diff --git a/projects/echoes-of-the-forest/staging/Chapter_15_review_c.md b/projects/echoes-of-the-forest/staging/Chapter_15_review_c.md
new file mode 100644
index 00000000..cf0291ff
--- /dev/null
+++ b/projects/echoes-of-the-forest/staging/Chapter_15_review_c.md
@@ -0,0 +1,277 @@
+# EDITORIAL REVIEW: "Echoes of the Forest" — Chapter 15: Judgment of the Vines
+
+---
+
+## 1. PROSE EVIDENCE
+
+**Quote 1 (Early):**
+> "The vines tightened their emerald embrace around Elder Bram's trembling form, their thorns a silent jury as Elara's Sigil burned like captured sunlight in her palm."
+
+**Inline commentary:** This opening image effectively establishes the supernatural weight of the moment—the metaphor of thorns as a "silent jury" grounds the abstract concept of judgment in visceral, natural language consistent with the Vessel's spiritual attunement.
+
+---
+
+**Quote 2 (Early-Mid):**
+> "Elara stood before the fallen Council, her breath a quiet effort. Every inhalation pulled against her bruised ribs, a sharp reminder of the struggle at the Heart-Root. She did not wince—not where the villagers could see. She wore her new leadership like a suit of bark-iron, heavy and stiff, yet necessary."
+
+**Inline commentary:** The physical manifestation of emotional burden here ("bark-iron") is thematically precise and avoids cliché, while the restraint of not wincing in public grounds her character development in behavioral specificity rather than exposition.
+
+---
+
+**Quote 3 (Mid):**
+> "Instead, she closed her eyes for a second, tracing the glowing lines on her palm with a thumb. She had to be the harmonizer, not the executioner."
+
+**Inline commentary:** This moment crystallizes Elara's internal conflict and her choice of restraint—the tactile habit (tracing the Sigil) directly echoes her voice signature profile and demonstrates her self-grounding technique in action.
+
+---
+
+**Quote 4 (Mid-Late):**
+> "I… I flow… no, I mean falter, Kaelen."
+
+**Inline commentary:** This stammer with water-related metaphor is a textbook deployment of her "imperfection signature" as defined in the voice profile, and it lands naturally mid-sentence, signaling spiritual depletion without overwrighting the moment.
+
+---
+
+**Quote 5 (Late):**
+> "For a heartbeat, she forgot her own name. She wasn't Elara Vance; she was a river, a hill, a rotting stump."
+
+**Inline commentary:** This passage executes the existential horror of her arc's central question ("Does harmonization preserve the self, or does the land's memory erode the harmonizer's identity?") through concrete, terrifying imagery rather than introspection.
+
+---
+
+## 2. CHARACTER VOICE AUDIT
+
+### ELARA VANCE
+
+**Dialogue 1:** "By the roots," she muttered, the oath grounding her as the pavilion floor groaned."
+- ✅ **Signature vocabulary/tics:** YES — "by the roots" is her canonical verbal tic for invoking resolve.
+- ✅ **Forbidden speech avoided:** YES — no casual slang or modern idioms present.
+- ✅ **Emotional register consistent:** YES — ritualistic grounding matches her role as Vessel in a moment of spiritual centrality.
+
+**Dialogue 2:** "Behold the architects of your sorrow," Elara said. Her voice, usually soft, now carried the resonant weight of the falls."
+- ✅ **Signature vocabulary/tics:** YES — "weight of the falls" echoes her harmonization with the Water Aspect and weaves Elderwood lore into speech.
+- ✅ **Forbidden speech avoided:** YES.
+- ✅ **Emotional register consistent:** YES — the measured formality matches her role as public judge and Vessel.
+
+**Dialogue 3:** "Elderwood does not seek blood for the sake of blood," Elara declared. "But it demands balance."
+- ✅ **Signature vocabulary/tics:** YES — "Elderwood" invocation, measured rhythm.
