As Cora, Continuity & Accuracy Editor, I have completed my review of Chapter 07. My focus is strictly on the preservation of the established canon and the internal consistency of the world and characters.

### 1. STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
*   **The "Paradox" Landmark:** The description of the "frozen steam monument—a jagged spire of paradoxical matter that refused to melt" perfectly aligns with the World State establish in Ch-04 regarding the permanent magical landmark.
*   **Physical Aftermath:** Dorian’s "nerve-scorch" and the sensation of being "flayed" accurately reflect the physical state documented in the Ch-04 Character State.
*   **Mira’s Mana State:** The description of her as a "dead weight of cooling heat" with a "mana void" maintains the established "Total mana depletion" from the previous chapter.
*   **Character Voice/Presence:** 
    *   **Dorian:** Vulnerable and internally focused on his "absolute zero" identity. (Dialogue: N/A - he is unable to speak). 
    *   **Mira:** Silent/unconscious. 
    *   **Kaelen:** Observant and suspicious. (Dialogue: N/A - silent observation).
    *   **Lyra:** Technical and panicked. (Dialogue: N/A - physical cues only).
    *   *Note:* No dialogue is present in this excerpt, so voice signature through speech cannot be verified for this specific text block.

### 2. MUST-FIX — CONTINUITY
*   **Timeline Discrepancy (Chapter Sequencing):** 
    *   **The Error:** The provided text is labeled as **Chapter 07**, but the narrative content (the immediate aftermath of the arena disaster, Aric being hauled away, the Chancellors still on the floor) is an exact continuation/repetition of the **Chapter 04** state.
    *   **The Correction:** If the story is at Chapter 07, these characters should not still be lying on the arena floor in the immediate seconds following the "Paradox" spell. The timeline is frozen. This text belongs in the immediate conclusion of Chapter 04 or the very start of Chapter 05. Chapter 07 should reflect the "Active World Events" progressing (e.g., the Starfall Drift accelerating or the Ministry's "Correction Clause" being enacted).
*   **Character State (Aric):** 
    *   **The Error:** The text states Aric’s screams are "raw" and "bubbling." 
    *   **The Correction:** Chapter 04 World State established Aric as "nearly boiled from the inside out." The "bubbling" sound is consistent, but it must be clear that his vocal cords are likely damaged by steam, as established in the "NPC Memory" section of the RAG database.
*   **Spatial Consistency:** 
    *   **The Error:** The text describes the scene as "The scent of ozone... hung heavy in the sparring arena."
    *   **The Correction:** Ensure this matches the transition from the "Spire stabilization lattices" failure mentioned in Chapter 04.

### 3. MUST-FIX — CLARITY
*   **The Ministry’s Physical Presence:** 
    *   **The Passage:** "High above in the galleries, the Ministry Observers did not move."
    *   **The Fix:** Given the "lethal failure" witnessed, specify if they are merely watching or if they have begun the "Correction Clause" movement mentioned in the World State. Their stillness contradicts the "appalled" and "hostile" attitude which usually triggers immediate administrative intervention.

### 4. OPTIONAL SUGGESTIONS
*   **Somatic Threshold Mention (Optional):** Chapter 03 established "Dorian/Mira somatic threshold limits" as an unresolved loop. Referencing the specific sensation of the "tether" as they lie together would bridge the Ch-03 open loop with this Ch-07/Ch-04 scene more effectively.

### 5. FORBIDDEN CHANGES / NON-GOALS
*   **The Paradox Landmark:** Do not "correct" the impossibility of frozen steam. This is an established world rule for this specific event.
*   **Dorian’s Internal Weakness:** Do not edit his "terrified" or "shivering" state to make him appear more "alpha" or traditionally heroic; his emotional arc (40%) specifically focuses on his loss of identity and newfound dependency.

### 6. VERDICT
**REVISE**

**Reasoning:** There is a severe structural timeline contradiction. The content provided describes the immediate seconds/minutes following the Chapter 04 climax, yet it is labeled as Chapter 07. Either the chapter numbering is an error, or the narrative has failed to progress over three chapters. Furthermore, the Ch-04 state mentions Elara is "comatose," while this text describes her as a "pale ghost," which is an acceptable descriptor but must remain grounded in her medical status as "mana-stripped." The timeline reset is the primary "Must-Fix."