira:** YES. "Actually. No." tics, use of "obviously" for sarcasm, and "stars' sake" are all present.
*   **Dorian:** YES. Complete grammatical sentences until the very end, use of "suboptimal" and "the evidence suggests."

### 2. MUST-FIX — CONTINUITY
*   **Issue:** In the Character State (Ch-06), it is noted that Mira realizes the "Static Shield" is an Imperial monitoring device and that Dorian discovered a plan to "harvest" the Paradox. However, in the chapter text, they act as if they are only just discovering secrets in the Library of Ash *during* the gala. 
*   **Correction:** Clarify that they are processing the *implications* of what they found earlier that day. Ensure the text reflects that Dorian already knows about the "harvest" (the Protocol Omega/Severance Clause) while Mira is just intuiting it through their magical tether.
*   **Issue:** The Character State mentions Dorian has "bruising on ribs from Mira's grip" and Mira has "minor thermal singeing." These physical states are not referenced during the dressing scene.
*   **Correction:** Add a brief mention of Mira noticing the bruise she left on Dorian or the sting of her fingertips while she is at the mirror/dressing.

### 3. MUST-FIX — CLARITY
*   **Issue:** The transition between the dance and the assassination attempt is slightly blurred. *Quote: "In the Pyre, we are taught to listen to the fire before we see the flame."* 
*   **Correction:** The spatial orientation of the shooter is vague. Specify where the bolt came from (e.g., the upper gallery where Lyra is located) to ground the action.
*   **Issue:** The "Severance Clause" is mentioned by Dorian suddenly. 
*   **Correction:** Provide one sentence of context earlier in his dialogue explaining that the "Severance Clause" is a legal mechanism the Ministry uses to forcibly decommission Chancellors who "drift" too far from Imperial standards.

### 4. OPTIONAL SUGGESTIONS
*   **Optional:** The ending repeats the "The magic had moved before the thought" sentiment twice in the final four paragraphs. I suggest cutting the final summary paragraph entirely. The chapter should end on Mira’s spoken dialogue: *"Obviously, I’m terrible at cost-benefit analysis,"* or Dorian’s reaction to it. The extra summary blunts the emotional impact of their physical touch.
*   **Optional:** Mention the "Static Shield" monitoring device (from the Character State) when they are being observed by Malchor to raise the stakes of their whispered conversation.

### 5. FORBIDDEN CHANGES / NON-GOALS
*   **Do Not "Smooth" Mira’s Dialogue:** Her run-on sentences and self-interruptions during the dressing scene are intentional. Do not make them "cleaner."
*   **Do Not Soften Dorian’s Coldness:** His refusal to look at her ("looking at the space six inches above my head") is essential for the arc. He must remain a "statue" until the very last beat of the dance.
*   **Do Not Remove Technical Jargon:** Terms like "somatic anchor," "kinetic vents," and "stabilization lattices" are core to the World State and should remain.

### 6. VERDICT: REVISE
The chapter is emotionally resonant and structurally sound, with excellent voice work. However, there is a **Continuity mismatch** between the provided Character State (where they already know certain secrets) and the Chapter Text (where they seem to be discovering them or reacting to them for the first time). A quick pass to align the "Known Secrets" from the RAG database with the dialogue in the ballroom is required before this can move to the Line Editor.