# Character Sheet: Captain Thorne

## Identity
- Full name: Silas Thorne
- Age: 44
- Role: Supporting / Mentor
- Faction/School: The Cypress Bend Marshals / Local Law Enforcement

## Voice Signature
- Stress expression scale: "Check the tide." = minor | "Gods rot this swamp." = upset | [Dead silence accompanied by the slow unbuckling of a holster] = furious
- Verbal tic: Uses the word "clean" to describe things that are honorable, efficient, or morally sound; refers to the bayou as "she" or "her" exclusively.
- Sentence length pattern: Short, clipped declaratives. He speaks in fragments when working. He only uses complex sentences when explaining the history or "vibe" of the water.
- What they REACH FOR: Tactile and Olfactory. He smells the air for rain or rot; he constantly touches the wood of his skiff or the leather of his gear to ground himself.
- What they NEVER say: "I’m sorry." (He apologizes through shared coffee or silence, never words). He never uses "flowery" or academic jargon.
- Imperfection signature: When emotional or overwhelmed, he stops mid-sentence and turns his back to the listener to look at the horizon.
- One example line of their dialogue that could not belong to any other character:
  "The water don't care if you're a saint or a sinner, son; she just knows if you're heavy enough to sink."

## Magic / Power / Special Ability
- School/Discipline: Environmental Intuition / "The Sight"
- Core principle: Connection to the brackish ecosystem; understanding that the land and water are a single living organism.
- Signature move or approach: Tracking by reading the "break" in the duckweed or the vibration in the hull of his boat before a sound is even audible.
- Limitation: It only works within the salt-line of Cypress Bend; he is effectively "blind" and powerless in urban or dry environments.
- Shared uncertainty: Whether the swamp is actually communicating with him, or if he’s just slowly losing his mind to the isolation.

## Arc
- Want: To maintain the status quo and keep the outside world away from Cypress Bend.
- Need: To accept that change is inevitable and pass the torch to a new generation before he is consumed by his own bitterness.
- Fatal flaw: Rigid traditionalism; he would rather let a system fail than see it "corrupted" by modern influence.
- Wound: The "Great Flood" ten years prior where he saved the town but lost his wife because he chose duty over his own home.
- Transformation: From a cynical hermit-guardian to a selfless mentor who sacrifices his position to ensure the town's future.

## Relationships
- Elara Vance: Protective but fractious; he views her as a spark that could either light the way or burn the whole marsh down.
- Mayor Miller: Antagonistic and weary; he sees the Mayor as a man who sold the bayou’s soul for a paved road.
- Julian Blackwood: Deeply suspicious; Thorne treats the outsider like an invasive species that needs to be watched until it withers.

## Notes for Writers
- Thorne never sits with his back to a door or an open window; he is hyper-aware of entry points.
- He always has a smudge of engine grease or marsh mud somewhere on his person—usually the back of his forearm.
- He smokes hand-rolled cigarettes but never lights them while on the water, out of respect for "the breath of the marsh."
- Speech quirk: He drops the 'g' on every present participle (runnin', fishin', hopin') but his grammar is otherwise surprisingly precise.
- NEVER have Thorne express vulnerability in front of more than one person; if he breaks, it must be in total solitude or with a single trusted confidant.