diff --git a/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-05.md b/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-05.md index 4a70845..914d78d 100644 --- a/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-05.md +++ b/the-starfall-accord/staging/chapter-ch-05.md @@ -86,4 +86,12 @@ We both froze. The sound was like a gunshot. The mountain groaned in response, a deep, subterranean shudder that knocked a shower of dust from the ceiling. -I looked at the hairline fracture snaking across the crystalline heart of the mountain, then back at Dorian’s frozen mask. We weren’t just rivals fighting for a school anymore; we were two halves of a detonator, and the fuse was already lit. \ No newline at end of file +I looked at the hairline fracture snaking across the crystalline heart of the mountain, then back at Dorian’s frozen mask. We weren’t just rivals fighting for a school anymore; we were two halves of a detonator, and the fuse was already lit. + +--- +## AUTHOR DIRECTION - BUTTERFLY EFFECT CASCADE (Ch05) +Kaelen died in Ch04. Mira arrives raw with grief. +- Vane weaponizes Kaelen's death: 'Your Accord cost the Pyre its finest proctor.' +- Aric is now acting senior proctor - volatile, blaming Elara for the death. +- Dorian's quiet restraint in the face of Mira's grief is his truest loyalty. +- Remove all references to Kaelen as active/alive. He is gone.