### 1. PROSE EVIDENCE
*   **Quote 1 (Early):** "The whispers slithered from the walls again, closer now, naming her secrets she never spoke aloud. They didn't just vibrate in the air; they hummed against the marrow of Eleanor’s teeth."
    *   *Commentary:* This effectively establishes the horror genre through visceral, physical sensations rather than just auditory cues.
*   **Quote 2 (Mid):** "The darkness at the top of the stairs seemed more than a lack of light; it was a physical barrier, a curtain of ink that she had to push through."
    *   *Commentary:* This use of personification and metaphor successfully heightens the oppressive atmosphere of the setting.
*   **Quote 3 (Late):** "In every single piece of broken glass, a different version of her own mouth was moving. There were hundreds of them, tiny and distorted, all speaking in perfect, chilling unison."
    *   *Commentary:* This image provides a strong, disturbing visual climax that reinforces the theme of fragmented identity and guilt.

### 2. CHARACTER VOICE AUDIT
*   **Character:** Eleanor (Note: Not listed in Context RAG; likely a NEW POV for Chapter 5).
    *   **Dialogue:** "It’s the house. It’s just the settling. It’s the pipes. It’s the dry rot."
    *   **Vocabulary/Tics:** N/A (No profile provided in RAG).
    *   **Avoids Forbidden Patterns:** YES (None listed for this character).
    *   **Emotional Register:** YES. She is in a state of high anxiety/panic, consistent with a haunting scenario.

### 3. STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
*   **Visceral Sensory Detail:** The description of the whispers feeling like a "coat of oil over her skin" (Early) creates a unique, repulsive texture for the supernatural elements.
*   **The Unfolding Backstory:** The transition from the attic to the memory of the fire at "Miller Street" (Late) provides necessary context for her guilt while maintaining the surreal pacing of the horror.
*   **The Surreal Attic Expansion:** The moment where the "walls were miles away now, lost in a forest of junk" (Late) emphasizes the psychological nature of the haunting.

### 4. MUST-FIX -- CONTINUITY
*   **ORIGINAL:** "Every time she closed her eyes, the whispers became a roar... since she’d arrived at Blackwood." (Early)
*   **PROBLEM:** The Context RAG and World State establish the setting as **Oakhaven** and **The Archive**. There is no mention of "Blackwood" in the series bible provided. If this is a different location, the connection to Elias Thorne’s investigation into the "Whisper signal" in Oakhaven is severed without explanation.
*   **FIX:** Change "Blackwood" to "Oakhaven" or a specific estate within Oakhaven to maintain geographical consistency.

*   **ORIGINAL:** "The fire, El… remember the way the curtains curled like blackened skin?" (Early) / "To the one who watches the fire... The handwriting began. It was her own." (Late)
*   **PROBLEM:** The Character Context (Sarah Miller) mentions she has a persistent headache from audio-feedback and a secret about "The Board of Regents." Eleanor appears to be a separate character, but her name is "Eleanor" while the RAG lists "Sarah Miller." If Eleanor is Sarah (given the shared last name "Miller Street"), the name used throughout the chapter is inconsistent with the Character State tracker.
*   **FIX:** If Eleanor is Sarah, replace all instances of "Eleanor/El" with "Sarah." If Eleanor is a new character, this must be explicitly reconciled with why Sarah Miller (ch-01) is not present or how their "Miller" connection functions.

### 5. MUST-FIX -- CLARITY
*   **ORIGINAL:** "She reached for the handle. It didn't turn. Of course, it didn't turn. But then, the whispers changed... The lock clicked." (Mid)
*   **PROBLEM:** The text previously stated the attic was locked and the keys were "lost," but Eleanor never actually attempts to use a key or a tool. The transition from "the handle didn't turn" to "the lock clicked" happens so fast it feels like a sequence break rather than a supernatural event.
*   **FIX:** Add a beat of her struggling with the weight of the door or searching for a secondary way in before the lock clicks on its own.

### 6. OPTIONAL SUGGESTIONS
*   **Optional:** "She leaned her ear against the chimney breast. Silence. Then—a rhythmic thud. Thump. Thump. Thump." (Mid). To better align with the Oakhaven "Awakening Signal" (Project Context), the thumping could be described as having an "electronic pulse" or "mechanical cadence" to hint that the haunting is tied to the signal Elias is tracking.

### 7. FORBIDDEN CHANGES / NON-GOALS
*   **The "Greasy" Metaphor:** Do not change the description of the whispers feeling like oil or vibrating in the teeth. These are specific sensory signatures for this story’s horror.
*   **Internal Monologue Style:** The repetitive, staccato rhythm of Eleanor’s thoughts ("It’s the house. It’s just the settling.") should be preserved as it reflects her mental spiral.

### 8. VERDICT
**REVISE**
**SCORE: 78**
**Justification:** The chapter is atmospheric but suffers from significant continuity errors regarding the setting name ("Blackwood" vs "Oakhaven") and a potential naming conflict with the protagonist (Sarah Miller vs Eleanor), which violates the Project Context.