+- ✅ **Forbidden speech avoided:** YES.
+- ✅ **Emotional register consistent:** YES — declarative and harmonizing, not executorial.
+
+**Dialogue 4:** "I… I flow… no, I mean falter, Kaelen."
+- ✅ **Signature vocabulary/tics:** YES — stammering with water metaphor is her canonical imperfection signature.
+- ✅ **Forbidden speech avoided:** YES.
+- ✅ **Emotional register consistent:** YES — depleted, spiritually drained; exactly when this pattern occurs per profile.
+
+**Dialogue 5:** "The falls whisper what the roots already know—debt binds us deeper than stone, Kaelen."
+- ✅ **Signature vocabulary/tics:** YES — weaves Elderwood lore into oath (profile example line directly quoted from this moment).
+- ✅ **Forbidden speech avoided:** YES.
+- ✅ **Emotional register consistent:** YES — resolute yet reverent.
+
+---
+
+### KAELEN
+
+**Dialogue 1:** "Steady, Elara," he murmured. "The debt is heavy. Let me take some of the weight."
+- ✅ **Signature vocabulary/tics:** Profile shows verbal tic as unknown (no stress expression scale or specific tic listed for Kaelen), but speech is clipped and direct, consistent with his arc position (90% — accepted redemption through service).
+- ✅ **Forbidden speech avoided:** YES — no forbidden patterns listed in profile.
+- ✅ **Emotional register consistent:** YES — protective, grounded, loyal to his declared purpose.
+
+**Dialogue 2:** "The Council is no more! The Vessel has spoken. Go to your homes, tend to the new growth, and prepare. The integration has only just begun."
+- ✅ **Signature vocabulary/tics:** Direct, commanding—fits his arc shift toward accepting leadership.
+- ✅ **Forbidden speech avoided:** YES.
+- ✅ **Emotional register consistent:** YES — unexpected authority as noted in text; fits his redemption arc (90% mark).
+
+**Dialogue 3:** "You have to stop shouldering the whole sky," he said, his voice clipped but not unkind.
+- ✅ **Signature vocabulary/tics:** Clipped speech fits his military background.
+- ✅ **Forbidden speech avoided:** YES.
+- ✅ **Emotional register consistent:** YES — loyal but direct, matching his protective stance.
+
+**Dialogue 4:** "About that debt," he said. "There is something you should know. Why I was able to find the path through the Shimmering Falls when the scouts couldn't."
+- ✅ **Signature vocabulary/tics:** Direct, purposeful—fits his decision to finally reveal his lineage.
+- ✅ **Forbidden speech avoided:** YES.
+- ✅ **Emotional register consistent:** YES — the hesitation and emotional weight match his arc (revealing unresolved secret from Ch-13).
+
+**Dialogue 5:** "Because the Sun-Guards failed once," Kaelen said, his eyes dark with a long-buried shame. "And we've been hiding in the shadows of Oakhaven ever since, waiting for a Vessel worth dying for."
+- ✅ **Signature vocabulary/tics:** Measured, weighted with history. No contradiction with profile.
+- ✅ **Forbidden speech avoided:** YES.
+- ✅ **Emotional register consistent:** YES — vulnerability paired with resolve; matches his arc position and his "shared uncertainty" about identity.
+
+---
+
+### ELDER BRAM
+
+**Dialogue 1:** "We did it for stability!" Bram hissed, his voice cracking. "The forest was... it was becoming too much. We had to guide the growth. We had to ensure Oakhaven's survival."
+- ✅ **Signature vocabulary/tics:** Profile indicates Bram's arc is 100% complete (fallen from grace); no specific voice signature provided for him in the character sheet block. Speech here is desperate and rationalizing—appropriate to his state.
+- ✅ **Forbidden speech avoided:** YES — no specific forbidden patterns listed.
+- ✅ **Emotional register consistent:** YES — despairing, defensive, consistent with "complete fall from grace" (100% arc).
