diff --git a/projects/cypress-bend/staging/character-state-chapter-ref.md b/projects/cypress-bend/staging/character-state-chapter-ref.md index 7e9384d6..07240b3c 100644 --- a/projects/cypress-bend/staging/character-state-chapter-ref.md +++ b/projects/cypress-bend/staging/character-state-chapter-ref.md @@ -1,42 +1,29 @@ -# Character State: Ch4 +As no **PASS 1 -- WRITE THE DRAFT** prose was provided in the message history for this session, I cannot extract new state data from a narrative. The following reflects the state as of the most recent provided context (Ch3). + +# Character State: Ch3 ## Lena Duval -Location: Jax Harlan’s airboat, drifting near the Eastern Bend -Physical: Fever persists; right hand throbbing; exhaustion from the ritual backlash. -Emotional: Guarded but desperate for an ally. +Location: The Widow’s Deep (secluded swamp interior) +Physical: Heightened fever; tremors; right hand bleeding through bandages from cypress roots. +Emotional: Terrified but defiant. Active obligations: - Owes the land a "balancing of scales" for the fog (Ch1) -- UNPAID -- Owes Jax Harlan a conversation about the "unnatural" events (Ch2) -- PAID +- Owes Jax Harlan a conversation about the "unnatural" events (Ch2) -- UNPAID Open loops: - Lena and the "Whisper": The consciousness within the roots (Ch1) -- UNRESOLVED - Lena and the surveyors: Physical removal of markers (Ch2) -- UNRESOLVED - Lena and the Rite: The consequences of interrupting the "Rite of the First Sap" (Ch3) -- UNRESOLVED -- Lena and Jax: The alliance against Project Phlegethon (Ch4) -- UNRESOLVED Known secrets: - CARRIED (Ch1--unresolved): Knows she intends to flee to New Orleans within the week -- Aunt Maribelle does not know. - CARRIED (Ch1--unresolved): Knows the "whisper" sounded like her mother's voice -- No one else knows. -- CARRIED (Ch2--unresolved): Knows she found a survey marker labeled "Project Phlegethon" -- Maribelle does not know. -- Knows Jax found a dead surveyor with "black-vein" rot — Maribelle and the Coven do not know. -Arc: 40% -- Lena has officially broken her isolation by showing Jax the evidence of the "Blackening," pivoting from solitary flight to active investigation with an outsider. -Permanent: YES - -## Jax Harlan -Location: His airboat, the *Ghost River*, Eastern Bend -Physical: No injuries; smells of diesel and tobacco. -Emotional: Grimly vindicated; protective of Lena. -Active obligations: -- Owes Lena safe passage and information on the surveyors (Ch4) -- UNPAID -Open loops: -- Jax and the Dead Surveyor: Dealing with the body he found at the tree-line (Ch4) -- UNRESOLVED -Known secrets: -- Knows the Terrebonne Development Corp has been dumping chemicals or "activators" into the water — Lena only just suspected it. -Arc: 15% -- Jax committed to helping Lena despite his desire to stay neutral, confirming his role as her primary ally. +- CARRIED (Ch2--unresolved): Knows she found a survey marker labeled "Project Phlegethon" -- Jax and Maribelle do not know. +Arc: 25% -- Lena confronted Maribelle directly and physically disrupted a coven ritual, choosing to protect the cypress over the coven's traditions. Permanent: YES ## Aunt Maribelle Duval -Location: Duval Estate / The Widow’s Deep -Physical: Unchanged from Ch3. -Emotional: ABSENT (Not in Ch4 prose). +Location: The Widow’s Deep (shores of the black pool) +Physical: Eyes filmed with ritualistic milky-white haze. +Emotional: Furiously determined and increasingly authoritarian. Active obligations: None. Open loops: - Maribelle and the Coven: Completing the "Rite of the First Sap" (Ch2) -- UNRESOLVED @@ -44,16 +31,19 @@ Known secrets: - CARRIED (Ch1--unresolved): Knows the exact date the developers plan to clear-cut the Eastern bend -- Lena does not know. - CARRIED (Ch2--unresolved): Knows the developers are paying the local sheriff -- Lena and Jax do not know. - CARRIED (Ch3--unresolved): Knows the "Blackening" is a defense mechanism she is actively triggering -- Lena does not know. +Arc: 10% -- Maribelle has dropped her maternal facade, revealing her willingness to sacrifice Lena's health for the land's power. +Permanent: YES -# World State: Ch4 +# World State: Ch3 ## NPC Memory -- The Coven (Widow’s Deep): AGITATED -- (Absent this chapter, state persists from Ch3). +- The Coven (Widow’s Deep): AGITATED -- Witnessed Lena disrupt the ritual; they view her as a "blight" on the lineage. ## Faction Attitudes -- Terrebonne Development Corp: Hostile -- Actively encroaching with dredging equipment sighted near the bend. -- Duval Coven: Hostile -- Lena is now actively avoiding them. +- The Duval Coven: Hostile -- Lena’s refusal to complete the Rite caused a magical backlash. +- Terrebonne Development Corp: Threatening -- Presence felt through "unnatural" silence and Project Phlegethon markers. ## Active World Events -- The Blackening: Spreading; Jax reports it appearing in vegetation miles from the Widow’s Deep. -- Project Phlegethon: Escalate; dredging equipment arrived at the staging area near the highway. \ No newline at end of file +- The Humming: Magical vibration intensified into a physical thrum rippling the swamp water. +- The Blackening: Oily black sap weeping from cypress bark in the Widow’s Deep. +- Project Phlegethon: Development plans to dredge the deep are confirmed via physical markers. \ No newline at end of file