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 # Character State: ch-01
 
 ## Mira
-Location: The Obsidian Bridge (Center Span), Great Crevasse boundary.
-Physical: Severe magical exhaustion; bleeding right palm (ritual cut); experiencing cold-shock and phantom shivers from Dorian’s proximity.
-Emotional: Violated and overwhelmed; her internal "fire" feels dampened by the tether's cooling influence.
-Active obligations: Must begin the administrative merger of Pyre Academy with the Crystalline Spire per the Emperor's Decree — UNPAID.
-Open loops: The "Binary Star" stabilization (Ch01) — UNRESOLVED; The true nature of the Emperor's corruption (burnt sugar scent) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: Identified the Emperor’s magical signature as "rotting candy/burnt sugar," signaling hidden decay.
-Arc: 15% — Forced from sovereign independence into a biological and magical dependency on her rival.
-Permanent: YES (Soul-tethered; physical separation beyond a certain radius causes agonizing neural feedback).
+- **Location:** The Obsidian Bridge (Center Span), Great Crevasse boundary.
+- **Physical:** Severe magical exhaustion; bleeding right palm from the ritual cut; searing phantom cold in her chest where Dorian’s magic has anchored.
+- **Emotional:** Violated, furious, and profoundly vulnerable; struggling against the sensory intrusion of Dorian’s heartbeat against her own.
+- **Active Obligations:** Legally bound to integrate Pyre Academy with the Crystalline Spire under the Emperor’s Decree.
+- **Open Loops:** Must stabilize the "Binary Star" bond with Dorian to prevent a mana-implosion; suspects Emperor Valerius of intentional corruption.
+- **Known Secrets:** Recognizes the "burnt sugar" scent of the Emperor’s magic as a sign of decay/corruption.
+- **Arc:** 15% — From sovereign fire-mage to a tethered prisoner of political and magical necessity.
+- **Permanent:** YES (Soul-tethered; physical distance from Dorian causes escalating neural agony).
 
 ## Dorian Solas
-Location: The Obsidian Bridge (Center Span), Great Crevasse boundary.
-Physical: Thermal shock; palm bleeding from the ritual; hands trembling from Mira’s radiating heat.
-Emotional: Stoic but internally fractured; his "absolute zero" mental shields have been breached by Mira’s sensory input.
-Active obligations: Must grant Mira access to Spire stabilization reservoirs — UNPAID.
-Open loops: Limits of the sensory bleed (Ch01) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: Realized the Soul-tether is Progenitor technology, far older and more dangerous than the Emperor claimed.
-Arc: 20% — Transitioned from a detached scholar-administrator to a biological anchor in a forced union.
-Permanent: YES (Mana-pool is now interlinked with Mira’s; proximity dictates his magical stability).
+- **Location:** The Obsidian Bridge (Center Span), Great Crevasse boundary.
+- **Physical:** Thermal shock; right hand trembling from Mira’s heat; internal "Absolute Zero" mental wards are shattered.
+- **Emotional:** Calculating but shaken; forced into a state of empathy he finds tactically disadvantageous.
+- **Active Obligations:** Must provide Spire resources to stabilize the collapsing Pyre infrastructure.
+- **Open Loops:** Needs to map the sensory bleed limits; investigating the Progenitor origins of the tether technology.
+- **Known Secrets:** Has identified the ritual as an ancient "Anchor" spell, not a modern diplomatic Accord.
+- **Arc:** 20% — From detached academic observer to a biological participant in a shared existence.
+- **Permanent:** YES (Mana-pool is now fluctuating in sympathetic resonance with Mira).
 
 ## Kaelen (Senior Proctor)
-Location: The Obsidian Bridge (East Approach).
-Physical: Singed robes; eyes adjusted to the violet-white glare of the Starfall.
-Emotional: Loyal but deeply apprehensive; views Dorian as an invader.
-Active obligations: Owes Mira a logistics report on faculty housing for the Spire arrivals — UNPAID.
-Arc: 05% — Shifted from academic advisor to a reluctant liaison for a merged school.
-Permanent: NO
+- **Location:** Bridge Perimeter, Pyre Academy side.
+- **Physical:** Singed robes; eyes bloodshot from the Starfall’s glare.
+- **Emotional:** Terribly protective of Mira; views Dorian as an invader.
+- **Arc:** 05% — Transitioning from advisor to resistance-coordinator within the merged faculty.
 
 # World State: ch-01
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- High Chancellor’s Guard: Witnessed the ritualistic bonding—now regard Mira and Dorian as a singular political unit.
-- Kaelen (Pyre Academy): Deeply suspicious of the Spire’s "stabilization" motives; likely to obstruct integration.
+- **Kaelen (Pyre):** ADVERSARIAL — Believes the Spire intends to "quench" Pyre’s fire; will likely sabotage initial administrative meetings.
+- **The Emperor's Guard:** VIGILANT — Witnessed the successful bonding; treats Mira and Dorian as assets rather than leaders.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- The Eternal Throne: Paternalistic/Tyrannical — View Mira and Dorian as tools for cosmic stability.
-- Pyre Academy (FireMages): Insulted and rebellious — The merger is viewed as a hostile takeover.
-- Crystalline Spire (IceMages): Clinical and condescending — View the fire mages as unstable variables needing "cooling."
+- **The Eternal Throne:** PREDATORY — Using the Starfall crisis to consolidate magical power.
+- **Pyre Academy:** MARTYRED — Faculty feel betrayed by the Accord; "The Fire Must Burn Alone" is becoming a quiet mantra.
+- **Crystalline Spire:** CLINICAL — View the Pyre sorcerers as unstable variables needing "correction."
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Starfall Drift: The sky-tear is widening; reality at the edges is beginning to fray into static.
-- The Starfall Accord: Now legally and magically binding; the two academies are officially one entity.
-- The Sensory Bleed: Active; Mira and Dorian now share physical sensations (pain, temperature, heartbeat) and high-intensity emotional spikes.
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+- **The Starfall Drift:** Constellations are physically falling; the sky is a bruised violet; mana-density in the atmosphere is at a lethal high.
+- **The Accord Binding:** The magical tether is absolute; Mira and Dorian cannot be more than one hundred yards apart without physical trauma.
+- **The Sensory Bleed:** ACTIVE — Sudden spikes in Mira’s anger manifest as heat in Dorian’s skin; Dorian’s calm manifests as a chill in Mira’s lungs.
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