+
+**Dialogue 2:** "You think you've won?" the former Elder croaked, his eyes wild. "The Council was but a scab on the surface. There are others... those who fled when the Ledger was found. Those who still serve the rot. The roots remember, Vessel."
+- ✅ **Signature vocabulary/tics:** "The roots remember" is explicitly the verbal tic of THORNE BLACKROOT, not Bram. **VIOLATION DETECTED.**
+- ❌ **RULE BROKEN:** This line echoes Thorne's canonical verbal tic. While Bram is echoing or channeling a sinister force, the attribution is confusing because Thorne is deceased (Ch-13). The line reads as either: (a) Bram adopting Thorne's speech for dramatic effect (acceptable but unmarked), or (b) an error in attribution. The final narrative hook ("As the pavilion bloomed under Elara's light, a distant shadow stirred in the merged woods—a scout's thorned whisper: 'The roots remember, Vessel... and they hunger still.'") suggests the whisper is from a *Circle of Thorns scout*, not Bram. This creates ambiguity: is Bram channeling the Circle, or is the final line a separate entity? **See MUST-FIX — CLARITY below.**
+
+---
+
+## 3. STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
+
+**Strength 1: Elara's Physical Self-Awareness as Narrative Anchor**
+
+> "She did not wince—not where the villagers could see. She wore her new leadership like a suit of bark-iron, heavy and stiff, yet necessary."
+
+This disciplined restraint in public paired with internal struggle is a cornerstone of Elara's arc and must remain unchanged. It establishes her growth from reluctant individual to conscious leader without sacrificing her vulnerability.
+
+---
+
+**Strength 2: The Sentence as Spiritual Justice, Not Vengeance**
+
+> "He would not be killed, but he would be a living monument, sustained by the very forest he tried to poison, forced to watch as the village and the woods became one."
+
+This creative, thematically resonant punishment (transformation into living cage) avoids both execution-fantasy catharsis and unearned mercy. It embodies the Vessel's philosophy and resolves Bram's arc (100% complete) without melodrama.
+
+---
+
+**Strength 3: The Existential Horror of Spiritual Dissolution**
+
+> "For a heartbeat, she forgot her own name. She wasn't Elara Vance; she was a river, a hill, a rotting stump."
+
+This passage directly executes the central unsolved question of Elara's arc ("Does harmonization preserve the self, or does the land's memory erode the harmonizer's identity?") with concrete, terrifying specificity. The scale (from cosmic to intimate to grotesque) is precise.
+
+---
+
+**Strength 4: Kaelen's Revelation as Arc Milestone**
+
+The sequence in which Kaelen reveals his Sun-Guard lineage and offers the Grove map (mid-to-late chapter) lands his arc at 90% completion exactly as documented. The moment is earned through his protective stance throughout the chapter and resolves the unresolved loop from Ch-13 ("Revealing his Sun-Guard lineage to Elara"). This thread *must* remain as written.
+
+---
+
+## 4. MUST-FIX — CONTINUITY
+
+### Issue 1: Timeline Ambiguity — Council Ledger Accessibility
+
+**ORIGINAL:** 
+> "She raised the book high. 'Behold the architects of your sorrow,' Elara said."
+
+**PROBLEM:** 
+The character state notes indicate: "Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-14--unresolved): Possesses the Council Ledger; knows the Oakhaven Elders orchestrated the initial Blight."
+
+The chapter text then states (mid-chapter): "Council Ledger: Secured in the High Pavilion; serves as the legal basis for the upcoming trials."
+
+However, the narrative does not explain *when* or *how* the Ledger was removed from secure storage and brought into Elara's hands at the trial. This creates a minor continuity gap: did Elara retrieve it before the trial began (off-stage)? Is she reading from it, or merely holding it as a symbol? The action of raising it is clear, but the logistics of possession are not.
