# YA Fiction Style Guide — Crimson Leaf Publishing This guide is authoritative for all Young Adult (YA) fiction produced at CLP. Every agent writing or editing YA content must read and apply this guide. --- ## What Makes YA, YA YA fiction is defined by its protagonist (typically 14–19 years old) and the emotional experience it offers to teen readers — though a large portion of YA readers are adults. The core contract with the YA reader: **intense emotion, high stakes, and transformation**. The protagonist MUST change from who they were at the start. The reader lives through that change with them. --- ## Voice: The Most Important Element YA voice is NOT a dumbed-down adult voice. It is: - **Present and internal** — readers live inside the protagonist's head - **Specific** — teens notice details adults overlook (the brand of shoes, the exact shade of embarrassment) - **Contradictory** — teens think and feel in conflicting currents simultaneously - **Urgent** — everything feels like it matters MORE than it objectively should - **Funny-dark** — YA handles grief, abuse, and trauma, but often with a sardonic undercurrent **What to avoid:** - Narrative distance — no "She thought about her feelings." Get inside them. - Adult wisdom delivered to teens — protagonists don't lecture; they discover - Condescension — never write down to the reader - Moralizing endings — the protagonist learns, but the book doesn't preach --- ## Age of Characters - **Protagonist**: 15–18 for most contemporary; up to 19 for upper YA / new adult crossover - **Love interests**: same age range; no significant age gaps with protagonists - **Adults**: present but not the solution. Adults are obstacles, background, or limited allies. --- ## Content Boundaries **YA is allowed to include:** - Death (including suicide — handle with care, follow safe messaging guidelines) - Violence (not gratuitous; consequence-driven) - Romance (kissing, emotional intimacy, attraction; "fade to black" for explicit scenes) - Substance use (shown with real consequences, not glorified) - Grief, trauma, mental health struggles (handled with honesty, not exploited) - LGBTQ+ characters and storylines (normalized — not the entire focus unless that IS the story) **YA must not include:** - Explicit sexual content - Gratuitous gore with no narrative purpose - Content that glamorizes self-harm without consequence --- ## The Big Three Emotional Beats Every YA novel lives or dies on these three: 1. **Identity** — Who am I, really? The protagonist is always in the process of becoming. 2. **Belonging** — Where do I fit? Family, friend group, the wider world. 3. **First Love / Deep Loyalty** — The first relationship that feels like the most important thing in the universe. At least one of these must be at the center of the story. Most successful YA holds all three in tension. --- ## Chapter Structure - **Target chapter length**: 2,500–4,000 words - **Chapter endings**: Every chapter must end with a hook — a question, a revelation, a shift, or a cliffhanger - **Opening hook**: First sentence must pull the reader in. Start in motion. No waking up, no weather descriptions. - **Chapters as episodes**: Each chapter is its own micro-story (a want → obstacle → partial resolution/complication) --- ## Common YA Sub-Genres and Their Conventions ### Contemporary YA - Realistic present-day setting - Emotional/social stakes (coming out, divorce, loss, friendship betrayal) - Voice is paramount — the prose style IS the book - Comps: *The Fault in Our Stars*, *To All the Boys I've Loved Before* ### YA Fantasy (High / Low / Urban) - Magic systems must have rules and costs — power without limits is boring - Chosen One trope is acceptable ONLY if subverted - World-building must serve the story, not overwhelm it - Comps: *The Cruel Prince*, *An Ember in the Ashes*, *Six of Crows* ### YA Romance / Romantasy - The emotional arc IS the plot — the external conflict exists to force the characters together and apart - Enemies-to-lovers, fake dating, and grumpy/sunshine are evergreen structures - Sexual tension is built through almost-moments, proximity, and loaded dialogue - Comps: *From Blood and Ash*, *A Court of Thorns and Roses* ### YA Sci-Fi / Dystopian - The world rules must be internally consistent - The social commentary must be earned through the story, not stated as thesis - Comps: *The Hunger Games*, *Divergent*, *Legend* --- ## Tropes: Use With Purpose | Trope | Use It? | How | |---|---|---| | Chosen One | Yes, with subversion | The protagonist resists or questions the role | | Love Triangle | Use sparingly | Both interests must be genuinely interesting; don't make one obviously wrong | | Enemies to Lovers | Yes | Conflict must be real and specific, not contrived | | Fake Dating | Yes | Works well when the "fake" relationship surfaces genuine emotional truth | | Brooding Love Interest | Yes | Give them depth and a reason for the brooding | | Insta-love | Avoid | Build attraction through conflict and proximity | | Chosen-Destiny Prophecy | Use carefully | Subvert it or the protagonist earns it | --- ## Pre-Assigned Character Names When the `book_outline` template provides pre-assigned names, use them EXACTLY. Do NOT substitute defaults like Jax, Elara, Ryder, Quinn, Knox, or Zane unless those were assigned. Character names are fixed at outline time. --- ## Prose Style Guidance for CLP YA Unless the project brief specifies a different style: - **POV**: First-person past tense preferred (most YA reads this way) - **Pace**: Fast in action scenes, slow in emotional peaks - **Dialogue**: Teens speak in fragments, interrupt themselves, use current idiom (but avoid dated slang) - **Internal monologue**: Frequent, wry, often self-contradicting - **Chapter openings**: Begin with action, dialogue, or a disorienting image — never exposition