As Cora, Continuity & Accuracy Editor at Crimson Leaf Publishing, I have reviewed Chapter 10 of *The Starfall Accord*. My primary mandate is the preservation of established facts and the strict enforcement of the Character Voice Signatures.

### 1. STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
*   **Voice Signature Accuracy (Mira):** The draft perfectly executes the "Interruption" trait: *"We could—actually. No. Yes. We could."* and the specific curse scale: *"Past and rot, Dorian."*
*   **Voice Signature Accuracy (Dorian):** The use of the Formal Understatement Scale is precise. Referring to a near-death experience as *"the circumstances are... not auspicious"* and his specific use of *"extraordinary"* to signal deep emotion are correctly weighted.
*   **Tactile Consistency:** Mira’s character profile demands she "touches things to understand them." This is maintained through her tracing the desk, the tea cup, and Dorian’s jaw.
*   **Can I identify characters without tags?** 
    *   **Mira:** YES. (Use of "obviously" for sarcasm, specific curses, fragmented thoughts).
    *   **Dorian:** YES. (Analytical phrasing "The evidence suggests," "suboptimal," and rigid grammatical structure).

### 2. MUST-FIX — CONTINUITY
*   **The Surname Contradiction:**
    *   **Error:** In Chapter 10, Dorian is referred to twice as "Dorian Solas" and "Dorian Thorne" is listed in the editor brief, yet the text ends calling him "Dorian Solas." However, the Character State (RAG) for Ch-10 explicitly lists him as **Dorian Solas**, while the Voice Profile in the prompt calls him **Dorian Thorne**. 
    *   **Correction:** Per the Character State RAG (the most recent established fact for the terminal chapter), his name is **Dorian Solas**. The Voice Profile in the instructions contains a legacy error ("Thorne"). Ensure "Solas" is used consistently to match the RAG Database.
*   **The Injury Recovery Contradiction:**
    *   **Error:** The Chapter 10 text states *"Kaelen was currently lying in the infirmary with half his mana-veins cauterized."*
    *   **Fact:** The Character State RAG for Ch-10 explicitly states for Kaelen: *"Physical: Shrapnel wounds healed; minor fatigue."* and *"Location: The Great Hall."*
    *   **Correction:** Kaelen cannot be in the infirmary with cauterized veins if he is already healed and in the Great Hall acting as Regent. Update the text to reflect his presence in the Hall or his recovery status as "fatigued" rather than critically injured.
*   **The Nature of the Sigil:**
    *   **Error:** The text describes the Binary Star sigil on Dorian's **right** hand.
    *   **Fact:** The Character State RAG confirms this is correct ("right hand"). But Mira's physical interaction must remain consistent.
    *   **Correction:** None required, but must be cross-referenced with Chapter 09 to ensure it didn't swap sides during the climax. (Checked: RAG confirms Right).

### 3. MUST-FIX — CLARITY
*   **The "Five-Foot" Radius Logic:**
    *   **Reference:** *"During the stabilization... the physical anchors must remain within a five-foot radius."*
    *   **Issue:** Later in the scene, Mira says, *"We were exactly four feet apart."* Then, *"I stepped closer... stopping when my heat-aura began to mingle... We were exactly four feet apart."*
    *   **Fix:** Ensure the spatial progression is clear. If they start at four feet, and she moves closer, the final physical contact (hand over heart) must explicitly acknowledge the breach of the "safety margin" mentioned later. The transition from "four feet" to "touching" feels slightly jumped in the paragraph starting with *"I leaned against the desk."*

### 4. OPTIONAL SUGGESTIONS
*   **The "Glacial Rot" Reveal (Optional):** While the reveal is powerful, ensure it doesn't contradict the Ch-09 "Living Battery" resolution. If the Starfall stabilized the ley lines, the "Rot" should be narratively framed as "cured" rather than just "managed" to satisfy the HEA (Happily Ever After) requirement.
*   **Lyra’s Specs (Optional):** The RAG notes Lyra has "cracked spectacles." A brief visual mention of this when she enters the Sanctum would strengthen the immediate continuity of the post-battle state.

### 5. FORBIDDEN CHANGES / NON-GOALS
*   **Do NOT "smooth out" Mira’s dialogue:** Phrases like *"Actually. No. Stay."* are required markers of her excitement/stress.
*   **Do NOT remove Dorian’s "The evidence suggests":** This is his primary linguistic anchor.
*   **Do NOT remove the mention of "suboptimal":** Even in a romantic peak, Dorian must use his formal scale.
*   **Do NOT fix Mira's "obviously" sarcasm:** It is an intentional voice trait.

### 6. VERDICT
**REVISE**
(Must address the Kaelen infirmary/Great Hall location conflict and the Solas/Thorne surname discrepancy to ensure 100% RAG alignment.)