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 # Character State: ch-01
 
-## Lyra Vance
-Location: The Weaver’s Guild, Great Loom Chamber.
-Physical: Kneeling on flagstones; fingertips raw and stained with indigo ink; lungs burning from the ozone of the collapse.
-Emotional: Shell-shocked and hollow; experiencing the acute grief of a severed bond.
-Active obligations: owes herself the truth of Oakhaven’s disappearance — UNPAID.
-Open loops: [Lyra/The Guild] the blame for the Great Severing being placed solely on her shoulders — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: CARRIED: knows she completed the map of Oakhaven just as the village vanished from the horizon.
-Arc: 5% — She has fallen from the grace of apprenticeship into the role of a scapegoat, her belief in the Guild’s infallibility shattered.
+## Liora Voss
+Location: The Weaving Chamber, Threadbinders' Conclave
+Physical: Trembling left hand; smelling of indigo and lanolin; suffering "frayback" (static/blurred vision).
+Emotional: Clinical but desperate; haunted by the "unspooling" of her parents.
+Active obligations: Must catalog and bind Thorne Quill for the Conclave -- UNPAID.
+Open loops: [Liora & Thorne] Encountered a thread that refuses her silver-etched needles -- UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: Witnessed the mechanical gears of the Great Loom fail during her parents' "accident"—it wasn't a soul-error.
+Arc: 05% — Confronted by a thread (Thorne’s) that defies her rigid methodology.
 Permanent: YES
 
-## Master Elian — DECEASED
-Location: The Great Loom (remains).
-Physical: Unraveled; physical form reduced to a pile of grey, non-reactive silk.
-Emotional: N/A.
-Active obligations: N/A.
-Open loops: [Elian/Lyra] the final unspoken warning he attempted to give her — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: died knowing the Guild’s "Great Pattern" was intentionally flawed.
-Arc: 100% — His death serves as the inciting trauma that ejects Lyra from her structured life.
-Permanent: NO (Legacy/Memory only).
-
-## High Weaver Malakor
-Location: The High Dais, Great Loom Chamber.
-Physical: Untouched; robes perfectly pressed; eyes like cold flint; holding the Obsidian Shears.
-Emotional: Calculated and predatory; using the chaos to consolidate theological power.
-Active obligations: owes the Guild a "sacrifice" to justify the loom’s failure — PENDING.
-Open loops: [Malakor/Silas Vane] his role in the exile of Lyra’s father — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: knows the Loom didn't break by accident, but reached a limit he refused to acknowledge.
-Arc: 10% — Established as the architect of the status quo and the primary obstacle to Lyra’s survival.
+## Thorne Quill
+Location: The Weaving Chamber, Threadbinders' Conclave
+Physical: Vital; skin humming with kinetic energy; reacts violently to silver tools.
+Emotional: Defiant; skeptical of the Conclave’s "order."
+Active obligations: Forced submission to the Binding Assessment -- UNPAID.
+Open loops: [Thorne & The Conclave] The specific nature of his "unbound" status and why Maros wants him specifically -- UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: His threads actively push back against silver-etching; he feels the threads as physical weight.
+Arc: 05% — Exposed his "unbound" nature to the Conclave’s most meticulous binder.
 Permanent: YES
 
+## Elder Maros
+Location: Observation Gallery
+Physical: Frail, relying on a cane; eyes sharp and predatory.
+Emotional: Calculating; views the friction between Liora and Thorne as a necessary catalyst.
+Active obligations: None.
+Open loops: [Maros & Liora] The demand for a "Master Thread" to stabilize the Loom -- UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: Knows Thorne’s true lineage and why his thread is "wild."
+Arc: 01% — Initiated the collision between the protagonist and the catalyst.
+
 # World State: ch-01
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- The Weaver’s Guild: RETRIBUTION — The apprentices and masters witness Lyra standing over the ruined Loom; she is instantly branded as the "Unraveler."
+- Elder Maros: Observed Liora's failure to instantly bind Thorne. Note: He is pleased by the difficulty, suggesting he expected it.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- The Weaver’s Guild: FRAGILE — The loss of a Master and the damage to the Great Loom has created a power vacuum and a desperate need for a scapegoat.
+- Threadbinders' Conclave: Paranoid/Dogmatic. Increasing focus on "purity of the weave" as frayback incidents rise. They view "unbound" souls as structural flaws.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Great Severing: ACTIVE — A localized reality-tear at the Guild’s heart. The threads connecting Oakhaven to the mainland have been physically and magically cut.
-- The Displacement: ACTIVE — People and places are beginning to "blur" at the edges where the threads have thinned.
+- The Great Binding Assessment: A mass ritual to re-tether the populist to the Great Loom.
+- The Looming Fray: A localized phenomenon where souls are becoming unmoored without explanation.
 
-## Technical Stats
-- Loom Integrity: 14% (Critical Failure).
-- Thread Tension: Zero (The resonance has gone silent).
-- Casualties: 1 (Master Elian), 400+ (Estimated population of Oakhaven).
+## Key Terminology & Mechanics
+- Frayback: Physical and spiritual recoil from a botched or resisted binding.
+- Silver-Etched Tools: The standard instruments of the Conclave; ineffective against Thorne.
+- Soul-Link: The dangerous process of a binder merging their senses with a subject.
+- Bind or Break: Liora’s personal mantra/prayer before high-stakes weaving.
+
+## Canonical Notes
+- The chamber is cold, heightening the tactile sensation of the threads.
+- Liora hides her trembling hand by braiding her hair, a tell for her anxiety.
+- Thorne’s threads are described as "mercurial" and "kinetic," lacking the typical color-coded intent of standard souls.