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 ## Liora Voss
 - **Location**: The Loom Floor, slumped against the primary drive-spindle.
-- **Physical**: Transitioning into "Frayback." Vision is sepia-mottled; left palm leaks obsidian ink that pulses in sync with Thorne’s heartbeat. Indigo brand-glow has reached her elbow.
-- **Emotional**: High-functioning dissociation. The "fixed" calm of a weaver facing a terminal snag.
-- **Active Obligations**: Stabilize the Loom for Maros (UNPAID); conceal the "rot" and her "Stainer" status from Junior Binders (UNPAID).
-- **Open Loops**: Resonance with Thorne allows sensory bleed; she is currently "feeling" his predatory curiosity.
-- **Arc**: 20% — Choosing to use the "Dirty Circuit" rather than fix it. Embracing the heresy of the bond to survive the Loom's failure.
+- **Physical**: Frayback advancing; left palm leaking obsidian ink; indigo brand extended to the elbow; vision sepia-mottled and tunneling.
+- **Emotional**: High-functioning dissociation; terminal calm born of necessity.
+- **Active Obligations**: Stabilize the Loom for Maros (UNPAID); Conceal "Stainer" status from surviving Binders (UNPAID).
+- **Open Loops**: Sensory bleed with Thorne (UNRESOLVED); The "Dirty Circuit" feedback loop (UNRESOLVED).
+- **Arc**: 20% — Has embraced the "Dirty Circuit" heresy and the unsanctified bond as a survival mechanism.
 
-## Thorne Quill (The Thirteenth Strand)
+## Thorne Quill
 - **Location**: Center of the Weaving Chamber, strapped to the lead-lined restraint chair.
-- **Physical**: Skin stained with Liora’s ink-blood; chest vibrating with the Loom's "dead-tone." He is acting as a grounding rod, absorbing Liora’s excess frayback.
-- **Emotional**: Predatory and observant. He is testing the mental boundaries of the link, no longer a passive prisoner.
-- **Open Loops**: Confirmed as the Thirteenth Strand—an un-categorizable variable that bypasses Conclave law.
-- **Arc**: 20% — Moving from victim to active manipulator of the unsanctified link.
+- **Physical**: Skin stained with Liora’s ink-blood; internal vibration synchronized with the Loom’s dead-tone; serving as a literal grounding rod.
+- **Emotional**: Predatory and observant; actively testing the mental boundaries of the link.
+- **Active Obligations**: Act as a grounding rod for Liora (PAID).
+- **Open Loops**: Thirteenth Strand variable bypassing Conclave laws (UNRESOLVED).
+- **Arc**: 20% — Shifted from passive prisoner to active manipulator of the soul-link.
 
 ## Elder Maros
-- **Location**: High Observation Gallery.
-- **Physical**: Leaning on a bone-white cane, watching the "ink-bleed" with clinical interest.
-- **Emotional**: Calculating opportunist. 
-- **Active Obligations**: Protecting Liora from immediate execution by Purists to study the anomaly (UNPAID).
-- **Known Secrets**: He views the Loom’s total decay as inevitable and sees Liora’s "stain" as the only viable bypass.
-- **Arc**: 15% — Formally commits to weaponizing heresy.
+- **Location**: High Observation Gallery, Loom Chamber.
+- **Physical**: Stooped, dependent on a bone-white cane.
+- **Emotional**: Calculating; pragmatically opportunistic.
+- **Known Secrets**: Views the Loom’s total decay as an inevitable catalyst for new power.
+- **Arc**: 15% — Formally committed to using heresy (the "Stain") as a functional bypass for Loom failure.
 
 # World State: ch-03
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- **Junior Binders**: TERRIFIED. They have witnessed the "Stain" and Liora’s black-thread jump. They view her as a "Stainer"—a source of spiritual contagion.
-- **Archival Guards**: HOSTILE. Weapons trained on the subjects; awaiting the order to terminate if the Indigo Contagion spreads.
+- **Junior Binders**: TERRIFIED. They witnessed Liora’s black-thread jump and ink-bleed; they treat her as a source of spiritual contagion.
+- **Archival Guards**: HOSTILE. Prepared to terminate Liora and Thorne on Maros's command or if the Indigo Contagion breaches the perimeter.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- **Conclave Purists**: Vengeful. The Dirty Circuit is seen as a theological and structural infection that must be excised.
-- **Conclave Opportunists (Maros)**: Pragmatic. The failing Loom justifies the use of a "Dirty Circuit."
+- **Conclave Purists**: Vengeful. The Dirty Circuit is viewed as a theological infection.
+- **Conclave Opportunists (Maros)**: Pragmatic. View the Loom’s failure as justification for forbidden weaving.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- **The Dirty Circuit**: An established, unsanctified link bypassing all safety dampeners. It facilitates a rapid, mutual soul-fray between Liora and Thorne.
-- **Loom Decay**: The Great Loom is emitting a "dead-tone" frequency. The structural integrity of the Binding Thread is failing at the core.
-- **Indigo Contagion**: The reactive force of the brand is spreading physically up Liora’s arm, darkening in response to Thorne’s proximity and the Loom's instability.
-- **Terminus Frequency**: The "dead-tone" is beginning to affect the equilibrium of everyone in the Chamber, causing nausea and vertigo in non-binders.
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+- **The Dirty Circuit**: An unsanctified link bypassing all safety dampeners; it facilitates mutual soul-fray between Liora and Thorne.
+- **Loom Decay**: Currently generating a "dead-tone" frequency; structural integrity of the Binding Thread is at critical failure.
+- **Indigo Contagion**: A reactive force of the brand spreading physically in response to Thorne’s presence and Loom instability.
+- **Terminus Frequency**: A local nausea-inducing vibration affecting all non-binders in the immediate chamber.
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