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@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Physical: Hemomantic exhaustion; silk gloves saturated with hidden blood; intern
 Emotional: Managed defiance; hyper-vigilant; performing a “regal correction” mask.
 Active obligations: Owes Damien Blackthorn a sanctioned heir (ch-01) — UNPAID; Owes Lord Reginald Thorne the Voss bloodline assets (ch-01) — UNPAID.
 Open loops: Survival of the wedding night (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED; Secrecy of hemomantic scarring from Reginald (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-01--unresolved): Bleeding beneath gloves; CARRIED (Ch-01--unresolved): severity of scarring hidden from Elders; CARRIED (Ch-01--unresolved): using her mother’s death as a template for survival.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-01--unresolved): Bleeding beneath gloves; CARRIED (ch-01--unresolved): Severity of scarring hidden from Elders; CARRIED (ch-01--unresolved): Using her mother’s death as a template for survival.
 Arc: 15% — Transitioned from POW to legally bound hostage-bride via the Blood Contract.
 Permanent: YES
 
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Physical: Predatory vitality; no injuries.
 Emotional: Cruelly intrigued; focused on dismantling Isabella’s composure.
 Active obligations: Owes Isabella protection/containment (ch-01) — UNPAID.
 Open loops: Testing the limits of Isabella's Hemomancy (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-01--unresolved): Suspects Isabella is hiding hemomantic bleeding/scarring from the Elders.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-01--unresolved): Suspects Isabella is hiding hemomantic bleeding/scarring from the Elders.
 Arc: 08% — Established as primary tormentor and shadow-husband.
 Permanent: YES
 
@@ -26,25 +26,25 @@ Physical: Aged, commanding; aura of acquisitive power.
 Emotional: Triumphant; viewing the Voss bloodline as a harvestable resource.
 Active obligations: Overseeing integration of Voss assets (ch-01) — UNPAID.
 Open loops: Monitoring the "unmarked vessel" clause (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-01--unresolved): Plans to discard/sacrifice Isabella once a viable heir is produced.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-01--unresolved): Plans to discard/sacrifice Isabella once a viable heir is produced.
 Arc: 05% — Architect of the Annexation.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## Elara Voss -- DECEASED (Prior)
-Established: Executed by the coven for breaking a blood oath.
-Legacy: Her death serves as Isabella's primary trauma and template for survival under duress.
+Established: Executed by the Nightbloom Coven for breaking a blood vow.
+Legacy: Her death serves as Isabella’s primary trauma and a template for survival through submission.
 
 # World State: ch-01
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- Blackthorn Court (Blackthorn Keep): DERISIVE — Witnessed Isabella’s forced submission; view her as a conquered trophy and biological asset.
+- Blackthorn Court (Blackthorn Keep): DERISIVE — Witnessed Isabella’s forced submission — View her as a conquered trophy and biological asset.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
 - Nightbloom Coven: SILENT — Traded Isabella for a fragile peace under the Treaty of Thorns.
-- Blackthorn Coven: IMPERIAL — View the marriage as the formal annexation of enemy assets.
+- Blackthorn Coven: IMPERIAL — View the marriage as the formal annexation of enemy assets and bloodlines.
 
 ## Active World Events
 - The Peace Vow: ACTIVE — Magical pulse enforcing non-aggression; punishes Isabella’s dissent with internal lashes.
-- The Binding Ritual: COMPLETE — Magical ceremony linking the Voss and Blackthorn lines.
-- The Treaty of Thorns: ACTIVE — Diplomatic framework mandating the union.
+- The Binding Ritual: COMPLETE — Magical ceremony linking the Voss and Blackthorn lines during the wedding.
+- The Treaty of Thorns: ACTIVE — Diplomatic framework mandating the union to end the inter-coven war.
 - The Annexation: COMPLETE — Formal absorption of Nightbloom assets via the marriage contract.
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