+
+**FIX:** 
+Add a single clarifying sentence in the early trial setup. Example:
+
+> "She raised the book high—she had retrieved it from the Pavilion vault at dawn, Mira's steadying hands helping her carry the oily leather tome. 'Behold the architects of your sorrow,' Elara said."
+
+This brief addition preserves the scene's pacing while closing the logistics gap.
+
+---
+
+### Issue 2: Thorne's Death Status and Voice Attribution
+
+**ORIGINAL:**
+> "And they hunger still." / Then the chapter's final lines: "As the pavilion bloomed under Elara's light, a distant shadow stirred in the merged woods—a scout's thorned whisper: 'The roots remember, Vessel... and they hunger still.'"
+
+**PROBLEM:**
+The character state notes establish: "THORNE BLACKROOT -- DECEASED (Ch-13): Established: Perished at the Heart-Root when his attempt to corrupt the core resulted in calcification. Legacy: His salt-white remains serve as a boundary marker that the Blight's heralds cannot pass."
+
+The final narrative voice ("a distant shadow stirred... a scout's thorned whisper") suggests a *Circle of Thorns scout*, not Thorne. This is consistent with Thorne being deceased. **However**, "The roots remember" is Thorne's exclusive verbal tic per his voice signature profile. The final line correctly attributes the whisper to "a scout," which resolves the continuity—a scout is *channeling* or *echoing* Thorne's ideology/tic, not channeling Thorne himself.
+
+**This is not technically a continuity error, but it creates reader ambiguity.** The issue is that Bram also uses "The roots remember" mid-chapter without clear narrative framing:
+
+> "The roots remember, Vessel."
+
+Is Bram channeling the Circle? Is he possessed? The text does not clarify. This ambiguity must be resolved.
+
+**FIX:**
+Revise Bram's line to clarify he is *echoing* corrupted rhetoric, not invoking his own tic. Example:
+
+**ORIGINAL:**
+> "The Council was but a scab on the surface. There are others... those who fled when the Ledger was found. Those who still serve the rot. The roots remember, Vessel."
+
+**REVISED:**
+> "The Council was but a scab on the surface. There are others... those who fled when the Ledger was found. Those who still serve the rot. They whisper it—*the roots remember*, they say. And they hunger, Vessel."
+
+This revision clarifies that Bram is reporting what the Circle servants say, not invoking his own mystical tic. It preserves the ominous tone while resolving the continuity ambiguity around voice signatures.
+
+---
+
+## 5. MUST-FIX — CLARITY
+
+### Issue 1: Kaelen's Role Shift — Insufficient Setup
+
+**ORIGINAL:**
+> "He looked out at the villagers, his voice rising with a sudden, unexpected authority. 'The Council is no more! The Vessel has spoken. Go to your homes, tend to the new growth, and prepare. The integration has only just begun.'"
+
+**PROBLEM:**
+Kaelen's sudden assumption of public authority here is noted as "unexpected" in the narrative, but the chapter provides no *procedural* clarity about why he (a former deserter with hidden Sun-Guard lineage) would be authorized to dismiss the assembled crowd and issue commands in the High Pavilion. 
+
+The character state notes say his obligations are "None" (Ch-15), and his arc is 90% complete (acceptance of service to Vessel). The moment works emotionally and thematically, but the *mechanics* of his authority are unclear: Does Elara's weakness automatically delegate authority to him? Is there a ritual protocol? Do the villagers simply accept him because of his proximity to Elara?
+
+**This blocks reader comprehension of the world's governance rules and Kaelen's new status.**
+
+**FIX:**
+Add 1-2 clarifying sentences before or after his command. Example:
+
+**BEFORE:**
+> "She swayed, the world tilting. A firm hand caught her elbow. Kaelen was there, as he always was, a shadow of steel and devotion. His posture was fluid, his hand resting on the hilt of his blade, his eyes scanning the submissive guards for any sign of a final, desperate gambit. He stepped forward—and the villagers, seeing the Vessel's most steadfast protector rise, turned to listen. Kaelen's voice rose with sudden authority."
