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+# Character State: ch-16 [POLISHED]
+
+## Isabella Voss
+**Location:** Whispering Peaks, mountain pass overlook  
+**Physical:** Deep exhaustion; forearm scarring from oath-breaking; phantom ringing in right ear (stress manifestation).  
+**Emotional:** Introspective; cautiously hopeful; bearing leadership's weight with quiet resolve.  
+**Active obligations:**
+- Protect Nightbloom survivors (ch-15) -- ACTIVE
+- Life-debt to Damien (ch-15) -- UNPAID
+**Open loops:**
+- Establishing permanent Peak Sanctuary settlement (ch-16) -- UNRESOLVED
+- Evading Elder Thorne's ritualistic blood-tracking pursuit (ch-16) -- UNRESOLVED
+**Known secrets:**
+- Holds collective consciousness in marrow (ch-15) -- Council unaware; strengthens her hemomancy uniquely as The Wane progresses
+**Arc:** 98% -- Transitioned her people from hunted caravan to defensive foothold; reclaimed agency through self-chosen vows.  
+**Status:** PERMANENT
+
+## Damien Blackthorn
+**Location:** Whispering Peaks, mountain pass overlook  
+**Physical:** Recovering from abdominal wounds; shoulder stiffness persists.  
+**Emotional:** Resolute; finding peace in exile; vigilantly protective of Isabella.  
+**Active obligations:**
+- Protect Isabella from Blackthorn loyalists (ch-15) -- ACTIVE
+- Lead the Unbound Watch (scouting unit) -- ACTIVE
+**Open loops:**
+- Negotiating alliance terms with Peaks' indigenous spirits/fae (ch-16) -- UNRESOLVED
+**Known secrets:**
+- Knows locations of hidden Blackthorn armory caches -- Isabella and Collective unaware
+**Arc:** 95% -- Fully embraced vanguard role; discarded family name's prestige for earned redemption.  
+**Status:** PERMANENT
+
+## Lord Malphas Blackthorn
+**Status:** DECEASED (ch-15)  
+**Legacy:** Magical core collapsed after Obsidian Bridge destruction; power vacuum enabled Collective's escape; lowlands now fractured.
+
+---
+
+# World State: ch-16 [POLISHED]
+
+## NPC Attitudes
+- **Kaelen** (Nightbloom scout): DEFERENTIAL -- Secured first camp; proven loyalty
+- **Elder Thorne** (Blackthorn Council): MALEVOLENT -- Ritualistically tracking Isabella's blood; vowed to reclaim "vessel"
+
+## Faction Status
+- **The Collective:** Unified; absolute trust in Isabella; relieved but resource-depleted
+- **Blackthorn Remnants:** Fractured; many turned to banditry; Thorne's loyalists mobilizing for cold-weather pursuit
+
+## Active World Events
+- **The Great Migration:** Phase 1 complete; Collective at Whispering Peaks; winter supply shortage critical
+- **The Wane:** Magic thinning in lowlands; Isabella's hemomancy uniquely stable due to collective marrow-bond
+
+## Permanent World Changes
+✓ Peak Sanctuary established (defensive stronghold)  
+✓ Unbound Watch formalized (Damien's reconnaissance unit)  
+✓ Collective consciousness integrated into Isabella's marrow (magical anchor)  
+✓ Blackthorn power structure destabilized; Thorne emerges as primary antagonist
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