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 # Character State: ch-03
 
 ## Liora Voss
-- **Location:** The Loom floor, kneeling beneath the primary drive-spindle.
-- **Physical:** Massive sensory bleed; left palm brand is leaking "ink" into her veins; vision flickering into monochrome "frayback."
-- **Emotional:** Paradoxically calm through dissociation; terrified of the "Dirty Circuit."
-- **Active obligations:** Owes Elder Maros a stabilized Loom (ch-03) -- UNPAID.
-- **Open loops:** Liora and Thorne bond resonance (ch-03) -- UNRESOLVED.
-- **Known secrets:** CARRIED (ch-03--unresolved): knows the Loom's internal machinery is rotting -- the Conclave Purists.
-- **Arc:** 20% -- She has accepted the "Dirty Circuit" as her only means of survival, moving from accidental binder to active heretic.
-- **Permanent:** YES
+Location: The Loom Floor, slumped against the primary drive-spindle.
+Physical: "Frayback" in effect; sepia-toned vision; left palm leaking obsidian ink pulsing with Thorne’s heartbeat.
+Emotional: Dissociative calm; jagged terror masked by survival necessity.
+Active obligations: Must stabilize the Loom for Maros (ch-03) -- UNPAID; conceal the "rot" from Junior Binders (ch-03) -- UNPAID.
+Open loops: Resonance with Thorne allows sensory bleed and memory sharing (ch-03) -- UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-03--unresolved): Has seen structural rot in the Loom’s core—the "eternal" machine is failing.
+Arc: 20% -- Transitioning from accidental binder to active heretic by choosing to use rather than fix the bond.
+Permanent: YES
 
 ## Thorne Quill
-- **Location:** Lead-lined restraint chair, center of the Weaving Chamber.
-- **Physical:** Chest vibrating with the Loom's dead-tone; skin stained with Liora’s blood; experiencing Liora's sensory "frayback."
-- **Emotional:** Cynical but intrigued; actively testing the boundaries of the mental link.
-- **Active obligations:** Serving as a metaphysical battery for Liora (ch-03) -- UNPAID.
-- **Open loops:** Thorne’s nature as the Thirteenth Strand (ch-03) -- UNRESOLVED.
-- **Known secrets:** Knows Liora’s specific memory of her parents' unbinding through the bleed -- Liora (she doesn't know he saw it).
-- **Arc:** 20% -- Transitions from a passive prisoner to an active manipulator of the bond.
-- **Permanent:** YES
+Location: Center of the Weaving Chamber, strapped to the lead-lined restraint chair.
+Physical: Skin stained with Liora’s ink-blood; chest vibrating with the Loom's "dead-tone"; experiencing Liora's exhaustion.
+Emotional: Predatorily observant; testing the mental boundaries of the link.
+Active obligations: Acting as a grounding rod for Liora’s power (ch-03) -- UNPAID.
+Open loops: Status as the "Thirteenth Strand"—an un-categorizable variable (ch-03) -- UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-03--unresolved): Witnessed Liora’s memory of her parents’ unbinding; knows her need to "fix" threads is her flaw.
+Arc: 20% -- Moving from passive prisoner to an active manipulator of the Dirty Circuit.
+Permanent: YES
 
 ## Elder Maros
-- **Location:** High Observation Gallery.
-- **Physical:** Leaning on a bone-white cane; eyes tracked by the glow of the brand.
-- **Emotional:** Calculating and opportunistic; predatory patience.
-- **Active obligations:** Must protect Liora from the Arch-Binders (ch-03) -- UNPAID.
-- **Open loops:** Purist vs. Opportunist faction conflict over the bond (ch-03) -- UNRESOLVED.
-- **Known secrets:** Secretly monitoring the "rot" at the Loom’s center -- The general public.
-- **Arc:** 15% -- Commits to weaponizing Liora’s heresy rather than punishing it.
-- **Permanent:** NO
+Location: High Observation Gallery, overlooking the Loom Floor.
+Physical: Leaning heavily on a bone-white cane; eyes reflecting indigo brand-glow.
+Emotional: Calculating; opportunistic.
+Active obligations: Protecting Liora from Purist execution (ch-03) -- UNPAID.
+Open loops: Weaponizing Liora’s heresy against Conclave rivals (ch-03) -- UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-03--unresolved): Views the decay of the Loom as inevitable and the Dirty Circuit as a necessary bypass.
+Arc: 15% -- Commits to weaponizing heresy rather than purging it.
+Permanent: YES
 
 # World State: ch-03
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- **Junior Binders (The Loom Floor):** Fearful/Hostile -- Witnessed Liora’s brand ignite -- Marking her as "Stained."
-- **Archival Guards (Perimeter):** Aggressive -- Standing by for execution orders -- They view Liora as a containment breach.
+- Junior Binders (Loom Floor): TERRIFIED -- Saw Liora’s thread turn black and jump to Thorne -- Now view her as a "Stainer."
+- Archival Guards (Chamber Perimeter): HOSTILE -- Weapons drawn on Gallery orders -- Ready to terminate the subjects.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- **The Conclave (Purists):** Hostile -- View the brand as an unforgivable rot that must be excised.
-- **The Conclave (Opportunists):** Curious -- Led by Maros, they see a way to bypass the Loom’s decay.
+- Conclave Purists: Vengeful -- Perceive the Dirty Circuit as a contagion requiring immediate excision.
+- Conclave Opportunists (Maros): Pragmatic -- View the failing Loom as a reason to experiment with Liora’s stain.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- **The Dirty Circuit:** An unsanctified, volatile soul-link between Liora and Thorne that bypasses all safety dampeners.
-- **Loom Decay:** The Great Loom is emitting a "dead-tone," indicating structural metaphysical failure.
-- **Indigo Contagion:** The brand on Liora's hand is spreading, reacting violently to Thorne's proximity.
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+- The Dirty Circuit: Established unsanctified link bypassing safety dampeners; causes rapid soul-fraying.
+- Loom Decay: The Great Loom is emitting a "dead-tone" frequency, signaling structural failure of the Binding Thread.
+- Indigo Contagion: The brand is spreading toward Liora’s elbow, reacting violently to Thorne's proximity.
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