diff --git a/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-12.md b/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-12.md index a9c6168..f5691f2 100644 --- a/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-12.md +++ b/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-12.md @@ -78,3 +78,9 @@ Kaelen is dead (died Ch04). Do NOT write him alive. Do NOT name him First Regent - The Grey Era: Aric (fire) and Elara (ice) are appointed joint First Wardens of the new unified Academy. - The epilogue should honor Kaelen's memory without sentimentality: something permanent was named after him. A ward. A courtyard. The arena memorial. - The final image of Mira looking at the arena should evoke Kaelen without naming him directly. + +## BUTTERFLY CASCADE NOTE (Ch12) +- The final chapter resolves BOTH butterfly threads: Kaelen's legacy AND Dorian's family secret. +- Dorian must speak Aldric Solas's name aloud, perhaps in a naming of the memorial: a ward, a courtyard, or the arena is named after Kaelen — and Dorian privately names something for Aldric. +- Mira's final look at Dorian knows he kept the secret to protect her. She has forgiven him. But she understands why. +- 'The Accord was never about the schools' — it was about two people who stopped being afraid of what they could destroy together. \ No newline at end of file