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 ## Elias Thorne
 Location: The Oakhaven Archive, Sub-Level 3 (Main Terminal)
-Physical: Severe exhaustion; bleeding hands from glass lacerations; crushing pressure in chest from acoustic resonance.
-Emotional: Desperate but resolute; feeling a sense of sacrificial clarity.
+Physical: Severe exhaustion; bleeding from hands; sensory overload due to signal resonance.
+Emotional: Fatalistic and desperate; driven by a sacrificial impulse.
 Active obligations: owes Sarah Miller a full explanation of the subterranean source (Ch-11) -- UNPAID.
 Open loops: [Elias/The Curator] The true function of the "Final Sequence" (Ch-12) -- RESOLVED.
 Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-11--unresolved): knows the signal is subterranean -- Sarah Miller.
-Arc: 75% -- Committed to total sabotage of the Archive, accepting his own potential destruction to stop the harvest.
-Permanent: YES
+Arc: 75% -- Committed to a "suicide mission" to crash the Archive's terminal to stop the harvest.
 
 ## Sarah Miller
-Location: The Oakhaven Archive, Sub-Level 3 (Monitoring Station)
-Physical: Doubled over with "signal-migraine"; nosebleed; temporary deafness to ambient sound.
-Emotional: Terrified but professionally focused on the data's impossibility.
+Location: The Oakhaven Archive, Sub-Level 3 (Main Terminal / Maintenance Shaft)
+Physical: Blinded by light-bursts; heavy cranial pressure; bleeding from the ears.
+Emotional: Shattered; forced into radical acceptance of the impossible.
 Active obligations: owes Elias support against the Curator (Ch-12) -- PAID.
 Open loops: [Sarah/Biology] The worsening resonance in her skull (Ch-10) -- UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-11--unresolved): knows the Curator falsified safety logs -- Elias.
-Arc: 70% -- Complete abandonment of scientific skepticism in favor of survival and partnership with Elias.
-Permanent: YES
+Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-12--unresolved): knows the Curator falsified safety logs -- Elias.
+Arc: 85% -- Abandoned all scientific skepticism to aid Elias in a desperate act of sabotage.
 
 ## The Curator
 Location: Archive Intercom System / Central Core
-Physical: Non-corporeal manifestation via audio/visual systems.
-Emotional: Divine certainty; clinical detachedness.
+Physical: Non-physical; manifested as a distorted audio-visual entity.
+Emotional: Coldly triumphant; impatient for the "Harvest."
 Open loops: [The Curator/The Signal] Execution of the "Resonance Harvest" (Ch-12) -- UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: knows the "Whisper" is a linguistic virus.
-Arc: 85% -- Shedding the facade of administration to reveal the role of harvester.
-Permanent: NO
+Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-12--unresolved): knows the "Whisper" is a linguistic virus -- Elias/Sarah.
+Arc: 90% -- Shed the pretense of "management" to reveal himself as the architect of the Signal.
 
 ## Mark
-Location: Security Checkpoint Alpha (Sub-Level 3 Perimeter)
-Physical: Uninjured; curled in a fetal position.
-Emotional: Catatonic with terror; paralyzed by the "breathing" walls.
+Location: Sub-Level 3 Perimeter (Security Door Alpha)
+Physical: Uninjured but catatonic.
+Emotional: Paralyzed by terror; whispering to the shadows.
 Active obligations: owes Elias silence regarding the override (Ch-12) -- PAID.
 Open loops: [Mark/Archive] Location of the missing night shift (Ch-12) -- UNRESOLVED.
-Arc: 15% -- Transitioned from skeptical guard to broken witness.
-Permanent: NO
+Arc: 20% -- Completely broken by the metaphysical decay of the facility.
 
 # World State: ch-12
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- Mark (Security): HOSTILE/TERRIFIED -- Observed the walls shifting -- Refuses to move or assist further.
+- Mark (Security): HOSTILE/TERRIFIED -- Viewed the walls "folding" -- Refused to move or help Elias further.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- The Archive (Oakhaven): UNSTABLE -- The architecture is physically warping to accommodate the signal resonance.
+- The Archive (Oakhaven): SENTIENT/HOSTILE -- The architecture is actively shifting to prevent the protagonists from reaching the terminal.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- Phase Three Ignition: IN PROGRESS. The "Resonance Harvest" has begun; the signal is now converting biological matter into data.
-- Facility Lockdown: TOTAL. The Curator has disabled all manual overrides.
-- Acoustic Liquefaction: The internal walls of Sub-Level 3 are beginning to vibrate at frequencies that soften solid materials.
+- Resonance Harvest: INITIATED. The Whisper has manifested as a physical, blinding light and high-decibel frequency intended to "reformat" occupants.
+- Terminal Sabotage: IN PROGRESS. Elias has initiated a feedback loop to destroy the central processor.
+- Total Isolation: The facility has entered a "Zero-State" where outside physics no longer apply.