diff --git a/projects/crimson-vows/staging/character-king-aldric.md b/projects/crimson-vows/staging/character-king-aldric.md index b6d2e09..1dfa4cc 100644 --- a/projects/crimson-vows/staging/character-king-aldric.md +++ b/projects/crimson-vows/staging/character-king-aldric.md @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ - What they NEVER say: "I'm sorry." He will offer restitution, gold, or blood, but he finds the verbal apology to be a weak substitute for corrective action. - Imperfection signature: When pushed to his emotional limit, he stops speaking entirely. Silence is his primary defensive weapon; he forces the other person to fill the void. - One example line of their dialogue that could not belong to any other character: - "The crown is not a piece of jewelry, Elara; it is a gilded cage, and I have spent thirty years sharpening my teeth against its bars." + "The crown is not a piece of jewelry, Seraphine; it is a gilded cage, and I have spent thirty years sharpening my teeth against its bars." ## Magic / Power / Special Ability - School/Discipline: Blood-Binding (Sanguine Sovereignty) @@ -31,13 +31,13 @@ - Transformation: From a cold, isolated sovereign who views people as assets to a leader who understands that a kingdom is only as strong as the connections between its people. ## Relationships -- Elara Vance: Love interest; a volatile dynamic of mutual suspicion that masks a desperate, shared hunger for freedom from their respective roles. -- High Priestess Malcorra: Antagonist; a symbiotic but hostile relationship where she serves as the religious conscience he wishes he could ignore. +- Queen Seraphine: Political rivals turned wary allies; a glass-edged dynamic of mutual desperation and ancestral baggage. - Captain Kaelen: Trusted confidant; a relationship of silent brotherhood defined by years of shared trauma and unspoken loyalty. +- High Priestess Malcorra: Antagonist; a symbiotic but hostile relationship where she serves as the religious conscience he wishes he could ignore. ## Notes for Writers - Aldric never leans against furniture; he stands as if his spine were made of tempered steel, even when he is exhausted. - He has a physical tell: when he is lying or concealing a deep emotion, he unconsciously adjusts the heavy signet ring on his right hand. -- His speech is devoid of contractions (e.g., "I do not" instead of "I don't") unless he is speaking to Elara in private. -- Readers must NEVER see Aldric lose his temper in a loud or "messy" way (no screaming, no throwing things); his rage is a cold, quiet drop in temperature that freezes a room. +- His speech is devoid of contractions (e.g., "I do not" instead of "I don't") unless he is speaking in a moment of rare, raw vulnerability. +- Readers must NEVER see Aldric lose his temper in a loud or "messy" way; his rage is a cold, quiet drop in temperature that freezes a room. - He is highly sensitive to scent—specifically the smell of iron and ozone—which triggers his tactical instincts. \ No newline at end of file