PASS 3 prose-first rule: character in prose = alive
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Use ONLY what your PASS 1 narrative says.
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══ MANDATORY CHECK — DECEASED CHARACTERS ══
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STEP 1: Check PASS 0 above. Find every character listed as "(DECEASED)" or "†" or "DEAD".
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STEP 2: RESURRECTION OVERRIDE CHECK — Before marking anyone DECEASED, re-read the
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EDITORIAL OVERRIDES (AUTHOR'S INTENT) in PASS 0.
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If the author's intent EXPLICITLY states the character is ALIVE, the editor has
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retconned the death. Treat that character as ALIVE and use the LIVING FORMAT.
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The author's intent is BINDING and overrides all prior state files.
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STEP 3: For characters confirmed dead (no resurrection override in author intent), and
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who were NOT shown alive in PASS 1 prose, use ONLY the short DECEASED format.
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You MAY NOT give them a Location, Physical, Emotional, or Arc field.
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STEP 1: PROSE IS GROUND TRUTH — Read your PASS 1 narrative (Turn 2). Find every named
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character who appears in the prose (speaking, moving, thinking, physically present).
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→ These characters are ALIVE. Use LIVING FORMAT for each one.
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→ If a prior deliverable shows them as DECEASED — the prose OVERRIDES that.
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→ The draft you just wrote is THE authoritative source. No exceptions.
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STEP 2: For characters NOT present in the PASS 1 prose, check PASS 0 context:
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→ If they were DECEASED in a prior character-state file: carry them forward
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as DECEASED using the short DECEASED FORMAT.
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→ If they were ALIVE but simply off-screen: omit them (no update needed).
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STEP 3: NEVER mark a character DECEASED if they speak, act, or appear alive in PASS 1.
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NEVER give absent-but-alive characters a new Location or Emotional update.
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══ DECEASED FORMAT(two lines only) ══
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## [Name] — DECEASED (Ch[N])
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Established: [one sentence: how they died]
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@@ -385,10 +387,9 @@ steps:
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→ Set Permanent: YES (deceased)
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NEVER give a deceased character a living Location, Physical, or Emotional field.
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NEVER assign a deceased character future obligations or arcs.
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EXCEPTION — AUTHOR RETCON: If the EDITORIAL OVERRIDES (AUTHOR'S INTENT in PASS 0)
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explicitly state the character IS ALIVE, this OVERRIDES the previous state.
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The editor has retconned the death. Use LIVING FORMAT for that character.
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The prose you wrote for this chapter is the authoritative source of truth.
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EXCEPTION — PROSE OVERRIDE: If the character appears ALIVE in your PASS 1 prose
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(speaking, acting, physically present), this OVERRIDES any previous DECEASED state.
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Use LIVING FORMAT. The prose you wrote is always the authoritative source of truth.
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If a character was DECEASED in the previous state, copy their entry forward UNCHANGED
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unless (a) they die in THIS chapter's prose (update the cause), or
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(b) the author's intent explicitly retcons them as alive.
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