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 ## Queen Seraphine
 Location: The Great Hall, Castle Sangue
-Physical: Pulse is visible in her throat, synchronized with Aldric's; skin is warm and flushed with shared vitality.
-Emotional: Overwhelmed by the intrusive sensory input of Aldric’s internal landscape; fiercely protective.
+Physical: Vision is blurred by double-sensory input; hands are steady but she is physically leaning into Aldric for stability.
+Emotional: Transports of raw, shared power; a burgeoning, invasive intimacy with Aldric’s psyche.
 Active obligations: Owes Aldric Thorne the protection of the Thorne-Valerius borders (ch-03) — UNPAID.
-Open loops: [Seraphine & Aldric] The sensory merging of the Sanguine Vow (ch-09) — RESOLVED.
+Open loops: [Seraphine & Aldric] Navigating the telepathic bleed of the Sanguine Vow (ch-10) — UNRESOLVED.
 Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-03—unresolved): The Blight has breached the inner glass-line; the Lowen-Court is already compromised.
-Arc: 70% — Accepted the physical and emotional vulnerability of the bond to save the realm.
+Arc: 75% — Relinquished her singular autonomy to become a terminal for the collective vitality of two kingdoms.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## King Aldric
 Location: The Great Hall, Castle Sangue
-Physical: Breathing is labored but steady; the silver scars on his arm throb with crimson light.
-Emotional: Resigned to the loss of privacy; experiencing a surge of alien maternal instincts from Seraphine.
+Physical: Silver scars on his arm are cauterized by crimson light; posture is rigid, anchoring Seraphine’s weight.
+Emotional: Vulnerable and exposed; experiencing the "predatory" stillness of Seraphine’s internal shadow.
 Active obligations: None.
-Open loops: [Aldric & Seraphine] The sensory merging of the Sanguine Vow (ch-09) — RESOLVED.
+Open loops: [Aldric & Seraphine] Managing the tactile synchronization of their heartbeats (ch-10) — UNRESOLVED.
 Known secrets: None.
-Arc: 65% — Forfeited his isolation to become a dual-anchor for the kingdom’s survival.
+Arc: 70% — Accepted the role of a living battery, tethering his life force to the Valerius throne to stabilize the realm.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## High Priestess Malcorra
 Location: The Great Hall, Castle Sangue
-Physical: Fingers trembling slightly as she grips her thurible; eyes wide with religious fervor.
-Emotional: Ecstatic; her worldview has been validated by the successful manifestation of the Vow.
+Physical: Skin is pale; eyes are bloodshot from the psychic backlash of witnessing the Vow's completion.
+Emotional: Triumphant yet wary; she senses the "unscripted" nature of the sovereigns' personal connection.
 Active obligations: None.
-Open loops: [Malcorra & Seraphine] The theological purity of the bond vs. its raw execution (ch-09) — RESOLVED.
+Open loops: [Malcorra & The Sovereigns] The theological containment of the new bond (ch-10) — UNRESOLVED.
 Known secrets: None.
-Arc: 40% — Transitioned from orchestrator to witness of a power that exceeds her liturgical scripts.
+Arc: 45% — Witnessed the manifestation of a power that bypassed her liturgical control, forcing a shift in her oversight strategy.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## High Provost Vane — DECEASED (ch-04)
 Established: Executed by Queen Seraphine via hemomantic heart-stop after attempting to poison King Aldric.
-Legacy: His absence allowed the High Priestess to finalize the Sanguine Vow without political opposition.
+Legacy: His absence removed the final political barrier to the Sanguine Vow, allowing for the total unification of the bloodlines.
 
 # World State: ch-10
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- The Lowen-Court (Castle Sangue): REVERENT — Witnessed the shared heartbeat of the sovereigns; fear of the Blight is temporarily eclipsed by the spectacle of the Vow.
+- The Lowen-Court Nobility (Castle Sangue): AWE-STRUCK — Witnessed the literal merging of two royal auras — Increased compliance with the new dual-regime.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- The Crimson Cathedral: ZEALOUS — The successful ritual is viewed as a divine mandate to expand their influence into the Thorne territories.
-- The Thorne Loyalists: CONFLICTED — Relieved by the King's health but terrified of the "bloody symmetry" now linking him to the Valerius Queen.
+- The Crimson Cathedral: VIGILANT — They view the successful Vow as their greatest achievement but fear the sovereigns might now be more powerful than the Church.
+- The Thorne Loyalists: SUBMISSIVE — The visible restoration of Aldric’s strength has silenced immediate dissent regarding the Valerius alliance.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Sanguine Sovereignty: PERMANENT — The bio-magical link is successfully forged, creating a dual-consciousness that anchors the kingdom's ley lines.
-- The Oakhaven Breach: ESCALATING — News of the eastern border's collapse arrives mid-ceremony, demanding immediate deployment of the unified sovereigns.
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+- The New Seal: PERMANENT — The Thorne and Valerius bloodlines are now a single magical circuit, stabilizing the immediate ley lines around the capital.
+- The Oakhaven Breach: CRITICAL — Reports arrive that the Blight has consumed the eastern garrison; the unified sovereigns must march or lose the border.
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