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 ## Lena Duval
 Location: On Jax Harlan’s airboat, drifting into the mouth of the Blackwater Basin.
-Physical: Severe fever; left hand bandaged and throbbing; physical exhaustion from magical exertion and the push of the "Blackening."
-Emotional: Desperate and hyper-focused; feeling the physical weight of the land's rot.
+Physical: High fever; left hand bandaged and radiating heat; extreme fatigue from magical exertion.
+Emotional: Determined, slightly delirious, and deeply apprehensive of the mechanical "Humming."
 Active obligations: 
 - Owes the land a "balancing of scales" for the fog (Ch1) -- UNPAID
 - Owes Jax Harlan a conversation about the "unnatural" events (Ch2) -- UNPAID
-- Owes Jax Harlan safe passage out of the Basin (Ch4) -- UNPAID
+- Owes Jax Harlan safe passage through the Basin's shifting channels (Ch4) -- UNPAID
 Open loops: 
 - Lena and the "Whisper": The consciousness within the roots (Ch1) -- UNRESOLVED
 - Lena and the surveyors: Physical removal of markers (Ch2) -- UNRESOLVED
-- Lena and the Rite: Consequences of interrupting the "Rite of the First Sap" (Ch3) -- UNRESOLVED
+- Lena and the Rite: The consequences of interrupting the "Rite of the First Sap" (Ch3) -- UNRESOLVED
 - Lena and Jax: The search for the source of the "Blackening" (Ch4) -- UNRESOLVED
 Known secrets: 
 - CARRIED (Ch1--unresolved): Knows she intends to flee to New Orleans within the week -- Aunt Maribelle does not know.
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 ## Jax Harlan
 Location: Pilot seat of the *Loup Garou* (airboat) at the edge of the Blackwater Basin.
-Physical: Healthy; smelling of diesel and salt; slightly strained from navigating the thickening oil.
-Emotional: Protective and skeptical but committed; increasingly disturbed by the abnormal water conditions.
+Physical: Healthy; hands stained with oil and grease.
+Emotional: Vigilant and skeptical of the superstitions, but protective of Lena.
 Active obligations: 
 - Owes Lena safe passage to the Blackwater Basin (Ch4) -- PAID
 Open loops: 
 - Jax and the Development Corp: Reasons for his presence in Cypress Bend (Ch2) -- UNRESOLVED
 Known secrets: 
 - CARRIED (Ch2--unresolved): Knows the sheriff is taking payoffs from Terrebonne Development -- Lena does not know.
-Arc: 15% -- Jax has officially transitioned from a bystander to an active participant in Lena’s struggle against the coven and the developers.
+Arc: 20% -- Jax has committed to the trek into the "cursed" Basin, prioritizing Lena's mission over his own common sense.
 Permanent: YES
 
 # World State: Ch4
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- The Coven (Widow’s Deep): ABSENT -- Last seen agitated by Lena's disruption of the Rite.
-- Remy LeBlanc (Cypress Bend): ABSENT -- Last known providing gossip and support.
+- The Coven (Widow’s Deep): ABSENT -- Their presence is felt through the "Blackening" and Lena’s worsening fever.
+- Remy LeBlanc (Cypress Bend): ABSENT -- Last known providing support in town.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- Terrebonne Development Corp: AGGRESSIVE -- Their dredging equipment is heard vibrating through the water; presence of more survey buoys.
-- The Duval Coven: PUNISHING -- Use of "The Blackening" to pressure Lena into submission.
+- Terrebonne Development Corp: AGGRESSIVE -- Their presence is manifested by mechanical vibration and rhythmic thumping in the deep swamp.
+- The Duval Coven: PUNISHING -- Monitoring Lena’s movements; the "Blackening" is their tool of correction.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Blackening: Spreading quickly; oily residue appearing on the water’s surface beyond the Deep and clogging the airboat's intake.
-- The Humming: Constant mechanical thrumming coming from the direction of Project Phlegethon’s site.
-- The Fever: A magical ailment affecting Lena, tied directly to the land's distress.
+- The Blackening: Rapidly expanding; creating dead zones in the water that kill small fish and frogs on contact.
+- The Humming: A deepening mechanical thrum that vibrates through the hull of the boat, originating from the Basin's core.
+- The Fever: Increasing in intensity as Lena approaches the site of the industrial interference.