diff --git a/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-07.md b/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-07.md index b748d0d..f77a47f 100644 --- a/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-07.md +++ b/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-07.md @@ -102,4 +102,9 @@ The tension between us was a physical cord, pulling us toward each other in the Then, a soft, rhythmic pulsing emanated from the newly revealed chamber, drawing our eyes away from each other. -As the stone groaned and retreated, the light from the inner chamber didn't reveal gold or jewels, but a single, hovering parchment that pulsed with the rhythm of two hearts beating as one. \ No newline at end of file +As the stone groaned and retreated, the light from the inner chamber didn't reveal gold or jewels, but a single, hovering parchment that pulsed with the rhythm of two hearts beating as one. +--- +## AUTHOR DIRECTION — BUTTERFLY EFFECT CASCADE (Ch07) +- Kaelen is not present. He is dead. Do not write him as alive. +- The isolation that brings Mira and Dorian together is partly driven by the fact that Mira's most trusted ally is gone. +- The "Weave of Ages" revelation, if it occurs here, has extra weight: Kaelen died believing in something that turned out to be real. \ No newline at end of file