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 ## Lena Duval
 Location: Safehouse, Lower Ninth Ward, New Orleans.
-Physical: Ravaged by "The Severing." Experiences cold tremors, a "hollow" chest cavity where the swamp hum once lived, and sensory overload from urban iron.
-Emotional: Grief-stricken and "blind." Feels a deep sense of betrayal by her own blood/land. Highly defensive regarding her vulnerability.
-Active Obligations:
-- Owes Jax Harlan protection/truth (ACTIVE).
-- Owes the land a balancing of scales (UNPAID - DEBT INCREASING).
-Open Loops:
-- The Urban Wall: Must learn to survive without her "sight" (UNRESOLVED).
-- The Mother-Whisper: Distinguishing memory from the Coven's call (UNRESOLVED).
-Known Secrets:
-- CARRIED: The project name "Phlegethon."
-- CARRIED: The suspicion that Maribelle is using her mother’s voice as a lure.
-Arc: 45% — Transitioned from flight to a survivalist "hollow" state; she is a "fish out of water" stripped of her power.
+Physical: Plunged into "The Severing"—violent tremors, cold sweats, and a sense of hollow deafness where her magic used to hum. The city's iron and hum cause physical nausea.
+Emotional: Violated and trapped; mourning the loss of her connection to the land while fearing the "Urban Wall" will kill her before the Coven does.
+Active obligations: Owes Jax Harlan the truth behind "Phlegethon" (ch-05) — UNPAID; Owes herself a way to muffle Maribelle’s psychic intrusion (ch-05) — UNPAID.
+Open loops: Navigating a world where she is "blind" to the supernatural (ch-05) — UNRESOLVED; Confirming if the voice in her head is truly Maribelle or her own fracturing mind (ch-05) — UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-05): Knows the developers are targeting the "Heart of the Bend" for Project Phlegethon; CARRIED (ch-05): Realizes her mother's locket is vibrating in sync with the city’s industrial noise, not the swamp.
+Arc: 45% — Transitioned from a defiant runaway to a crippled survivor; her stubborn independence is now her only weapon since her magic is gone.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## Jax Harlan
-Location: Safehouse, Lower Ninth Ward.
-Physical: Exhausted but wired. Hand on his holster; hyper-vigilant.
-Emotional: Protective and burdened. He is realizing that his secular skills are insufficient against Lena's "land-sickness."
-Active Obligations:
-- Protective detail for Lena (ACTIVE).
-Open Loops:
-- Evading the Coven's reach in the city (ACTIVE).
-- Securing a "neutral" asset or bridge to help Lena (UNRESOLVED).
-Known Secrets:
-- CARRIED: Fully accepts that the Bayou is "alive" and reclaiming Lena, though he lacks the vocabulary to fix it.
-Arc: 20% — Shifted from a paid guide to a genuine protector; he has prioritized Lena’s survival over his own "clean hands."
+Location: Safehouse, Lower Ninth Ward, New Orleans.
+Physical: Tense, sleep-deprived, nursing a bruised shoulder from the frantic retreat.
+Emotional: Growing sense of "out of my depth" awe; he is moving from skepticism to a grim acceptance of the Duval curse.
+Active obligations: Delivering Lena to a "neutral" contact in the city (ch-05) — ACTIVE.
+Open loops: Identifying who leaked their safehouse location (ch-05) — ACTIVE.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-05): Has observed that Lena’s tremors stop only when she touches something organic or him.
+Arc: 20% — His role as a mere "escort" has dissolved into a shared fate; he no longer asks "if" the magic is real, only "how" to survive it.
 Permanent: YES
 
 # World State: ch-05
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- Aunt Maribelle / The Coven: They have successfully initiated "The Severing." They are currently "pulling" on the metaphysical tether, using Lena’s geography-based magic as a leash.
+- Aunt Maribelle / The Coven: HOSTILE — Proved their reach extends beyond the swamp through the "Severing" ritual.
+- The "Neutral" (Mentioned): UNKNOWN — A rumored asset in New Orleans who handles "displaced" talent.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- The Duval Coven: Hostile/Aggressive. They view Lena as a runaway asset, not a person.
-- Terrebonne Development Corp: Predatory. With Lena (the primary spiritual obstacle) incapacitated in the city, surveyors are accelerating work on Project Phlegethon.
+- The Duval Coven: Relentless — They are using Lena’s withdrawal symptoms as a leash to pull her back to the Bend.
+- Terrebonne Development Corp: Opportunistic — Clearing the physical brush of the swamp while the Coven clears the metaphysical.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Severing: A magical withdrawal syndrome. The physical distance from Cypress Bend is actively killing Lena's spirit-senses.
-- The Urban Wall: The iron, concrete, and electrical noise of New Orleans acts as a "dampening field," masking Lena from the Coven but also isolating her from her own power.
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-## Environmental/Sensory
-- The Safehouse: A sensory "desert." Smells of dust, old grease, and industrial cleaner. The vibration of the nearby bridge traffic causes Lena physical nausea.
-- The Stagnation: Without Lena’s influence, the water in Cypress Bend is rumored to be "souring" (Turning stagnant/black).
+- The Severing: The magical feedback loop causing Lena’s physical collapse as she distances herself from her power source.
+- The Urban Wall: The concept that city iron and electricity act as a static-filled barrier, shielding Lena from Coven tracking but also cutting off her "breath" (magic).
+- The Stagnation: A growing rot in Cypress Bend reported by Lena’s last visions; the land is souring without a Duval to ground it.
 
 ## Metadata
 - Current Chapter: 05
-- Key Item: Lena’s silver locket (Twisted/Strained).
-- Key Term: "The Urban Wall" (The supernatural interference of the city).
+- Key Item: Lena’s silver locket (now a source of irritating vibration).
+- Key Term: "The Urban Wall."
+- Mood: Claustrophobic, clinical, and desperate.