From 7e85bfc9fab90a26e1931241e5005d28579752cb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Nova_2761 Date: Tue, 24 Mar 2026 04:47:55 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] staging: Chapter_1_draft.md task=17333193-995b-4162-aaab-4f52119832f9 --- the-starfall-accord/staging/Chapter_1_draft.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/the-starfall-accord/staging/Chapter_1_draft.md b/the-starfall-accord/staging/Chapter_1_draft.md index 6a104b2..044811b 100644 --- a/the-starfall-accord/staging/Chapter_1_draft.md +++ b/the-starfall-accord/staging/Chapter_1_draft.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ ## Mira Location: The Obsidian Bridge (Center Span), Great Crevasse boundary -Physical: Severe magical exhaustion; bleeding right palm (self-inflicted ritual cut); cold-shock from proximity to Dorian. +Physical: Severe magical exhaustion; bleeding right palm (ritual cut); cold-shock from Dorian's proximity. Emotional: Violated and overwhelmed; reeling from the sensory intrusion of the tether. Active obligations: Owes Dorian administrative cooperation per the Accord (Ch01) — UNPAID. Open loops: Mira/Dorian "Binary Star" stability (Ch01) — UNRESOLVED; Mira/The Emperor's true intent for the tether (Ch01) — UNRESOLVED. @@ -24,9 +24,9 @@ Permanent: YES (Integrated into the "Starfall Union" nexus; mana-pool now fluctu Location: Chancellor’s Sanctum, Pyre Academy Physical: No injuries; singed robes from Mira’s aura. Emotional: Apprehensive and protective; fears the loss of Pyre sovereignty. -Active obligations: Owes Mira a status report on the faculty's reaction to the Decree (Ch01) — UNPAID. +Active obligations: Owes Mira a status report on faculty reaction to the Decree (Ch01) — UNPAID. Open loops: Kaelen/Spire Proctors' first contact (Ch01) — UNRESOLVED. -Known secrets: Saw the purple "violet-white" fire in Mira's hearth — Dorian does not know how unstable her magic became. +Known secrets: Saw the violet-white fire in Mira's hearth — Dorian does not know how unstable her magic became. Arc: 05% — Shifted from internal advisor to a wartime administrator for a merging institution. Permanent: NO