+
+**Or AFTER:**
+> "'The Council is no more! The Vessel has spoken. Go to your homes, tend to the new growth, and prepare. The integration has only just begun.' The villagers, seeing him acknowledged by the Vessel herself and bearing the composure of the old Guard lineages, moved to obey without question."
+
+Either addition clarifies that authority flows from Elara's tacit acceptance and the villagers' deference to the Vessel's inner circle.
+
+---
+
+### Issue 2: The "War That's Coming" — Unexplained Threat Escalation
+
+**ORIGINAL:**
+> "'I have the maps to the hidden caches, Elara. Weapons, seeds, wards—things we will need for the war that's coming.'"
+
+**PROBLEM:**
+This is a significant plot escalation: Kaelen introduces the concept of a future "war" with no prior setup in this chapter. The world state notes (Ch-15) mention "Active World Events: The Great Integration" and "The New Mandate," but neither hint at imminent warfare. The reader may reasonably ask:
+
+- War with whom? (Circle of Thorns remnants? External forces?)
+- When? (Immediately? Seasons hence?)
+- Why does Kaelen know this is coming, and why hasn't Elara sensed it through her Vessel connection?
+
+The line is character-consistent (Kaelen's pragmatism fits) and thematically sound (the chapter ends with ominous hints), but **the premise itself is not adequately grounded in prior exposition or foreshadowing within this chapter.**
+
+**FIX:**
+Add a single framing line earlier in Kaelen's revelation to plant this threat. Example:
+
+**REVISED KAELEN LINE:**
+> "'I have the maps to the hidden caches, Elara. Weapons, seeds, wards—the tools our ancestors left for the day the Blight would strike beyond its borders. Things we will need for the war that's coming. And it *is* coming. The Circle of Thorns won't rest while you live, and now they know the Council is broken.'"
+
+This revision ties the war to the established antagonists (Circle of Thorns) and Elara's known status as the Vessel, making the escalation feel earned rather than introduced from nowhere.
+
+---
+
+## 6. OPTIONAL SUGGESTIONS
+
+### Suggestion 1: Expand Mira's Emotional Arc
+
+**Relevant quote:**
+> "Mira stood at the front, her face illuminated by the amber glow. The villager's eyes were wide, exultant yet brimming with a terrible, fresh grief."
+
+**Suggestion (OPTIONAL):**
+This is an excellent moment, but a single follow-up line showing Mira's reaction to Bram's sentencing would deepen her arc (Ch-15 notes: "DEVOTED -- she now looks to Elara for legislative guidance"). Currently, Mira is present but passive after the initial "Sentence!" outburst.
+
+**Proposed addition (after Elara's sentencing declaration):**
+> "Mira's exultation faded as the vines wove their cage. She had wanted blood—swift, visible justice. Instead, she watched Bram become a living monument, and her fists unclenched. Justice, she realized, was not always violent. It could be a long, quiet reminder."
+
+**Upside:** Reinforces Mira's evolution from anxious refugee to thoughtful councilor-adjacent figure. **Low risk** to voice and tone (remains grounded, brief).
+
+**Downside:** Adds ~30 words; could be perceived as over-explaining reader reaction. **Optional — include only if space permits.**
+
+---
+
+### Suggestion 2: Clarify the "Dampness Trail" Mechanics
+
+**Relevant quote:**
+> "As she moved toward the edge of the pavilion to look out over the changing village, she left a trail of dampness on the stone—tiny droplets of dew and flecks of forest loam that fall from her clothes."
+
+**Suggestion (OPTIONAL):**
+This is a brilliant character-specific physical habit (per voice signature: "Tracks mud or dew from her damp clothing everywhere, leaving subtle trails that NPCs notice and comment on"). However, it appears only in this scene without prior establishment. A brief earlier reference would make this feel earned rather than introduced.
+
+**Proposed addition (earlier
\ No newline at end of file