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+### 1. PROSE EVIDENCE
+
+*   **Quote 1 (Early):** "The Sigil burned like roots seeking deeper soil, its earthen resonance mapping agony across Elara's ribs as she swayed on the threshold, grey blight-ash crumbling from her mud-caked form." 
+    *This effectively establishes the physical toll of her magic while grounding the scene in the specific elemental imagery of the "Earth" stage.*
+*   **Quote 2 (Mid):** "He didn't just touch the earth; he violated it. He felt for the pulse of the Great Blight, that crawling, sentient hunger that had turned the forest into a graveyard."
+    *This successfully contrasts Thorne’s destructive corruption with Elara’s harmonizing "surrender," reinforcing the thematic conflict.*
+*   **Quote 3 (Late):** "She looked down at her feet and saw the trails of mud and dew she had tracked across the ancient floor—faint, shimmering ley-lines of her own making."
+    *This beautifully incorporates a specific "Notes for Writers" instruction regarding her physical habit of tracking mud to symbolize her connection to the land.*
+
+---
+
+### 2. CHARACTER VOICE AUDIT
+
+**Character: Elara Vance**
+*   **Dialogue:** "I... I flow... no, I mean falter."
+    *   **Signature vocab/tics?** YES. Incorporates the mandatory "water-metaphor stammer" for spiritual depletion.
+    *   **Avoids forbidden patterns?** YES. No casual slang or "I can't."
+    *   **Arc/Emotional consistency?** YES. 70% arc completion shows her accepting her role as leader ("I will not let you be consumed") while maintaining her "reluctance to burden others" flaw.
+
+**Character: Kaelen**
+*   **Dialogue:** "Then let me be the mountain. You do what's needed. I'm not moving."
+    *   **Signature vocab/tics?** YES. Short, protective, and rhythmic.
+    *   **Avoids forbidden patterns?** YES.
+    *   **Arc/Emotional consistency?** YES. Reflects his 65% arc position as the "Vessel's shield."
+
+**Character: Thorne Blackroot**
+*   **Dialogue:** "Hark, you mewling curs! Regroup! The Vessel thinks stone and soil can hide her."
+    *   **Signature vocab/tics?** YES. Use of "Hark" as a prefix and "mewling curs" fits his "clipped commands/elaborate metaphors" pattern.
+    *   **Avoids forbidden patterns?** YES. No apologies or doubt.
+    *   **Arc/Emotional consistency?** YES. Reflects his transition to "absolute corruption" and "total escalation."
+
+---
+
+### 3. STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
+
+*   **The Physicality of Magic:** The description of Elara’s ribs ("Every breath was a jagged flint against her lungs") maintains the established physical stakes (ch-07 ch-state) and prevents the ritual from feeling too abstract.
+*   **The Debt Motif:** The specific mention of "The falls whisper what the roots already know—debt binds us deeper than stone..." (Mid) is a verbatim tie-in to her Voice Signature and reinforces the ongoing UNPAID debt loop with Kaelen.
+*   **Parallel Action:** The shift from the Sanctum's interior hope to Thorne’s ridgeline desecration creates a strong sense of escalating tension.
+
+---
+
+### 4. MUST-FIX -- CONTINUITY
+
+*   **ORIGINAL:** "He leaned heavily on the Hilt of his blade, the Sunstone Shard embedded within it pulsing with a fractured, fitful light." (Early)
+*   **PROBLEM:** In the [Project Context], the Sunstone Shard is described as "recharged by the ritual; glowing with a harsh, white-gold purity." The chapter text depicts it as "clouded" and "fitful" initially, which contradicts its "completed" state in the RAG World State.
+*   **FIX:** "He leaned heavily on the hilt of his blade, where the Sunstone Shard pulsed with a blinding, white-gold purity that had yet to settle into a steady rhythm."
+
+---
+
+### 5. MUST-FIX -- CLARITY
+
+*   **ORIGINAL:** "She reached out, not for the sword, but for his hand. [...] She felt the echo of his desertion [...] and she pushed her own Earth-calm into that void..." (Mid)
+*   **PROBLEM:** This implies Elara now knows Kaelen’s secret (his desertion was triggered by a vision), but the RAG Context explicitly states: "Known secrets: his desertion was triggered by a vision -- Elara does not know." While she feels the "echo," the text must clarify if she fully understands the secret or if it remains a vague impression to maintain the "Closed Room" secret mechanic.
+*   **FIX:** "She felt the cold, jagged echo of a memory not her own—a sense of sun-scorched wasteland and terror—but before she could grasp the truth of his desertion, she pushed her own Earth-calm into the void..."
+
+---
+
+### 6. OPTIONAL SUGGESTIONS
+
+*   **Optional (Thorne’s Injury):** Thorne’s profile mentions his "left arm near-useless" and "breathing is a wet rattle." The chapter mentions the arm but could emphasize the "wet rattle" to heighten his physical desperation.
+    *   **Quote Reference:** "Thorne Blackroot stood upon the blighted ridgeline..." (Late)
+
+---
+
+### 7. FORBIDDEN CHANGES / NON-GOALS
+
+*   **DO NOT CHANGE:** Elara's repetitive use of "By the roots." This is her mandatory verbal tic.
+*   **DO NOT CHANGE:** The "fragmented and urgent" sentence structure when Elara is depleted (e.g., "I... I flow... no, I mean falter"). This is a voice requirement.
+*   **DO NOT CHANGE:** Thorne’s formal and arrogant tone; it is essential to his characterization as an "aristocrat of decay."
+
+---
+
+### 8. VERDICT
+
+**REVISE**
+**SCORE: 82/100**
+**JUSTIFICATION:** The chapter perfectly executes the complex Voice Signatures and specific physical tells (mud-tracking, breathing metaphors). However, there is a technical continuity error regarding the Sunstone's charge level and a potential breach of the "Known Secrets" RAG constraint regarding Kaelen’s desertion that needs subtle rewording to preserve future reveals.
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