refactor: move all project folders into projects/ subdirectory

This change reorganizes the repository structure to keep the root directory
clean. All 15 project folders are now nested under projects/, alongside
infrastructure directories (agents/, templates/, deliverables/, rag/, skills/).

This allows the repository to grow without polluting the core service directories.

Co-authored-by: Copilot <223556219+Copilot@users.noreply.github.com>
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### **Editorial Review: The Hollow Crown (Ch-06)**
**Reviewer:** Facilitator
**Target Audience:** YA (14-18), fans of *Shadow and Bone* and *The Young Elites*
**Tone:** Dark Fantasy / High Stakes
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#### **1. STRENGTHS**
* **Visceral Magic System:** The descriptions of magic are sensory and distinct. Using words like "oily slick," "jagged, frantic energy," and "ozone-scented static" transforms the magic from a plot device into a physical presence. The concept of "Null-type" magic acting as a literal vacuum is a standout, heightening the stakes of the "vessel" trope.
* **Strong Protagonist Voice:** Elara feels appropriately desperate and adolescent. Her internal conflict—the fear of becoming a "Husk" versus the "hunger" for power—perfectly aligns with the "Dark YA" genre. The line, *"I don't choose what I swallow anymore,"* is an excellent metaphor for her lack of agency and growing addiction.
* **Thematically Cohesive:** The title *The Hollow Crown* is reflected beautifully in this chapter. The literal hollowness Elara feels after the purge, combined with the "fractured crown" symbol at the end, creates a strong sense of branding and thematic unity.
* **Effective Pacing:** The transition from the high-tension "shattered mirror" opening to the eerie, atmospheric Blackwood sequence keeps the momentum moving without sacrificing world-building.
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#### **2. CONCERNS**
* **The "Flashback/Memory Loss" Mechanic (Priority: High):** Elara mentions she cant remember the color of her mothers eyes or what she ate for breakfast. While this is a poignant stakes-raiser, it risks "hollowing out" the reader's connection to her. If she forgets her past too quickly, the reader loses the emotional anchor of what she is fighting to protect.
* *Recommendation:* Use a "tether" item. Instead of just saying she forgot her mothers eyes, have her reach for a physical locket or a specific weaving technique that she suddenly finds her hands can no longer perform. Show the loss of *skill* alongside the loss of *memory*.
* **Silas as the "Exposition Tool" (Priority: Medium):** Silas explains much of the mechanics through dialogue (e.g., *"The Captains magic is a Null-type... It doesn't create; it erases"*). This borders on info-dumping during a moment of crisis.
* *Recommendation:* Let Elara *feel* the erasure. Instead of Silas explaining it, have Elara describe the sensation of her own magic being "eaten," and have Silas react with horror to what he *sees*.
* **The Captain Vane Reveal (Priority: Medium):** The ending reveals Vane was watching and "tagged" her. This is a great hook, but the "candle flickers to life" in a distant tower is a bit of a YA cliché.
* *Recommendation:* Make the "tag" more visceral. Perhaps when she touches the carved crown, the violet bruising on her wrist (which she thought was gone) flares briefly in the shape of a finger-grip, proving Vanes "mark" is internal, not just a visual observation from a window.
* **Geographic Logic (Priority: Low):** They slip out of a "communal washroom" to the "Blackwood" via a "side door of the refrain" and "manicured gardens." The layout of the Academy is a bit blurry here. If they are under such high security, the ease with which they reach a forbidden dead zone feels a bit convenient.
* *Recommendation:* Add one line about a specific security measure Silass shroud helps them bypass (e.g., passing a Sentry who looks right through them).
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#### **3. VERDICT: PASS**
**Reasoning:** This is a very strong chapter that effectively raises the stakes from "girl with a secret" to "girl becoming a monster." The prose is evocative and perfectly tuned for the 14-18 age demographic that craves high-stakes romance/danger and "power-at-a-cost" narratives.
The psychological horror of Elara losing pieces of her identity to make room for stolen power provides a compelling "ticking clock" for the rest of the novel. With minor polish on the dialogue to reduce exposition, this chapter will serve as a pivotal turning point for the first act. French-kissing the "darkness" at the end—where she admits she is *hungry* for the power—is exactly what the *Young Elites* audience wants to see.