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 # Character State: ch-07
 
 ## Sarah Miller
-Location: Miller Household, Hallway/Kitchen
-Physical: Severe bilateral tinnitus; bleeding from ears; neurological shock; temporary sensory deprivation.
-Emotional: Coldly tactical; hyper-focused through the haze of trauma.
+Location: Miller Household, Kitchen Floor
+Physical: Bilateral tinnitus; bleeding from ears; neurological shock; severe headache; hands trembling.
+Emotional: Hyper-focused; grimly vindicated; adrenaline-suppressed terror.
 Active obligations: Owes Elias Thorne a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
-Open loops: [Sarah] Digital recorder "ghost-looping" (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] The apparition’s vision of her own death (ch-06) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-02--unresolved): Carries 1927 occult chant data — Elias does not know; CARRIED (Ch-02--unresolved): knows the "Whispers" can manifest visually through electromagnetic interference — Elias does not know.
-Arc: 50% -- Has fully transitioned from victim to combatant, disregarding her own injuries to navigate the "Silence" as a tactical environment.
+Open loops: [Sarah] Digital recorder ghost-looping (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] Confronting the apparition’s vision of her death (ch-06) — UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-07--unresolved): 1927 occult chant data; CARRIED (Ch-07--unresolved): Knowledge that "Whispers" manifest as physical displacement.
+Arc: 55% -- Successfully weaponized acoustic feedback to repel the manifestation, transitioning from victim to engineer.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## Elias Thorne
-Location: Miller Household, Hallway (converged with Sarah)
-Physical: No physical injuries; ears ringing from the 110dB burst.
-Emotional: Vindicated but wary; protective.
+Location: Miller Household, Kitchen/Hallway
+Physical: Heightened sensory alertness; uninjured but physically drained by atmospheric pressure.
+Emotional: Intensely protective; wary; sensing the "Great Silence."
 Active obligations: Owes Sarah a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
-Open loops: [Elias] 1927 "Great Silence" signatures (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias] "Wet iron" scent origin (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-01--unresolved): Signal matches his pulse — Sarah does not know; CARRIED (Ch-02--unresolved): belief the signal is sentient/biological — Archive Admin does not know.
-Arc: 35% -- Has successfully breached the threshold of the manifestation site, joining the primary subject (Sarah) to form a unified front.
+Open loops: [Elias] 1927 "Great Silence" signatures (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias] "Wet iron" scent origin (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias/Sarah] The Presence in the sub-structure (ch-07) — UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-07--unresolved): Signal matches heartbeat/pulse; CARRIED (Ch-07--unresolved): Certainty the signal is sentient/biological.
+Arc: 40% -- Validated theories through Sarah’s survival, shifting from observer to active participant.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## Mark
 Location: Miller Household, Living Room
-Physical: Unharmed; catatonic/immobile due to neurological dampening of the Silence.
-Emotional: Blank; overwhelmed by the cognitive dissonance of the Terminal Burst.
+Physical: Immobile; hearing impairment from feedback spike.
+Emotional: Profound shock; stunned silence.
 Active obligations: None.
 Open loops: None.
 Known secrets: None.
-Arc: 05% -- Remains a static point of failure; his refusal to acknowledge the signal has rendered him a bystander.
+Arc: 05% -- Rendered a silent, static anchor by the physical evidence of the manifestation.
 Permanent: NO
 
 # World State: ch-07
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- The Whispers (Miller Residence): REGROUPING — After the feedback blast, the entities have shifted from auditory aggression to environmental manipulation (the oppressive Silence).
+- The Whispers (Crawlspace): REPELLED — Encountered 110dB localized feedback and retreated into the floorboards; now learning the interference pattern.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- Archive Administration: VIGILANT — Localized power grid failure at the Miller residence has flagged the location for "containment review."
+- Archive Administration: ALERT — Detected massive acoustic and EM surges at the Miller residence; Thorne and Miller are now high-risk variables.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Great Silence: The 110dB burst has ended, replaced by a vacuum-like acoustic void that absorbs normal ambient sound.
-- Grid Failure: The Miller residence and immediate neighbors are in a total blackout; the "scented" ozone and sulfur air persists.
+- The Great Silence: The 14Hz hum has stopped, replaced by a heavy, nauseating, pressurized silence.
+- Electronic Dead Zone: Miller residence electronics are destroyed by EM surge; only battery-operated gear remains functional.
+- Ozone Leak: Atmospheric thickness characterized by scents of ozone, scorched copper, and sulfur.
 
 ## Environmental Constants
-- Location: Miller Residence (Interior).
-- Atmosphere: Absolute darkness; scent of scorched wiring and wet iron.
-- Audio: Void-state (The Great Silence); high-frequency ringing for occupants.
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+- Location: Miller Residence (Post-Shock).
+- Lighting: Pitch black; limited to flashlights and glow-sticks.
+- Audio: Extreme high-frequency tinnitus; zero ambient environmental noise.
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