**TO:** Genesis Publishing Core
**FROM:** Cora, Continuity & Accuracy Editor
**RE:** Editorial Review: *The Starfall Accord*, Chapter 19 ("The Descent")

### 1. STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
*   **Somatic Link Consistency:** The "permanent, rhythmic hum in her marrow" and the "fifteen-foot radius" restriction align perfectly with the physiological rules established in Ch 08 and Ch 10.
*   **Character Voice Signatures:** 
    *   **Dorian:** YES. His dialogue remains anchored in probabilistic terminology even under duress: "The probability of a successful legal appeal... is less than three percent." The use of "Suboptimal" as a devastating emotional admission is a high-value callback to his Ch 01-05 clinical mask.
    *   **Mira:** YES. Her "Actually. No." verbal tic (established in Ch 02) is used effectively as a defiant pivot in the final scene. Her fire is correctly described as "amber light" and "smoky red," maintaining the established visual palette.
*   **The Aric Pyre Chair:** The mention of the "empty 'Aric Pyre Chair'" (established in the Ch 10 World State) correctly serves as the "moral conscience" of the setting.

### 2. MUST-FIX — CONTINUITY
*   **ERROR:** The chapter is labeled "Chapter 19," and the text implies the story is continuing after the resolution of the conflict. However, the **Character State and World State for Ch 10** explicitly state that the Arc is **100% complete**, the Grey Era is **PERMANENT**, and the "Sovereign Union" is already successfully active and rejecting Ministry clauses. 
*   **CORRECTION:** This chapter functions as a "Regression" or "Reversal" plot point that contradicts the "Permanent" status of the World State. If this is intended to be a sequel or a new conflict, the Character State must be updated to reflect that the "HEA" (Happily Ever After) and "100% Arc" status from Ch 10 has been revoked.
*   **ERROR:** Councillor Voss is described as "no longer looking humiliated." Ch 10 established Voss as "TERRIFIED" and "Retreating to regroup." While regrouping is consistent, the chapter claims the "ink on the Sovereign Accord wasn't even dry," implying this happens immediately after Ch 10. However, Ch 10's state reflects a settled environment where Elara is already the First Warden.
*   **CORRECTION:** Clarify the timeline. If this is 48 hours after Ch 10, the "Permanent" tags in the RAG database are technically false.
*   **ERROR:** The text states, "The Spire students will be escorted to the Northern bastions. The Pyre students will remain in the Reach." In Ch 01-03, it was established that Mira’s school (Pyre) was in the **High Spire** and Dorian’s (Solas) was the **Frost-bound Conservatory**. 
*   **CORRECTION:** Ensure the geography matches Ch 01. If the schools merged into "The Reach," specify that the "Northern bastions" refers to Dorian's original territory, not a new location.

### 3. MUST-FIX — CLARITY
*   **PASSAGE:** "They’re... they’re putting up the glass, Chancellor." (Elara's dialogue).
*   **ISSUE:** "The glass" has no established technical or magical meaning in the "Starfall Accord" world rules (which focus on mana, ley-lines, and somatic links). It is unclear if this is a physical barrier or a magical dampener.
*   **FIX:** Briefly define "the glass" (e.g., "the anti-resonant glass" or "the Ministry’s obsidian partitions").

### 4. OPTIONAL SUGGESTIONS
*   **RE-ENTRY PATH (Optional):** Mentioning the "Starfall" as a "perpetual mercury-grey aurora" (from Ch 10 World State) while they are in the carriage would reinforce the visual continuity of the "Grey Era" before the Ministry tries to dismantle it.

### 5. FORBIDDEN CHANGES / NON-GOALS
*   **Do not "fix" Dorian’s stuttering/fractured speech** in the final scene ("The evidence suggests... that the internal architecture of my... my soul..."). This is a vital character beat showing the breakdown of his clinical defense mechanism.
*   **Do not remove the "Actually. No."** It is Mira's signature pivot.
*   **Do not soften the bleakness of the Injunction.** The "mana-burn" and "Imperial Binding" are consistent with the Ministry's established hostile posture.

### 6. VERDICT: REVISE
The chapter presents a major conflict that contradicts the "100% Arc Complete" and "Permanent" status documented in the Ch 10 Post-Mortem/Character State database. Either the database must be updated to reflect a "Phase 2" conflict, or the chapter must be framed as an immediate escalation before the "Permanent" state was truly achieved. Additionally, the confusion between "High Spire" and "The Reach" regarding student placement needs a geography check against Ch 01.