Sprint 56h: evolving character sheets + reliable injection

- Split project.rag.md into 6 focused RAG files (voice-signatures, magic-system,
  story-premise, factions, character-state, world-state)
- book_chapter.yml: PASS 0 STEP 5 replaced with live RAG character/world state check +
  location continuity validation; PASS 3 added for character+world state extraction after
  each chapter (rag_write -> character-state RAG + deliverable snapshot)
- chapter_polish.yml: PASS state extraction after final document (full-mode canonical state)
- book_outline.yml: added Factions section template with NPC memory model
- NEW character_update.yml: permanent arc change template (updates static char profile)
- chapter_review.yml: Sprint 56g voice authenticity fixes (fire/ice -> Body/Mind duality)

Co-authored-by: Copilot <223556219+Copilot@users.noreply.github.com>

templates/chapter_polish.yml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-name: chapter_polish
+name: chapter_polish
 description: >
   Iris applies the editorial consensus changes to the chapter. This is a bounded
   correction pass, not a rewrite. Only the listed changes are applied; everything
@@ -60,6 +60,21 @@ steps:
         - The authorial and character voice — do NOT normalize it
         - Intentional stylistic choices, even unusual ones
         - Passages the roundtable marked as STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
+        - ALL verbal tics, speech patterns, and idiosyncratic constructions for every character
+        - Interrupted or incomplete sentences that are character voice, not errors
+        - "Wrong" word choices that feel authentic to a character's way of thinking
+
+      VOICE DEFENDER PASS (do this BEFORE applying any changes):
+        If a Character Bible or Voice Signatures section exists in the project context:
+        1. For each named character: read one page of their dialogue with speaker tags removed.
+           Can you identify the character from voice alone? If NO — note it.
+        2. Is there at least ONE moment per scene where a character's voice is imperfect?
+           (A sentence that trails off. A wrong word. Something that doesn't quite land.)
+           If EVERY dialogue line is quotable and polished — that is a problem. Flag it.
+        3. If a character's voice signature is MISSING from a scene, you may add ONE instance
+           of an established signature item (from the Character Bible). Do NOT invent new ones.
+           Do NOT add signatures that are not already established.
+        This voice check is SECONDARY to MUST APPLY items, but it is never skipped.
 
       EXPLICITLY FORBIDDEN:
         - Do not improve any sentence for rhythm, lyricism, or polish unless a specific MUST APPLY
@@ -68,6 +83,10 @@ steps:
         - Do not expand any description or add sensory detail globally
         - Do not deepen emotional beats beyond what the text already carries
         - Do not add new metaphors, aphorisms, or quotable lines
+        - Do not make dialogue more elegant, more quotable, or more "writerly"
+        - Do not smooth sentence length variation — short choppy sentences and long rambling ones
+          are often character voice, not mistakes
+        - Do not remove verbal tics, repeated expressions, or idiosyncratic speech patterns
         - Do not reorder scenes or restructure the chapter
         - When both deletion and expansion would solve the same problem, prefer deletion
 
@@ -78,6 +97,25 @@ steps:
   - type: document
     filename: "Chapter_{chapter_number}_final"
 
+
+  - type: think
+    hint: |
+      PASS -- FULL MODE CHARACTER STATE EXTRACTION
+
+      The chapter has been polished and finalized. Extract the definitive character and world
+      state. This FULL MODE extraction overwrites any draft-mode state written earlier.
+
+      Use the same format as the draft-mode PASS 3 extraction (# Character State, # World State).
+      This is the CANONICAL state for this chapter -- it reflects the POLISHED final chapter.
+
+      CRITICAL: Keep total output under 3500 characters. Compact and precise.
+
+  - type: rag_write
+    asset_id: "character-state"
+    max_chars: 4000
+
+  - type: document
+    filename: "character-state-{chapter_ref}-final"
   - type: close
     rag_update: true
 
@@ -87,17 +125,20 @@ adjudication:
   deliverable_type: consumer
   criteria:
     changes_applied:
-      weight: 35
+      weight: 30
       description: "All MUST APPLY items from the consensus are addressed; no required changes were skipped"
     preservation:
-      weight: 30
+      weight: 25
       description: "Unaffected passages are preserved verbatim; voice and structure are intact"
-    word_count:
+    voice_authenticity:
       weight: 20
+      description: "Each character can be identified by voice alone without speaker tags; verbal tics and imperfect speech are preserved, not smoothed out; no character speaks in perfect polished bon mots throughout"
+    word_count:
+      weight: 15
       description: "Chapter meets the {chapter_target_words}-word minimum without artificial padding"
     clarity:
-      weight: 10
+      weight: 7
       description: "Corrected passages are clear and unambiguous"
     formatting:
-      weight: 5
+      weight: 3
       description: "Proper formatting, no artifacts"