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 ## Liora Voss
 - **Location:** The Loom Floor, core drive-spindle.
-- **Physical:** Indigo staining reaching the elbows; left palm is an active aperture of obsidian ink; stage-two frayback (tremors, sepia-mottled vision, sensory bleeding from Thorne).
-- **Emotional:** Fatalistic; operating under "Dirty Circuit" clinical detachment; deep-seated resentment toward Maros.
-- **Active obligations:** Stabilize the Loom for Elder Maros — PAID (functionally).
-- **Open loops:** Management of the Liora-Thorne sensory bleed; surviving the feedback loop of the unsanctified link.
-- **Known secrets:** Witnessed parents’ ritual failure caused by Conclave (Maros) interference; self-identifies as a "Stainer."
-- **Arc:** 20% — Has committed to "Dirty Circuit" heresy as her only functional tool.
-- **Permanent:** YES
+- **Physical:** Indigo staining reaching mid-bicep; obsidian aperture in left palm pulsing with a rhythmic "thrum." Stage-two frayback manifest as ocular hemorrhaging and violent tremors managed via Thorne.
+- **Emotional:** Defiant fatalism; she has accepted her role as a "Stainer." Her resentment toward Maros has shifted from simmering to a cold, tactical clarity.
+- **Active Obligations:** Maintain the "Dirty Circuit" to prevent Loom collapse; keep Thorne from reaching total ego-dissolution.
+- **Open Loops:** The source of the "Thirteenth Strand" anomaly; the physical toll of her soul-fray.
+- **Arc Progress:** 25% — She has successfully integrated heretical binding techniques, moving from desperate survival to intentional manipulation of the Loom’s "dead-tone."
 
 ## Thorne Quill
 - **Location:** Weaving Chamber, restraint chair.
-- **Physical:** Drenched in Liora's ink-blood; internal vibrations synchronized to the Loom’s "dead-tone"; acting as a literal grounding rod.
-- **Emotional:** Predatory but stabilizing; transitioning from victim to symbiotic anchor.
-- **Active obligations:** Act as Liora’s grounding rod — PAID.
-- **Open loops:** The Thirteenth Strand variable; intentionality behind his "Stain" synchronization.
-- **Known secrets:** Perceives the specific frequency of the Loom’s decay.
-- **Arc:** 20% — Actively manipulating the link to ensure mutual survival.
-- **Permanent:** YES
+- **Physical:** Skin etched with Liora’s ink-blood; internal organs vibrating in perfect sympathy with the Loom’s core. Acting as a biological surge protector.
+- **Emotional:** Predatory focus; he is no longer a victim but an active "anchor" feeding Liora’s stability with his own kinetic defiance.
+- **Active Obligations:** Stabilize Liora’s soul-fray; buffer the Terminus Frequency.
+- **Open Loops:** Emergent ability to "hear" the Loom’s intent; the growing power imbalance in the sympathetic link.
+- **Arc Progress:** 25% — Shifting from a prisoner to an essential, symbiotic partner in the Loom’s operation.
 
 ## Elder Maros
 - **Location:** High Observation Gallery.
-- **Physical:** Relies on a bone-white cane; visibly aged by the Loom’s instability.
-- **Emotional:** Calculating; views Liora as a disposable battery.
-- **Active obligations:** Maintain Loom integrity — UNPAID (ongoing).
-- **Open loops:** Managing the Purist backlash following the Heresy.
-- **Known secrets:** Involved in the Voss ritual sabotage.
-- **Arc:** 15% — Sanctioning heresy to maintain power.
-- **Permanent:** YES
+- **Physical:** Leaning heavily on his bone-white cane; his eyes are clouded by the indigo flare of the circuit.
+- **Emotional:** Fearful but masked; realizing he has traded ecclesiastical control for a volatile stability he cannot direct.
+- **Arc Progress:** 20% — Openly sanctioning heresy; his political survival is now inextricably tied to Liora’s survival.
 
 # World State: ch-03
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- **Junior Binders:** TRAUMATIZED — Witnessed the "Black-Thread Jump"; view Liora as a spiritual pariah.
-- **Archival Guards:** AT READY — Weapons trained on the core; security thresholds bypassed.
+- **Junior Binders:** EVANGELICAL TERROR — Some view Liora as a dark saint of the "New Weave"; others are catatonic from the indigo contagion.
+- **Archival Guards:** SEALED — The chamber is locked from the outside; they are now guards of a potential tomb rather than a ritual.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- **Conclave Purists:** MILITANT — The "Dirty Circuit" is viewed as an unforgivable theological breach.
-- **Conclave Opportunists:** CAUTIOUS — Observing the success of the heresy for potential exploitation.
+- **Conclave Purists:** REVOLUTIONARY — Preparing an internal coup to "cleanse" the Loom of Liora’s ink-blood.
+- **The Stained (Emergent):** A fringe group of Loom-workers beginning to mimic Liora’s indigo branding as a mark of resilience.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- **The Dirty Circuit:** An unsanctified soul-link bypassing safety dampeners; causes mutual soul-fray and high-bandwidth sensory sharing.
-- **Loom Decay:** Structural failure stabilized at critical levels; emitting a "dead-tone" frequency that warps local sound.
-- **Indigo Contagion:** Physical branding marks spreading among witnesses as a defense against ink-blood exposure.
-- **Terminus Frequency:** Gravitational fluctuations within the chamber caused by Loom vibrations.
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+- **The Dirty Circuit:** Canonized as a functional but lethal soul-link; it is currently the only thing holding the Loom Floor together.
+- **Loom Decay:** Stabilized into a "Locked Spiral." The structural failure is paused, but the pressure is building toward a catastrophic release.
+- **Indigo Contagion:** Psychic fallout from the ritual is manifesting as shared hallucinations among the Conclave staff.
+- **Terminus Frequency:** Local gravity has become inconsistent; light in the chamber is beginning to bend toward the core drive-spindle.
+- **The Thirteenth Strand:** A rogue frequency detected within the link that does not belong to Liora, Thorne, or the Loom—an outside influence or ancient echo.
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