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 # Character State: ch-03
 
 ## Liora Voss
-- **Location:** The Loom Floor, slumped against the primary drive-spindle.
-- **Physical:** "Frayback" in full effect—vision is sepia-toned and flickering. Left palm brand is leaking obsidian ink that pulses in sync with Thorne’s heartbeat. Smells of ozone and lanolin.
-- **Emotional:** Dissociative calm masking a core of jagged terror; she has accepted the "Dirty Circuit" as a survival necessity.
-- **Active obligations:** Must stabilize the Loom for Maros (UNPAID); must conceal the "rot" from the Junior Binders.
-- **Open loops:** The resonance with Thorne is deepening, granting her access to his sensory input while bleeding her own memories into him.
-- **Known secrets:** Has seen the structural rot in the Loom’s core—a heresy that proves the Conclave’s "eternal" machine is failing.
-- **Arc:** 20% — Transition from accidental binder to active heretic. She no longer seeks to fix the bond, but to use it.
+- **Location**: The Loom Floor, slumped against the primary drive-spindle.
+- **Physical**: Transitioning into "Frayback." Vision is sepia-mottled; left palm leaks obsidian ink that pulses in sync with Thorne’s heartbeat. Indigo brand-glow has reached her elbow.
+- **Emotional**: High-functioning dissociation. The "fixed" calm of a weaver facing a terminal snag.
+- **Active Obligations**: Stabilize the Loom for Maros (UNPAID); conceal the "rot" and her "Stainer" status from Junior Binders (UNPAID).
+- **Open Loops**: Resonance with Thorne allows sensory bleed; she is currently "feeling" his predatory curiosity.
+- **Arc**: 20% — Choosing to use the "Dirty Circuit" rather than fix it. Embracing the heresy of the bond to survive the Loom's failure.
 
-## Thorne Quill
-- **Location:** Center of the Weaving Chamber, strapped to the lead-lined restraint chair.
-- **Physical:** Skin stained with Liora’s ink-blood; chest vibrating with the Loom's "dead-tone." He is experiencing Liora’s physical exhaustion through the link.
-- **Emotional:** Predatorily observant. He is no longer fighting the restraints, but testing the mental boundaries of the link to influence Liora.
-- **Active obligations:** Acting as a grounding rod/battery for Liora’s power (UNPAID).
-- **Open loops:** His status as the "Thirteenth Strand"—a variable the Loom cannot categorize.
-- **Known secrets:** Witnessed Liora’s memory of her parents’ unbinding; knows her fatal flaw is the need to "fix" every thread.
-- **Arc:** 20% — Moving from passive prisoner to an active manipulator of the Dirty Circuit.
+## Thorne Quill (The Thirteenth Strand)
+- **Location**: Center of the Weaving Chamber, strapped to the lead-lined restraint chair.
+- **Physical**: Skin stained with Liora’s ink-blood; chest vibrating with the Loom's "dead-tone." He is acting as a grounding rod, absorbing Liora’s excess frayback.
+- **Emotional**: Predatory and observant. He is testing the mental boundaries of the link, no longer a passive prisoner.
+- **Open Loops**: Confirmed as the Thirteenth Strand—an un-categorizable variable that bypasses Conclave law.
+- **Arc**: 20% — Moving from victim to active manipulator of the unsanctified link.
 
 ## Elder Maros
-- **Location:** High Observation Gallery.
-- **Physical:** Leaning heavily on a bone-white cane, eyes reflecting the indigo glow of the brand.
-- **Emotional:** Calculating; has decided that Liora’s "stain" is more useful as a weapon than a reason for execution.
-- **Active obligations:** Protecting Liora from the Purist faction’s immediate "cleansing" (UNPAID).
-- **Arc:** 15% — Commits to weaponizing heresy.
+- **Location**: High Observation Gallery.
+- **Physical**: Leaning on a bone-white cane, watching the "ink-bleed" with clinical interest.
+- **Emotional**: Calculating opportunist. 
+- **Active Obligations**: Protecting Liora from immediate execution by Purists to study the anomaly (UNPAID).
+- **Known Secrets**: He views the Loom’s total decay as inevitable and sees Liora’s "stain" as the only viable bypass.
+- **Arc**: 15% — Formally commits to weaponizing heresy.
 
 # World State: ch-03
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- **Junior Binders:** Terrified. They saw Liora’s red thread turn black and "leap" to Thorne. They view her as a "Stainer."
-- **Archival Guards:** On high alert, weapons drawn, waiting for a signal from the Gallery to terminate both Liora and Thorne.
+- **Junior Binders**: TERRIFIED. They have witnessed the "Stain" and Liora’s black-thread jump. They view her as a "Stainer"—a source of spiritual contagion.
+- **Archival Guards**: HOSTILE. Weapons trained on the subjects; awaiting the order to terminate if the Indigo Contagion spreads.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- **Conclave Purists:** View the "Dirty Circuit" as a metaphysical contagion that must be excised via execution.
-- **Conclave Opportunists (Maros):** See the decay of the Loom as inevitable and Liora as the only "bypass" available.
+- **Conclave Purists**: Vengeful. The Dirty Circuit is seen as a theological and structural infection that must be excised.
+- **Conclave Opportunists (Maros)**: Pragmatic. The failing Loom justifies the use of a "Dirty Circuit."
 
 ## Active World Events
-- **The Dirty Circuit:** An unsanctified link established. It bypasses Conclave safety dampeners, allowing raw power transfer but causing rapid soul-fraying.
-- **Loom Decay:** The Great Loom is emitting a "dead-tone," a low-frequency vibration that signals structural failure of the Binding Thread.
-- **Indigo Contagion:** The brand on Liora is spreading toward her elbow, reacting to Thorne’s proximity with violent energy spikes.
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+- **The Dirty Circuit**: An established, unsanctified link bypassing all safety dampeners. It facilitates a rapid, mutual soul-fray between Liora and Thorne.
+- **Loom Decay**: The Great Loom is emitting a "dead-tone" frequency. The structural integrity of the Binding Thread is failing at the core.
+- **Indigo Contagion**: The reactive force of the brand is spreading physically up Liora’s arm, darkening in response to Thorne’s proximity and the Loom's instability.
+- **Terminus Frequency**: The "dead-tone" is beginning to affect the equilibrium of everyone in the Chamber, causing nausea and vertigo in non-binders.
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