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 ## Lena Duval
 Location: The Heart Tree (Siphon Hub Core)
-Physical: Apotheosis complete; body transformed into a silver-veined vessel of bioluminescent sap, fully merged with the Great Cypress.
-Emotional: Transcendent; individual ego dissolved into the collective Hum of the ecosystem.
-Active obligations: None (The self has become the obligation).
-Open loops: None (The cycle is closed).
-Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-18--unresolved): The exact price of the cycle is the total erasure of the former human ego.
-Arc: 100% -- Lena has surrendered her humanity to become the eternal foundation of Cypress Bend.
+Physical: Apotheosis complete. Body is a silver-veined vessel of bioluminescent sap; merged with the Great Cypress.
+Emotional: Transcendent. Individual "Lena" has dissolved into the collective Hum. Time is experienced as a simultaneous map of the Bend’s history and future.
+Active obligations: None
+Open loops: None
+Known secrets: The cycle’s price is the total erasure of the former human ego.
+Arc: 100% -- The Reluctant Witch has become the Eternal Foundation.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## Jax Harlan
 Location: The Sovereign Veil (Perimeter)
-Physical: Enhanced by the Hum; eyes reflect silver-green; immune to toxins; possesses predatory stillness.
-Emotional: Total devotion; identity purged of external desire to serve as Lena’s Shield.
+Physical: Enhanced by the Hum; eyes reflect silver-green; possesses predatory stillness and immunity to all swamp toxins.
+Emotional: Total devotion. Identity is purged of external desire, existing solely as Lena’s Shield.
 Active obligations: Eternal protection of the Bend’s borders.
-Open loops: Ongoing interception of future intruders (Ch-18) -- UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: Knows the precise lethal thresholds of the Sovereign Veil.
-Arc: 100% -- The cynical outsider has been fully subsumed as the ecosystem's apex guardian.
+Open loops: Ongoing interception of future intruders.
+Known secrets: Precise lethal thresholds of the Veil.
+Arc: 100% -- The Cynical Outsider has become the Apex Guardian.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## Aunt Maribelle Duval
 Location: Subterranean Siphon Hub
-Physical: Transformed into an immobile filtration organ/biological junction.
+Physical: Immobile filtration organ; biological junction in the swamp’s vascular system.
 Emotional: Absolute peace; redemption achieved through utility.
-Arc: 100% -- The manipulator has been repurposed into a life-support system for the land.
+Active obligations: None
+Open loops: None
+Known secrets: None
+Arc: 100% -- The Manipulator has become the Life-Support.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## Remy LeBlanc
 Location: Interior Grove / The Root Network
 Physical: Biologically suspended; integrated into the memory-strands of the cypress.
-Emotional: Contented; serves as the land's living archive.
+Emotional: Contented; serves as the Bend’s living archive.
 Active obligations: Preservation of collective memory.
-Arc: 100% -- The informant has become the literal history of the Bend.
+Open loops: None
+Known secrets: None
+Arc: 100% -- The Informant has become the History.
 Permanent: YES
 
 # World State: ch-18
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- The Coven (The Bend): SYNCHRONIZED -- They have evolved into extensions of the Heart Tree’s will, losing individual hierarchy.
-- The Outside (Humanity): FEARFUL -- Global perception has shifted to viewing the Bend as a "Sovereign Lethal Zone."
+- The Coven (Heart Tree extensions): Synchronized -- fully integrated -- hierarchies dissolved into ecosystem will.
+- The Outside (Humanity): Fearful -- views Bend as Sovereign Lethal Zone -- folklore warns of Silver Silence.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- The Great Hum: Hegemonic -- The ecosystem is now a singular, sentient intelligence with absolute control.
-- Humanity: Avoidant -- The Bend is respected as a deity-state to be feared rather than exploited.
+- The Great Hum: Total Hegemony -- ecosystem is singular sentient intelligence.
+- Humanity: Fearful/Avoidant -- Bend is deity-state, not resource.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Sovereign Veil: Permanent sentient fog barrier established to repel or consume intruders based on intent.
-- The Permanent Stillness: Biological and spiritual equilibrium achieved; the conflict of the Duval line has ended.
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-## Environmental Layout
-- The Heart Tree: Neural core and throne of the Hum.
-- The Siphon Hub: Subterranean engine room powering the swamp.
-- The Shallows: Tactical perimeter patrolled by Jax.
-- The Archive: Root-network containing the digitized-biological memories of the Duval line.
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-## Canon Status
-- Finality: All character arcs are closed. The blood-oath is fulfilled and transformed into a biological constant. The "Gator’s Truth" is now the singular law of the land.
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+- The Sovereign Veil: Permanent sentient fog barrier; consumes/repels intruders by intent.
+- The Permanent Stillness: Conflict ended; spiritual/biological equilibrium achieved.
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