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 # Character State: ch-04
 
 ## Mira
-Location: Mira's Sanctum, Pyre Academy lower levels.
-Physical: Total mana exhaustion; scorched palms from kinetic overload; cold-shock from Paradox fusion.
-Emotional: GRIEF-SHATTERED — Kaelen is dead. Survivor's guilt. Her hatred of Dorian has inverted into dependency.
-Active obligations: Owes Dorian a response to his "anchor" offer (Ch04) — UNPAID. Ministry audit pending — ACTIVE.
-Open loops: Kaelen's death / Ministry investigation (Ch04) — ACTIVE. Impact on student body (Ch04) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: Knows she and Dorian's fusion power ("Paradox" magic) could have stopped the vortex sooner if she had not hesitated — GUILT.
-Arc: 45% — Her role as "sole protector" of the Pyre is shattered. She is no longer fighting the merger from pride but from grief.
-Permanent: YES (First successful Paradox fusion; Kaelen's death; rivalry with Dorian replaced by shared trauma).
+Location: The Ash-Quarry Arena, Pyre Academy grounds
+Physical: Severe mana-exhaustion; singed hair; bruising on ribs from kinetic percussion.
+Emotional: Devastated and vengeful; experiencing a total collapse of her professional rivalry.
+Active obligations: Owes Dorian a shared administrative plan (Ch01) -- UNPAID.
+Open loops: [Mira/Dorian] stabilizing the Starfall (Ch02) -- UNRESOLVED; [Mira/Ministry] explaining the Arena collapse (Ch04) -- UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch03—unresolved): Knows she felt a "wild joy" during the sensory bleed -- Dorian does not know.
+Arc: 40% -- Transitioned from protector of her school to a witness of its failure; priority shifted from institutional sovereignty to survival.
+Permanent: YES (Elemental signature permanently scarred by the feedback of Kaelen's death).
 
 ## Dorian Solas
-Location: Dorian's Sanctum, Pyre Academy (adjoining suite).
-Physical: Severe nerve-scorch on right hand; mercury-glass cuff cracked; mana-drained.
-Emotional: Clinical detachment broken — experiencing grief for Kaelen and guilt for hesitating on the Paradox cast. Discovering loss operates outside his optimization calculus.
-Active obligations: Initiate Full Safety Review of arena protocols — ACTIVE.
-Open loops: Ministry "Correction Clause" / Vane's investigation (Ch04) — ACTIVE. Frost-ward failure origin (suspected sabotage) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: Realizes the Starfall pocket timing was statistically improbable — suspects deliberate manipulation by Vane's faction.
-Arc: 50% — The first permanent crack in his emotional armor. Kaelen's death is making him question whether "optimal outcomes" justify the cost of people.
-Permanent: YES (Paradox fusion established; clinical detachment permanently compromised by grief).
+Location: The Ash-Quarry Arena, Pyre Academy grounds
+Physical: Frost-lock in left arm; metabolic collapse; right hand thermal scarring aggravated.
+Emotional: Traumatized and protective; absolute loss of his clinical distance.
+Active obligations: Owes Mira administrative cooperation (Ch01) -- UNPAID.
+Open loops: [Dorian/Mira] somatic threshold limits (Ch03) -- UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch03—unresolved): Realized he finds Mira's chaos "fascinating" -- Mira does not know.
+Arc: 45% -- Abandoned the "Absolute Zero" discipline to physically anchor Mira during a catastrophe.
+Permanent: YES (Right arm shows permanent silvery scarring from the Arena surge).
 
-## KAELEN — DECEASED (Ch04)
-Location: N/A — Killed in arena disaster.
-Physical: DEAD — Killed when the inverted Starfall vortex slammed him into the basalt wall. Mira's "Goodbye, Kaelen" closes the chapter.
-Arc: COMPLETE — Died protecting the academy he was sworn to defend.
-Permanent: YES — does not appear in any subsequent chapter.
+## Kaelen — DECEASED (Ch04)
+Established: Died while physically bracing the Arena's structural pylons against a Starfall-induced magma breach to allow the students to evacuate.
+Legacy: His death destroyed Mira's belief in the current Accord and forced the first true, desperate magical integration with Dorian.
 
-## Aric (Pyre Student Lead)
-Location: Arena medical area.
-Physical: Burns on arms; mana-exhausted.
-Emotional: Guilt — his mana surge triggered the chain reaction.
-Arc: 10%. Permanent: NO.
+## Aric
+Location: Infirmary Triage, Pyre Academy
+Physical: Minor burns; kinetic shock.
+Emotional: Guilt-ridden; looking to Mira for direction.
+Arc: 15% -- Lost his mentor (Kaelen); forced into a leadership role for the displaced Pyre students.
+Permanent: NO
 
-## Elara (Spire Student Lead)
-Location: Arena medical area.
-Physical: Mana-stripped; ice lattice trauma.
-Emotional: Survivor's guilt — owes the Pyre a debt.
-Arc: 10%. Permanent: NO.
+## Elara
+Location: Infirmary Triage, Pyre Academy
+Physical: No injuries.
+Emotional: Analytical and shaken; observing the somatic link between the Chancellors.
+Arc: 10% -- Realized that Spire logic cannot account for the volatility of the Starfall.
+Permanent: NO
 
 # World State: ch-04
 
+## NPC Memory
+- Pyre Students (Arena): TERRIFIED -- Witnessed Kaelen's death -- Blaming the Accord for the lack of structural wards.
+- Spire Initiates (Arena): SHOCKED -- Witnessed the failure of their stabilization lattices -- Questioning Dorian’s absolute control.
+
+## Faction Attitudes
+- Imperial Ministry: AGGRESSIVE -- View the Arena disaster as a failure of the Chancellors -- Likely to escalate to a full "Correction Clause."
+- The Pyre Faculty: RADICALIZED -- Kaelen’s death has turned their frustration into a demand for total secession or total war.
+
 ## Active World Events
-- Kaelen's Death: Ministry inquiry open.
-- The Accord: Under existential threat from Vane's dissolution petition.
-- The Paradox: Mira/Dorian Paradox magic witnessed — first in centuries.
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+- The Starfall Surge: PEAKING -- The Arena collapse was triggered by a localized tear in the Drift.
+- The Transition Period: HALTED -- All classes suspended; the Academy is under emergency martial law.
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