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+# CHAPTER 17 — POLISHED STATE EXTRACTION
+
+## CHARACTER STATE
+
+### Elias Thorne
+- **Location:** Archive Sub-Level 4, Main Server Vault
+- **Physical:** Severe exhaustion, minor lacerations, persistent tinnitus
+- **Emotional:** Determined; spiritually rattled but committed to direct confrontation
+- **Arc:** 85% — transitioned from evasion to aggressive stance
+- **Unpaid Obligation:** Full explanation to Sarah re: signal origin
+- **Carried Secret:** Signal mimics voices of the dead; Sarah unaware
+- **Status:** Terminal confrontation imminent
+
+### Sarah Miller
+- **Location:** Archive Sub-Level 4, Security Monitoring Hub
+- **Physical:** Intense migraines, hand tremors
+- **Emotional:** Analytical defiance masking terror; skepticism abandoned
+- **Arc:** 80% — surrendered rigid empiricism to accept supernatural reality
+- **Unpaid Obligation:** Backup extraction route if terminal shutdown fails
+- **Carried Secret:** Archive security sabotaged from inside; Elias unaware
+- **Voice Lock:** Clipped speech under stress; "empirically speaking" qualifier; stammers initial consonants when migraines spike
+- **Status:** Actively supporting Elias
+
+---
+
+## WORLD STATE
+
+### Active Crisis
+- **The Terminal Broadcast:** Whisper signal at peak amplitude in Sub-Level 4
+- **Timeline:** ~20 minutes until surface transmitter reach
+- **Immediate Threat:** Automated defenses (IFF protocols overridden) hostile to Sarah
+
+### Facility Status
+- **The Archive (Oakhaven):** COLLAPSING — no administrative oversight; signal-compromised security
+- **Automated Systems:** HOSTILE — infiltrated by signal
+
+### Open Loops (Unresolved)
+1. Elias & Sarah direct confrontation with Whisper signal terminal broadcast
+2. Elias's unpaid explanation to Sarah (signal origin)
+3. Sarah's unpaid extraction backup commitment
+4. Signal mimicry mechanism (voices of dead as lure)
+5. Identity and extent of inside saboteur(s)
+
+### Narrative Status
+- Both characters at high arc completion (80–85%)
+- Mutual unpaid obligations create co-dependent stakes
+- Hard deadline: signal broadcast countdown
+- Dual secrets unresolved
+- **CHAPTER 17 LOCKED — Ready for Publication**
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