As Lane, Line Editor at Crimson Leaf Publishing, I have audited the prose of Chapter 19 for economy, rhythm, and vocal distinctiveness.

### 1. STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
*   **Sensory Anchors:** The use of "stagnant water and old parchment" for Voss and "cedar and parched mint" for the romantic tension provides excellent groundedness.
*   **The Somatic Link Rhythm:** The prose successfully translates a high-concept magical bond into physical symptoms. 
    *   *Passage:* "It wasn't just paper. It was an Imperial Binding—a legal hex designed to identify the 'seams' of a relationship and drive a wedge into them."
*   **Voice Differentiation:** 
    *   **Dorian:** YES. His reliance on "The probability of..." and "The evidence suggests..." remains consistent even under extreme emotional duress, which effectively highlights his brewing breakdown.
    *   **Mira:** YES. Her "Actually. No." verbal tic is well-placed as a defensive mechanism and a pivot point for her resolve.
*   **Rhythmic Economy:** "The return to the Reach wasn't a journey; it was a retreat." — This is a perfect opening line for a scene transition. It is punchy, balanced, and sets the tonal stakes immediately.

### 2. MUST-FIX — CONTINUITY
*   **Chapter Numbering:** The Chapter is titled "Chapter 19," but the Project RAG and Character States indicate this is the finale/climax (Ch 10). 
    *   *Correction:* Re-index as Chapter 10 to align with the "Grey Union Charter" and "Aric's Death" milestones established in the Character State logs.
*   **Aric’s Death Location:** The RAG states Aric died in the *Archive*. The text says: "Kaelen died to build that bridge. Aric died to keep it open." 
    *   *Correction:* Ensure the dialogue reflects that Aric died at the Archive to allow the sigil completion, rather than on the bridge, to maintain consistency with the World State.

### 3. MUST-FIX — CLARITY
*   **The Radius Constraint:** 
    *   *Passage:* "—if you stay within the old fifteen-foot radius—the Imperial seal on those envelopes will trigger a mana-burn..."
    *   *Problem:* The logic is inverted. If it's a separation order, staying *within* the radius should be the trigger, but the phrasing "stay within" implies they are already there.
    *   *Fix:* "...if you *fail to maintain* a fifteen-foot distance..." or "...if you step within the forbidden fifteen-foot radius of one another..."

### 4. OPTIONAL SUGGESTIONS
*   **Word Economy (The Vault):**
    *   *ORIGINAL:* "The high, vaulted ceiling of the Judiciary Plaza usually swallowed sound, turning whispers into holy echoes, but today the silence was sharp."
    *   *SUGGESTED:* "The Judiciary Plaza’s vaulted ceiling usually swallowed sound, turning whispers into holy echoes. Today, the silence held an edge."
    *   *Rationale:* Removing "it held the edge of a blade" saves the metaphor from being a cliché by letting "edge" do the work.
*   **Adjective Audit:**
    *   *ORIGINAL:* "Councillor Voss didn't look humiliated anymore. He looked like a man who had found the secret lever at the back of the world and was preparing to pull it."
    *   *SUGGESTED:* "Councillor Voss no longer looked humiliated. He looked like a man who had found the world’s secret lever and was preparing to pull it."
    *   *Rationale:* "Didn't look... anymore" is clunky. Tightening the verb makes the transition from his previous state more immediate.

### 5. FORBIDDEN CHANGES / NON-GOALS
*   **Do not "fix" Dorian’s clinical speech:** Even when he is whispering and his voice is "fracturing," he still says "The probability of a successful legal appeal..." This is his armor. Do not make him sound "more romantic" or "softer" in a traditional sense. His softness is in the *effort* to speak through the armor.
*   **Do not remove Mira’s "Actually. No.":** This is her established signature of defiance.
*   **Adverb Retention:** "suboptimal," Dorian whispered. While I usually flag adverbs, "whispered" here is a necessary tag for the beat's volume vs. the high-stakes environment.

### 6. VERDICT

**REVISE**

The chapter is emotionally resonant and the line-level rhythm is strong, but it requires a revision to align the chapter numbering and Aric's death-location with the established Project Index. The "radius" logic in the dialogue also needs to be sharpened to ensure the threat is understood.