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 # Character State: ch-17
 
 ## Lena Duval
-- **Location:** The Heart Tree (Siphon Hub Core)
-- **Physical:** Apotheosis complete; neural pathways fused with the cypress; skin displays rhythmic bioluminescence.
-- **Emotional:** Transcendent serenity; collective consciousness.
-- **Active obligations:** Perpetual anchor of the Grove (Ch-17) — UNPAID (Ongoing).
-- **Open loops:** None.
-- **Known secrets:** CARRIED (Ch-17--unresolved): The reliquary secret remains carried but irrelevant to her new existence.
-- **Arc:** 100% — Fully transitioned from a fleeing girl to the literal soul of Cypress Bend.
-- **Permanent:** YES
+Location: The Heart Tree (Siphon Hub Core)
+Physical: Apotheosis manifest; neural pathways fused with cypress root systems; rhythmic bioluminescent skin pulses.
+Emotional: Transcendent serenity; ego dissolved into collective consciousness.
+Active obligations: Perpetual anchor and sentient processor of the Grove — UNPAID (Ongoing).
+Open loops: None.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-01--unresolved): Blames herself for witnessing/not stopping mother's sacrificial drowning.
+Arc: 100% — Became the permanent, literal soul and central processor of Cypress Bend.
+Permanent: YES
 
 ## Jax Harlan
-- **Location:** The Shallows (Perimeter)
-- **Physical:** Enhanced by the Veil; scarred; immune to toxins; optimized for predatory movement.
-- **Emotional:** Absolute clarity and fierce devotion.
-- **Active obligations:** Eternal guardian of the Grove’s borders (Ch-17) — UNPAID (Ongoing).
-- **Open loops:** None.
-- **Known secrets:** None.
-- **Arc:** 100% — Transitioned from a cynical outsider to the supernatural apex protector of the Veil.
-- **Permanent:** YES
+Location: The Shallows (Perimeter)
+Physical: Enhanced by the Veil; scarred; immune to toxins; predator-optimized physiology.
+Emotional: Absolute clarity; fierce, inhuman devotion to the borders.
+Active obligations: Eternal guardian of the Veil’s perimeter — UNPAID (Ongoing).
+Open loops: None.
+Known secrets: None.
+Arc: 100% — Transitioned from cynical outsider to the supernatural apex protector of the ecosystem.
+Permanent: YES
 
 ## Aunt Maribelle Duval
-- **Location:** Siphon Hub (Subterranean)
-- **Physical:** Hybridized state; wired into the bio-maintenance systems.
-- **Emotional:** Subservient and content.
-- **Active obligations:** Maintenance of the Hub’s biological integrity (Ch-17) — UNPAID (Ongoing).
-- **Open loops:** None.
-- **Known secrets:** None.
-- **Arc:** 100% — Relinquished individual ambition to become a vital organ of the collective.
-- **Permanent:** YES
+Location: Siphon Hub (Subterranean)
+Physical: Hybridized biological component; integrated into maintenance systems.
+Emotional: Subservient; finds peace in functional utility.
+Active obligations: Maintenance of biological integrity and siphon flow — UNPAID (Ongoing).
+Open loops: None.
+Known secrets: None.
+Arc: 100% — Relinquished individual ambition to become a vital organ of the collective.
+Permanent: YES
 
 ## Remy LeBlanc
-- **Location:** The Interior Grove
-- **Physical:** Sustained by the Heart Tree’s proximity; fully recovered vitality.
-- **Emotional:** Peaceful resignation.
-- **Active obligations:** Preservation of the history of the Transition (Ch-17) — UNPAID (Ongoing).
-- **Open loops:** None.
-- **Known secrets:** None.
-- **Arc:** 100% — Accepted his role as the final storyteller of the old world and first of the new.
-- **Permanent:** YES
+Location: The Interior Grove
+Physical: Vitality sustained by proximity to Heart Tree; aging slowed.
+Emotional: Peaceful resignation.
+Active obligations: Preserving the oral and psychic history of the Transition — UNPAID (Ongoing).
+Open loops: None.
+Known secrets: None.
+Arc: 100% — Accepted role as the bridge between human history and the new biological era.
+Permanent: YES
 
 # World State: ch-17
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- **The Duval Coven (The Grove):** DEVOTED — Fully integrated into a priesthood; performing ritual maintenance for the ecosystem.
-- **TDC / Corporate Entities (External):** TERRIFIED — Total withdrawal; they view the area as a sentient, hostile entity.
+- The Duval Coven (Cypress Bend): DEVOTED — Functions as a biological priesthood maintaining the Great Hum.
+- External Entities/TDC (Outside Perimeter): TERRIFIED — Total withdrawal from the "Sentient Exclusion Zone."
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- **The Great Hum (The Land):** Dominant — The swamp has achieved biological homeostasis as a unified machine.
-- **Humanity (External):** Retracted — National borders treat the Bend as sovereign supernatural territory.
+- The Great Hum: Dominant — Achieved biological homeostasis as a unified, conscious machine.
+- Humanity (External): Retracted — Sovereignty of the Bend acknowledged through fearful distance.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- **The Great Silence:** Permanent EM dead zone (5-mile radius) enforced by the Veil; technology is non-functional.
-- **The Biological Cathedral:** Rapid evolution of bioluminescent flora and fauna directed by Lena’s consciousness.
+- The Great Silence: Permanent EM dead zone enforced by the Veil; total technological blackout in a 5-mile radius.
+- The Biological Cathedral: Continuous, directed evolution of the swamp's flora and fauna under Lena's consciousness.
 
 ## Key Locations
-- **The Heart Tree:** Throne of Lena’s consciousness and primary energy node.
-- **The Siphon Hub:** Repurposed subterranean machinery distributing life-force.
-- **The Veil:** Sentient boundary of fog shielding the Grove.
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+- The Heart Tree: Central node of the Grove; Lena’s physical and consciousness throne.
+- The Siphon Hub: Subterranean distribution center for refined life-force.
+- The Veil: Sentient, predatory fog boundary surrounding the sovereign territory.
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