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- Split project.rag.md into 6 focused RAG files (voice-signatures, magic-system, story-premise, factions, character-state, world-state) - book_chapter.yml: PASS 0 STEP 5 replaced with live RAG character/world state check + location continuity validation; PASS 3 added for character+world state extraction after each chapter (rag_write -> character-state RAG + deliverable snapshot) - chapter_polish.yml: PASS state extraction after final document (full-mode canonical state) - book_outline.yml: added Factions section template with NPC memory model - NEW character_update.yml: permanent arc change template (updates static char profile) - chapter_review.yml: Sprint 56g voice authenticity fixes (fire/ice -> Body/Mind duality) Co-authored-by: Copilot <223556219+Copilot@users.noreply.github.com>
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96 lines
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name: chapter_review
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description: >
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Independent chapter review. Agent reads the chapter and produces a structured
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critique in their editorial domain with explicit must-fix vs optional categorization.
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debug: true
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model: power
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system: agent_prompt
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agent_prompt:
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- system.md
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sections:
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- project
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- rag
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- message
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- instructions
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steps:
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- type: think
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max_tokens: 4000
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hint: |
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TARGET AUDIENCE: {genre_audience}
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GENRE: {genre_name}
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CHAPTER: {chapter_ref}
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---
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CHAPTER TEXT:
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{chapter_text}
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---
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Write a detailed editorial review from your perspective.
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Be specific — cite line numbers or quote passages where relevant.
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Structure your review using EXACTLY these six labeled sections:
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1. STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
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List elements that are working well and must survive the editorial process unchanged.
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Be specific: quote or paraphrase the passage. Vague praise ("the writing is good")
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is not useful here.
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ALSO CHECK: If a Character Bible or Voice Signatures section exists in the project
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context, verify each named character's voice signature is present and distinct.
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Can you identify each character's dialogue without speaker tags? Note whether
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YES or NO for each main character.
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2. MUST-FIX — CONTINUITY
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List factual errors, POV breaks, timeline inconsistencies, or world-rule violations.
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These are non-negotiable — they cannot be left as "optional." For each item, state:
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- What the error is
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- What the correction should be
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3. MUST-FIX — CLARITY
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List passages where meaning is genuinely obscured, transitions are dropped, or
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threads are left dangling in a way that blocks reader comprehension. For each item:
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- Quote or reference the passage
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- State the concrete fix
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4. OPTIONAL SUGGESTIONS
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Craft improvements that would strengthen the chapter but are NOT required for it to
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pass. Label each suggestion clearly as optional. Do not inflate this section — only
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include suggestions with a clear upside and low risk of voice damage.
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⚠️ Do NOT suggest adding thematic contrast metaphors, making dialogue more elegant,
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or smoothing sentence variation — these are voice PRESERVATION issues, not fixes.
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5. FORBIDDEN CHANGES / NON-GOALS
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List things that might appear to be problems but should NOT be changed — intentional
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voice choices, genre conventions, structural decisions that are working. This section
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protects the draft from over-editing.
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ALWAYS list here: verbal tics, repeated phrases, and "imperfect" speech that is
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clearly a character signature, not an error.
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6. VERDICT
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One of: PASS / REVISE
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Use PASS if only optional improvements remain.
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Use REVISE if any MUST-FIX items are present.
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Reserve judgment on full rewrites — that decision belongs to the roundtable.
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- type: document
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filename: "Chapter_{chapter_number}_review_{review_letter}"
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- type: close
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rag_update: false
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adjudication:
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enabled: true
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pass_threshold: 60
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deliverable_type: editorial_review
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criteria:
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specificity:
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weight: 40
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description: "Review cites specific passages, scenes, or structural elements in all sections — not vague general commentary"
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actionability:
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weight: 35
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description: "Each MUST-FIX item includes a concrete, implementable correction; OPTIONAL items are clearly labeled"
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coverage:
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weight: 25
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description: "All six sections are present; STRENGTHS and FORBIDDEN sections are populated, not left empty"
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