diff --git a/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-10.md b/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-10.md index 602cfce..81ab100 100644 --- a/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-10.md +++ b/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-10.md @@ -112,4 +112,10 @@ The first touch of his lips wasn't a clash. It wasn't fire or ice. It was a ques The rivalry didn't disappear; it transformed. Every sharp word we’d ever exchanged, every academic slight, every territorial dispute fueled the fire of the kiss. It was a different kind of Weave—one made of skin and breath and the desperate, late-night realization that we were no longer enemies. -I had spent a decade building a wall of flame to keep the world out, but as Dorian’s fingers traced the hollow of my throat, I realized I was finally willing to let the fire go out if it meant staying in the cold with him. \ No newline at end of file +I had spent a decade building a wall of flame to keep the world out, but as Dorian’s fingers traced the hollow of my throat, I realized I was finally willing to let the fire go out if it meant staying in the cold with him. + +--- +## AUTHOR DIRECTION - BUTTERFLY EFFECT CASCADE (Ch10) +Kaelen is dead (died Ch04). Do NOT write him alive. +- The Starfall Equilibrium: with Kaelen gone, the Pyre has no anchor. Aric and Elara must be that anchor together. +- If 'First Regent' is established here, it is NOT Kaelen. Consider Aric and Elara as joint student wardens.