As Cora, Continuity & Accuracy Editor, I have performed a forensic audit of Chapter 8. While the emotional beats are high-stakes, this chapter contains **critical continuity failures** regarding the status of the supporting cast and the established timeline of the "High Court" exile.

### 1. STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
*   **Mira’s Voice Signature:** The use of "past and rot" to describe the Emperor’s magic and the sarcastic "Obviously" regarding the Ministry's report (Line 13) align perfectly with her profile. Her tactile magic—touching the slab, the ledger, and Dorian—is consistent. 
*   **Dorian’s Formal Understatement:** His use of "suboptimal" (Line 29) to describe a political murder and "the evidence suggests" (Line 28) are pitch-perfect for his character state.
*   **The Power Dynamic:** The "Phase-Sync" sequence (Line 79) effectively demonstrates the "Shared Ledger" world rule where their magics must now interlock to function at peak capacity.
*   **Voice Identification:** 
    *   **Mira:** YES. (Short, action-oriented: "Then we don't use the door.")
    *   **Dorian:** YES. (Precise, grammatically complete: "It suggests they are clearing the board.")

### 2. MUST-FIX — CONTINUITY
*   **The Kaelen Contradiction:**
    *   **ERROR:** Chapter 08 depicts Kaelen as a dead body on a morgue slab, killed by a "thermal pocket/accident" (Lines 6-10).
    *   **ESTABLISHED FACT:** The [character-state] for Ch-08 and the [World State] explicitly list Kaelen as **"Location: Pyre Academy, Command Center," "Physical: Uninjured,"** and "Active obligations: Owes Mira a distraction at the border."
    *   **CORRECTION:** Kaelen cannot be dead. He is the military commander of the resistance. The victim in the morgue must be a different named proctor or a high-ranking student to maintain the stakes without breaking the established tactical plot for the finale.
*   **The Setting/Timeline Discrepancy:**
    *   **ERROR:** Chapter 08 takes place at "The Ministry wing of the Starfall Union/Pyre archives" (Line 61).
    *   **ESTABLISHED FACT:** The [character-state] for Ch-08 explicitly places Mira and Dorian at the **"Imperial High Court, Grand Balcony, Capital City"** in a state of **"High Court exile."**
    *   **CORRECTION:** The transitions between the Court confrontation (end of Ch-07/start of Ch-08) and this "heist" are missing. If they have fled the Capital to return to the school, the text must acknowledge their "Rogue Agent" status and the fact they are infiltrating their own occupied school.
*   **The "Secret" Contradiction:**
    *   **ERROR:** In this chapter, Mira finds the ledger and "realizes" the tether wasn't for stabilization (Line 115).
    *   **ESTABLISHED FACT:** [character-state] Ch-08 notes Mira **"Knows the Emperor is feeding the Starfall into the ley-lines... Dorian does not know."**
    *   **CORRECTION:** The "discovery" needs to be flipped or synchronized. Mira should already suspect the Emperor's parasitic nature; the shock should be specifically about the *permanence* and the *surveillance* aspect, or Dorian’s prior knowledge of those specific details.

### 3. MUST-FIX — CLARITY
*   **The Location of the Archives:**
    *   **PASSAGE:** "The Ministry wing of the Starfall Union was a graft upon the Pyre’s ancient stone." (Line 61).
    *   **FIX:** Clarify if they are at the Pyre Academy or the Crystalline Spire. Previous chapters established a "merger" location or dual campuses. If the Ministry has occupied one specific school, state which one is currently the "tomb."
*   **The Ending Loop:**
    *   **PASSAGE:** The final paragraph repeats the exact same phrasing as the third-to-last paragraph ("I knew," Dorian said. The words fell into the archive's silence...).
    *   **FIX:** Delete the repetitive block starting at Line 161. It appears to be a copy-paste error of the preceding epiphany.

### 4. OPTIONAL SUGGESTIONS
*   **The Mirror Scorch:** (Optional) Dorian looks at his "scorched cuff" (Line 42). It would be a strong continuity nod to explicitly reference this as the mark from Mira’s flare in Chapter 2 or 3 to ground their history.
*   **Lyra’s Absence:** (Optional) Since the [character-state] puts Lyra in the High Archives (Crystalline Spire) erasing data, Mira and Dorian's presence in the Pyre archives feels lonely. A brief mention of a failed scrying attempt to reach Lyra would bridge the two locations.

### 5. FORBIDDEN CHANGES / NON-GOALS
*   **Do not "soften" Dorian’s betrayal:** His choice to sign the Accord knowing it was permanent is a cornerstone of his "Institutional Logic." Do not make him more apologetic; his coldness is his character.
*   **Do not fix Mira’s swearing:** Her use of "Stars' sake" and "Past and Rot" are established voice signatures and must remain as written.

### 6. VERDICT
**REVISE**
The death of Kaelen is a hard contradiction with the Project RAG/Character State database (which lists him as alive and active for the finale). Additionally, the sudden shift from the High Court (exile) back to the Academy archives without explaining the travel or the change in location from the [character-state] data creates a fractured timeline.