From cab7da259d60ed7eb84f8dea0278ed4b3bd6b3b9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: PAE Date: Wed, 15 Apr 2026 23:30:35 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] staging: Chapter_chapter-number_review_review-letter.md task=f1d13411-193a-4978-b5cc-f0e12490fa1d --- ...ter_chapter-number_review_review-letter.md | 20 +++++++++++++++++++ 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+) create mode 100644 projects/cypress-bend/staging/Chapter_chapter-number_review_review-letter.md diff --git a/projects/cypress-bend/staging/Chapter_chapter-number_review_review-letter.md b/projects/cypress-bend/staging/Chapter_chapter-number_review_review-letter.md new file mode 100644 index 00000000..04dbbca7 --- /dev/null +++ b/projects/cypress-bend/staging/Chapter_chapter-number_review_review-letter.md @@ -0,0 +1,20 @@ +I am ready to perform the editorial review for **Cypress Bend, Chapter 4**. However, you have not provided the **CHAPTER TEXT** to be reviewed. + +Please provide the text for Chapter 4. Once provided, I will evaluate it against the **Lena Duval** and **Jax Harlan** profiles, ensuring Lena’s feverish state, her "gator’s truth" tic, and their specific mechanical/magical environment are maintained. + +*** + +### [WAITING FOR CHAPTER TEXT] + +*Once you provide the text, the review will be structured as follows:* + +1. **PROSE EVIDENCE**: I will extract 3-5 verbatim quotes to analyze sensory grounding (diesel vs. magnolia) and Lena's rhythmic "chant-like" sentence patterns. +2. **CHARACTER VOICE AUDIT**: I will specifically check if Lena uses her "gator's truth" tic and if Jax remains skeptical yet protective. +3. **STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE**: Identifying successful moments of "Bayou Binding" or the tension of the Saltflats. +4. **MUST-FIX -- CONTINUITY**: I will cross-reference the "Blackening" oil and Lena's bandaged left hand against the provided RAG context. +5. **MUST-FIX -- CLARITY**: Ensuring the transition from the boat to the Basin is logically sound. +6. **OPTIONAL SUGGESTIONS**: Improvements to the mechanical "humming" descriptions. +7. **FORBIDDEN CHANGES / NON-GOALS**: Protecting Lena's refusal to apologize and her Cajun French endearments. +8. **VERDICT**: PASS/REVISE with a score based on the presence of MUST-FIX items. + +**Please paste the Chapter 4 text below to proceed.** \ No newline at end of file