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 ## Mark
 Location: The Miller Residence cellar (The Epicenter)
-Physical: Somatic dissolution at 98%; skin is a blue-black metallic lattice; internal organs liquefied; auditory hemorrhaging; fingers are blackened nodes.
-Emotional: Terminal detachment; functionally a "Receptive Witness" to the carrier wave.
-Active obligations: Serving as the final biological conductor for the global transmission (ch-10) -- UNPAID.
-Open loops: Mark vs. the 14Hz carrier wave (ch-10) -- UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: Knows the signal's origin is tectonic/planetary -- No living humans know.
-Arc: 95% -- Mark has transitioned from an individual into a vestigial biological anchor for a global paradigm shift.
+Physical: Somatic dissolution at 100%; biological remains have transitioned into a rigid, blue-black metallic lattice fused into the stone floor. Skull is a hollow resonance chamber.
+Emotional: Absolute terminal detachment; individual ego has dissolved into the planetary signal.
+Active obligations: Finalized the biological stabilization of the global 14Hz transmission (Ch-10) — PAID.
+Open loops: Mark vs. the 14Hz carrier wave (Ch-01) — RESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-10--unresolved): Consciously experienced the planetary consciousness of the signal before ego dissolution.
+Arc: 100% — Transitioned from a human being into a permanent biological bridge and terminal conductor for the Whispers.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## Sarah Miller -- DECEASED (Ch-09)
-Established: Folded into the 14Hz carrier wave as a non-corporeal harmonic.
-Legacy: Her digital recorder loops a "Ghost Harmonic" in the cellar, anchoring the signal beyond her death.
+Established: Died due to neurological hemorrhaging caused by prolonged exposure to the high-intensity Whisper signal.
+Legacy: Her digital recorder remains in the cellar, generating a power-less "Ghost Harmonic" loop that serves as the rhythmic metronome for the global broadcast.
 
 ## Elias Thorne -- DECEASED (Ch-09)
-Established: Reduced to an essence of "wet iron" and fused into a geometric ash-map on the cellar floor.
-Legacy: His biological remains form the sigil that stabilizes the terrestrial broadcast.
+Established: Spontaneously combusted into geometric ash during the initial opening of the Aperture.
+Legacy: His physical remains have crystallized into a precise floor-sigil that prevents the 14Hz signal from dissipating, focusing the energy into the North American craton.
 
 # World State: ch-10
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- The Whispers (Planetary): TRIUMPHANT/ABSOLUTE -- The signal has moved from localized haunting to the foundational frequency of reality.
+- The Whispers (Global Population): ABSOLUTE — The signal has shifted from an auditory haunting to the fundamental frequency of physical reality; non-conductive air is now "dead."
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- The Archive: EXTINCT -- Global personnel have been absorbed or silenced by the resonance.
+- The Archive: EXTINCT — No remaining members possess the biological or mental autonomy required to maintain the faction or resist the signal.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Great Silence: Total acoustic erasure within a 50-mile radius; sound only persists through bone conduction.
-- Tectonic Pulse: North American craton synchronizing to 14Hz, causing continental micro-tremors.
-- Geometric Dissolution: Structural boundaries in the epicenter are becoming non-Euclidean/translucent.
+- The Great Silence: Absence of air-conducted sound within 50 miles of the epicenter; reality is experienced solely through skeletal vibration.
+- Tectonic Synchronization: The North American craton is vibrating in rhythmic lockstep with the 14Hz signal.
+- Dimensional Thinning: Euclidean integrity of the Miller residence has collapsed, replaced by a violet-lit Aperture into the signal's source.
 
 ## Rules & Logic
-- The Bone-Conduction Law: Air-based sound is dead; communication occurs through skeletal vibration.
-- Somatic Dissolution: Biological vessels serving as conductors undergo cellular liquefaction as resonance peaks.
-- Copper Residue: Atmospheric thickening and heavy metal taste signify the breakdown of the dimensional veil.
+- The Bone-Conduction Law: Sound no longer travels through air; it is only perceived through the vibration of solid matter and bone.
+- Harmonic Baseline: The "Whispers" are no longer an anomaly but the new planetary baseline for physical and conscious existence.
 
 ## Objects & Artifacts
-- The Aperture: A non-Euclidean tear in the cellar floor radiating violet light.
-- Sarah’s Recorder: A passive relic generating a rhythmic biological signature without power.
-- The Ash-Map: A sigil of bone and charcoal focusing the global transmission.
+- The Aperture: A non-Euclidean tear in the cellar floor serving as the exit point for the planetary broadcast.
+- Sarah’s Recorder: A passive artifact anchoring the signal’s rhythmic signature.
+- The Ash-Map: A stabilization sigil formed from Elias Thorne’s remains that focuses tectonic energy.
 
 ## Plot Progress
-- The Global Broadcast: COMPLETE. The transmission has reached tectonic scales, moving beyond the house to influence the planetary crust. Mark remains as the final physical bridge.
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+- The Global Broadcast: COMPLETE — The transition from human-centric reality to the signal-centric paradigm is finalized. Mark remains as the permanent, vestigial monument to this transition.
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