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+### 1. PROSE EVIDENCE
+
+*   **Quote (Early):** "The Sigil’s amber pulse faded to a steady thrum beneath her palm, the Stone Sanctum's ancient hush settling like dew after storm."
+    *   *Commentary:* This effectively establishes the "aftermath" atmosphere using the nature-based similes integral to the setting's aesthetic.
+*   **Quote (Mid):** "As he pulled her up, the Sigil on her palm grazed his skin, and a sharp spark of resonance jumped between them. Kaelen winced, his singed hair smelling of ozone and wood-smoke."
+    *   *Commentary:* This tactile moment reinforces the physical "cost" of the ritual and maintains the sensory focus on Kaelen’s recent combat.
+*   **Quote (Late):** "Thorne Blackroot stood amidst the scorched remains of his failed siege. The right side of his face was a ruin of blisters and char, a gift from the Sanctum’s defensive pulse."
+    *   *Commentary:* This provides necessary physical continuity for Thorne following the explosive events of the previous chapter.
+*   **Quote (Late):** "She felt like mist-shrouded reeds in a gale, her vision blurring."
+    *   *Commentary:* This phrase perfectly anchors Elara’s internal state to her "Elderwood" identity even in a moment of extreme weakness.
+
+---
+
+### 2. CHARACTER VOICE AUDIT
+
+#### **Elara Vance**
+*   **Line:** "I... I flow... no, I mean falter,"
+*   **Signature Vocabulary/Tics:** YES ("by the roots," water-metaphors).
+*   **Forbidden Patterns:** YES (Avoids slang/idioms).
+*   **Arc Consistency:** YES (Shows heavy depletion/bruised ribs state).
+
+#### **Kaelen**
+*   **Line:** "The Despoilers scattered when the pulse hit. I saw them thrown back into the Ash-Fields like dried husks."
+*   **Signature Vocabulary/Tics:** YES (Grim, protective focus).
+*   **Forbidden Patterns:** YES (No forbidden "modernist" speech).
+*   **Arc Consistency:** YES (Protective guardian of the Vessel).
+
+#### **Thorne Blackroot**
+*   **Line:** "Hark, you wretches! The Sanctum is a cage, not a fortress!"
+*   **Signature Vocabulary/Tics:** YES ("Hark," "the roots remember").
+*   **Forbidden Patterns:** YES (No apologies or doubt).
+*   **Arc Consistency:** YES (Vengeful and more attuned to the Blight’s thirst).
+
+---
+
+### 3. STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
+
+*   **The Depletion Mechanic:** The specific way Elara's speech breaks down into water metaphors ("The falls... they whisper of old rot") is a high-quality character trait that reinforces her power system's cost.
+*   **Visceral Antagonist Damage:** The description of Thorne’s injury ("right side of his face was a ruin of blisters and char") keeps the stakes high and the villain’s desperation grounded in physical pain.
+*   **Direct Conflict Interjection:** The transition from Thorne’s external monologue at the Overlook to his "voice... from the shadows of the outer corridor" creates a strong sense of immediate threat.
+
+---
+
+### 4. MUST-FIX -- CONTINUITY
+
+*   **ORIGINAL:** "The altar, once a slab of unyielding grey rock, had split down the center. From the fissure, a sprout of vibrant, emerald wood climbed toward the vaulted ceiling... It was a Root-Key."
+*   **PROBLEM:** In the [character-state] and [World State] RAG data, Elara has *already* "Accepted the Root-Key" and "The Root-Key has been claimed." The chapter text portrays them discovering/claiming it for the first time *after* the ritual.
+*   **FIX:** Adjust the scene to reflect that she already has the Key in her possession from the end of Ch 07. REWRITE: "Elara reached into her pack, her fingers brushing the warm wood of the Root-Key she had claimed moments before the Sanctum’s final pulse. It hummed in response to the fissure in the altar."
+
+---
+
+### 5. MUST-FIX -- CLARITY
+
+*   **ORIGINAL:** "The path to the Heart-Root... It's the only way to stop him. To stop all of it." (Following the revelation of the Council's treason).
+*   **PROBLEM:** The logic skip is too wide. Elara discovers the Council *caused* the blight, yet immediately decides the Heart-Root is the solution without explaining how a corrupted origin point can be "stopped" by the ritual they were tricked into.
+*   **FIX:** Add a line of internal realization. "The Council's poison must be drawn out at the source. The Heart-Root isn't just the destination; it’s the wound we have to close."
+
+---
+
+### 6. OPTIONAL SUGGESTIONS
+
+*   **Suggestion:** Clarify Thorne’s physical location. 
+    *   **Quote:** "Thorne Blackroot stood amidst the scorched remains of his failed siege... 'The forest devours the weak, little Vessel!' A voice boomed from the shadows of the outer corridor..." 
+    *   **Reasoning:** The text moves Thorne from the "Ash-Fields" (outside) to "the shadows of the outer corridor" (inside) very rapidly. Adding a line about him stepping through a breach in the walls would smooth this transition.
+
+---
+
+### 7. FORBIDDEN CHANGES / NON-GOALS
+
+*   **Do not "fix" Elara's stammering:** The line "I... I flow... no, I mean falter" is a mandatory imperfection signature for her character state (spiritually drained).
+*   **Do not modernize Thorne’s dialogue:** His use of "Hark" and "little Vessel" is intentional to his faction (Circle of Thorns) and role as a dramatic antagonist.
+*   **Do not remove the "Bruised Ribs" mentions:** This is a tracked physical state from [character-state] ch-08.
+
+---
+
+### 8. VERDICT
+
+**VERDICT: REVISE**
+**SCORE: 82**
+**Justification:** The chapter nails the character voice and atmosphere but contains a significant continuity error regarding the Root-Key (which RAG status says was already claimed) and a logic gap regarding the Council's revealed treason and the subsequent goal.
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