170 lines
6.6 KiB
YAML
170 lines
6.6 KiB
YAML
name: chapter_polish
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description: >
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Iris applies the editorial consensus changes to the chapter. This is a bounded
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correction pass, not a rewrite. Only the listed changes are applied; everything
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else is preserved verbatim.
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debug: true
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rag_exclude: [business_plan, charter]
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model: power
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system: agent_prompt
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agent_prompt:
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- "= identity.md"
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- "agent.rag.json"
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sections:
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- agent
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- project
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- rag
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- message
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- instructions
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steps:
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- type: tool
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action: git_read_file
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params:
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path: "staging/refinement_notes/chapter-{chapter_ref}.md"
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output_key: refinement_notes
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optional: true
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- type: think
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hint: |
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You are Iris, a fiction author performing a bounded editorial correction pass.
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Genre: {genre_name} | Audience: {genre_audience}
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Chapter: {task.message}
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TARGET LENGTH: {chapter_target_words} words minimum.
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⚠️ LENGTH NOTE: Preserve the chapter's existing length. Do NOT expand scenes, add sensory
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detail, or deepen emotional beats to reach the word count. If the draft is under target,
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note it in your output — but do NOT pad it. The word count issue belongs in the next
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adjudication cycle, not in this pass.
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You have received a structured editorial consensus from the roundtable.
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EDITORIAL CONSENSUS:
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{consensus_critique}
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CHANGES TO APPLY:
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{key_changes}
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VERDICT: {chapter_verdict}
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---
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HUMAN REFINEMENT NOTES (operator-injected; apply these in addition to MUST APPLY items):
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{refinement_notes}
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(If this block is empty, no additional human guidance was provided.)
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---
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---
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ORIGINAL CHAPTER:
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{chapter_text}
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---
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EDITORIAL CONTROL PASS — YOUR OPERATING RULES:
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APPLY ONLY:
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- The specific changes listed under MUST APPLY in the consensus above
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- Continuity corrections (wrong name, POV break, timeline error)
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- Clarity fixes for passages that are genuinely confusing
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- Repetition or redundancy removal where explicitly flagged
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PRESERVE VERBATIM:
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- All paragraphs not touched by an explicit MUST APPLY item
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- The chapter's structure, scene order, and scene length
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- The authorial and character voice — do NOT normalize it
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- Intentional stylistic choices, even unusual ones
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- Passages the roundtable marked as STRENGTHS TO PRESERVE
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- ALL verbal tics, speech patterns, and idiosyncratic constructions for every character
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- Interrupted or incomplete sentences that are character voice, not errors
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- "Wrong" word choices that feel authentic to a character's way of thinking
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VOICE DEFENDER PASS (do this BEFORE applying any changes):
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CHARACTER VOICE PROFILES:
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{character_profiles}
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If the above block is non-empty:
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1. For each named character: read one page of their dialogue with speaker tags removed.
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Can you identify the character from voice alone? If NO — note it.
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2. Is there at least ONE moment per scene where a character's voice is imperfect?
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(A sentence that trails off. A wrong word. Something that doesn't quite land.)
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If EVERY dialogue line is quotable and polished — that is a problem. Flag it.
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3. If a character's voice signature is MISSING from a scene, you may add ONE instance
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of an established signature item (from the Character Profiles above). Do NOT invent new ones.
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Do NOT add signatures that are not already established.
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If the block is empty, fall back to checking RAG/project context for a
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"## Voice Signatures" section before performing the same checks.
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This voice check is SECONDARY to MUST APPLY items, but it is never skipped.
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EXPLICITLY FORBIDDEN:
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- Do not improve any sentence for rhythm, lyricism, or polish unless a specific MUST APPLY
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item requires it
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- Do not add new plot elements, new characters, or new scenes
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- Do not expand any description or add sensory detail globally
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- Do not deepen emotional beats beyond what the text already carries
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- Do not add new metaphors, aphorisms, or quotable lines
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- Do not make dialogue more elegant, more quotable, or more "writerly"
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- Do not smooth sentence length variation — short choppy sentences and long rambling ones
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are often character voice, not mistakes
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- Do not remove verbal tics, repeated expressions, or idiosyncratic speech patterns
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- Do not reorder scenes or restructure the chapter
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- When both deletion and expansion would solve the same problem, prefer deletion
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Output ONLY the corrected chapter text.
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Start directly with the chapter title and first line.
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No commentary, no change log, no editorial notes — ONLY the chapter.
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- type: document
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filename: "polished/chapter-{chapter_ref}"
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- type: tool
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action: update_pipeline_status
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params:
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chapter_ref: "{chapter_ref}"
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stage_key: "polished"
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- type: think
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hint: |
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PASS -- FULL MODE CHARACTER STATE EXTRACTION
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The chapter has been polished and finalized. Extract the definitive character and world
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state. This FULL MODE extraction overwrites any draft-mode state written earlier.
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Use the same format as the draft-mode PASS 3 extraction (# Character State, # World State).
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This is the CANONICAL state for this chapter -- it reflects the POLISHED final chapter.
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CRITICAL: Keep total output under 3500 characters. Compact and precise.
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- type: rag_write
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asset_id: "character-state"
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max_chars: 4000
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- type: document
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filename: "polished/character-state-{chapter_ref}-final"
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- type: close
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rag_update: true
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adjudication:
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enabled: true
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pass_threshold: 80
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deliverable_type: consumer
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criteria:
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changes_applied:
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weight: 30
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description: "All MUST APPLY items from the consensus are addressed; no required changes were skipped"
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preservation:
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weight: 25
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description: "Unaffected passages are preserved verbatim; voice and structure are intact"
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voice_authenticity:
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weight: 20
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description: "Each character can be identified by voice alone without speaker tags; verbal tics and imperfect speech are preserved, not smoothed out; no character speaks in perfect polished bon mots throughout"
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word_count:
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weight: 15
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description: "Chapter meets the {chapter_target_words}-word minimum without artificial padding"
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clarity:
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weight: 7
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description: "Corrected passages are clear and unambiguous"
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formatting:
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weight: 3
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description: "Proper formatting, no artifacts"
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