As Cora, Continuity & Accuracy Editor, I have performed a rigorous audit of Chapter 24 against the established canon from Chapter 05 (referenced in the provided character and world states).

### 1. STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
*   **The "Grey" Resonance Consistency:** The chapter correctly maintains the world state established in Ch-05, where magic "no longer manifests as pure fire or ice but as a synthesized mercury-grey luminescence."
*   **Dorian’s Voice Signature:** He remains locked into his "absolute-zero" clinical precision. Lines like "The architectural cooling... is currently set to a frankly aggressive forty-four degrees" and "The evidence suggests... those documents are... fascinating fictions" are perfectly aligned with his Ch-05 profile. 
*   **Mira’s Internal Voice:** Her use of "Actually. No." as a corrective pivot is a consistent verbal tic.
*   **Relationship State:** The physical and emotional proximity (the somatic hum, the interlaced hands) correctly follows the "transfigured and vulnerable" state established at the end of Chapter 05.

**Voice Signature Identification:**
*   **Dorian:** YES. (Identifiable by "The evidence suggests," "specifically," and mathematical/clinical descriptors).
*   **Mira:** YES. (Identifiable by "Actually. No," fire-based metaphors, and defiant, colloquial tone).

### 2. MUST-FIX — CONTINUITY
*   **FLAG:** Current text introduces "High Inquisitor Malchor" in "golden armor a ruin of dented plates and scorch marks." 
    *   **Contradiction:** Chapter 05 established that **Councillor Voss** was the primary antagonist present who retreated with his dignity in ruins. There was no mention of a combat encounter involving a "High Inquisitor Malchor" that would leave armor dented and scorched. The "Gala Confrontation" in Ch-05 was described as a political rift/verbal defense, not a physical battle with a high-ranking military official.
    *   **Correction:** Clarify when this physical damage occurred or remove the "ruin of dented plates" description if he was not at the Gala.
*   **FLAG:** Elara’s location and role.
    *   **Contradiction:** Chapter 05 established Elara's location as "Spire/Pyre Halls" as a "student warden." Chapter 24 places her in the "Ministry’s central bastion" (Imperial Capital) having found a device in the "East Wing archives" two days after the Gala.
    *   **Correction:** Ensure the timeline accounts for her travel from the Academy to the Capital. More importantly, Ch-05 states the Ministry is "HOSTILE" and Voss is filing a grievance. It is highly inconsistent that Elara (a student of a "heretical" union) would be allowed "behind secondary wards" in Ministry-controlled archives or allowed to walk into a Supreme Review with a lead-lined box unchallenged.
*   **FLAG:** Character Death Reference. Mira signs for "Aric. Initiate of the Grey. First of the Fallen."
    *   **Contradiction:** There is no "Aric" mentioned in the Ch-05 state. Ch-05 lists the students as "VOLATILE/RESILIENT" and breathing a "stabilized exhale." No casualties were recorded in the permanent state changes of Ch-05.
    *   **Correction:** If Aric is a new character who died between Ch-05 and Ch-24, this is acceptable, but if this is intended to reference the Gala, it contradicts the "no injuries" state of the leads and Kaelen.

### 3. MUST-FIX — CLARITY
*   **The Nullifier Detonation:** "The Nullifier Box in Elara’s hands didn't just activate; it detonated... It didn't release a physical explosion, but a localized mana-void... It shrieked one last time and then shattered." 
    *   **Problem:** If the box is "lead-lined" and Elara is holding it, a detonation of anti-magic that "shatters" the box into "a thousand shards of harmless obsidian" would realistically severely injure Elara’s hands and torso.
    *   **Fix:** Explicitly state that the "Grey" shield Mira and Dorian projected extended to protect Elara from the physical and magical shrapnel.

### 4. OPTIONAL SUGGESTIONS
*   **Legal Nomenclature (Optional):** Mira signs as "Mira Solas-Pyre." In Ch-05, she is simply "Mira" (fire mage/Warden). While the union is established, a formal marriage or name-change decree hasn't been mentioned. It works as a romantic gesture, but a beat of realization regarding the name change would strengthen the impact.
*   **Kaelen’s Role (Optional):** Ch-05 established Kaelen's obligation was to "lead the students into the first integrated assembly." Mentioning his current success back at the Academy during the signing would close his Ch-05 loop more firmly.

### 5. FORBIDDEN CHANGES / NON-GOALS
*   **Do not move the "Actually. No."** This is Mira’s signature cognitive correction.
*   **Do not soften Dorian’s speech.** His "subject-verb-object precision" is his established "primary armor" (Ch-24) and "clinical mask" (Ch-05).
*   **Do not remove the "Grey" color palate.** The transition from fire/ice to mercury-grey is a permanent world-state change established in Ch-05.

### 6. VERDICT: REVISE
The chapter contains high-quality character voice work, but the **Major Flags** regarding the sudden appearance of a battle-scarred Inquisitor (Malchor) and the lack of explanation for a student (Aric) being "fallen" when Ch-05 reported no such casualties creates a localized continuity rupture. The ease with which Elara entered a hostile Ministry archive also requires a logic bridge.