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 ## Lena Duval
 Location: The Heart Tree (Siphon Hub Core)
-Physical: Translucent skin with cyan bioluminescence; rooted into the sap; rhythmic tectonic pulse.
+Physical: Translucent skin pulsing with cyan bioluminescence; rooted into the sap; heartbeat synced with the bayou.
 Emotional: Divine indifference; fierce territoriality; fading human memory.
-Active obligations: Jax Harlan Life-Debt (Ch-12) -- RESOLVED via Mercy.
-Open loops: Jax/Lena (Ch-15) -- UNRESOLVED (The struggle to retain the "why" of her love).
-Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-01--unresolved): knows the truth of her mother's drowning.
-Arc: 100% -- Transcended from a fugitive to the living embodiment of the Bend.
+Active obligations: Jax Harlan Life-Debt (Ch-12) -- PAID (resolved via mercy/tether).
+Open loops: The Burden of Memory (Ch-15) -- UNRESOLVED (struggle to retain human "why" of love).
+Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-01--unresolved): Knows the location of the hidden Duval ancestor grove -- Jax Harlan and TDC.
+Arc: 100% -- Lena has transcended her human fugitive status to become the living Warden of the Bend.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## Jax Harlan
-Location: Muddy banks of the Hub Perimeter.
+Location: Muddy banks of the Hub Perimeter
 Physical: Exhausted; chemical burns from Siphon discharge; lacerations from vine-blooms.
-Emotional: Mournful; resolute acceptance of his role as the Witness.
+Emotional: Mournful but resolute; accepting of his role as Witness.
 Active obligations: Identify the TDC Mole (Ch-15) -- UNPAID.
-Open loops: Jax/Lena (Ch-15) -- UNRESOLVED (Accepting her as the Warden).
-Known secrets: knows Lena is no longer fully human -- the public/TDC.
-Arc: 100% -- Transitioned from a skeptic boat captain to the primary guardian of the threshold.
+Open loops: TDC Signal Source (Ch-15) -- UNRESOLVED (suspects internal Terrebonne Security betrayal).
+Known secrets: None.
+Arc: 100% -- Transitioned from a skeptical outsider to the primary guardian of the supernatural threshold.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## Aunt Maribelle Duval -- DECEASED (Ch-14)
-Established: Consumption by the Siphon's feedback loop during the final ritual attempt.
-Legacy: Her death ended the internal coven power struggle and allowed Lena's ascension.
+Established: Consumed by the Siphon’s initial surge when she tried to bind the Heart Tree's power.
+Legacy: Her death broke the coven's political hierarchy, leading to their surrender to Lena.
 
 # World State: ch-15
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- The Duval Coven (Cypress Bend): SURRENDERED -- Recognizing Lena's sovereignty, they have abandoned political infighting.
-- Terrebonne Survivors (The Hub): TERROR-STRICKEN -- Fleeing the "Green Hell" toward Upper Districts.
+- The Duval Coven (Cypress Bend): SURRENDERED -- Witnessed Lena's ascension at the Heart Tree -- They have ceased all resistance and recognize her as sovereign.
+- Terrebonne Survivors (The Hub): TERROR-STRICKEN -- Fled the "Green Hell" of the Siphon's collapse -- They are retreating to the Upper Districts in total disarray.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- TDC (Terrebonne Development Corp): DEFEATED -- Prioritizing containment of the reclaimed zone over extraction.
-- The Great Hum: DOMINANT -- Shifted to a rhythmic, biological governor of the Bend's life.
+- TDC (Terrebonne Development Corp): DEFEATED -- Their infrastructure was physically reclaimed by the swamp; priority shifted to containment.
+- The Great Hum: DOMINANT -- The frequency is now a rhythmic, biological pulse governing all life in the Bend.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Great Silence: Total electronic blackout within 10 miles of the Heart Tree; only bio-resonant artifacts function.
-- The Reclaim: Rapid floral growth dismantling industrial infrastructure at the Hub.
+- The Great Silence: Ongoing electronic blackout within a 10-mile radius of the Heart Tree; technology is non-functional.
+- The Reclaim: Rapid-growth vegetation is actively dismantling industrial ruins across the Bend.
 
 ## Key Objects/Locations
-- The Heart Tree: New focal point of power bleeding healing/infectious bioluminescent sap.
-- The Barrier: Sentient "White Mist" wall encircling the Bend, controlled by Lena’s whim.
-- The Silver Locket: Encased in the Heart Tree's wood, symbolizing the burial of human guilt.
+- The Heart Tree: The focal point of power; bleeds bioluminescent sap that causes "Green Fever."
+- The Barrier: A permanent wall of sentient "White Mist" encircling the Bend, controlled by Lena’s whim.
+- The Silver Locket: Enshrined in wood at the Heart Tree; symbolizes the burial of Lena's human guilt and her Mother's memory.