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# Character State: ch-05
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## Lyra Vance
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Location: The Blackened Nave, Weaver’s Guild.
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Physical: Standing; breathing shallow; palms stained with the graphite of the map she shouldn't have finished.
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Emotional: Defiant but brittle; the shock has hardened into a cold, protective shell.
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Active obligations: To survive the tribunal and find the first anchor point of Oakhaven.
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Open loops: [Lyra/Malakor] The public accusation of treason—UNRESOLVED.
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Known secrets: CARRIED: The map she drew didn't just track Oakhaven; it predicted the exact geometric failure of the Great Loom.
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Arc: 15%—She has transitioned from a falling apprentice to a declared heretic, accepting the role of "Unraveler" as a tactical necessity.
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Permanent: YES
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## Liora Voss
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Location: The Threshold, Core Drive-Spindle (Lockdown)
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Physical: Ocular hemorrhaging; left palm aperture pulsing violet; indigo staining reaching mid-bicep; persistent tremors; smells of lanolin and indigo dye.
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Emotional: Defiant; tactical; physically exhausted but mentally sharp; fatalistic.
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Active obligations: Owes Loom maintenance of the "Dirty Circuit" (ch-04) — UNPAID; owes Thorne biological stability via shared link (ch-04) — UNPAID.
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Open loops: Liora and Thorne vs. the Thirteenth Strand (ch-04) — UNRESOLVED; Liora vs. Conclave Purists' coup (ch-04) — UNRESOLVED.
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Known secrets: Witnessed her parents' souls unbound—Thorne and the Conclave do not know the full trauma.
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Arc: 25% — Integrated the heretical Thirteenth Strand; chose to entwine life-thread with Thorne to stabilize the machine.
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## High Weaver Malakor
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Location: The High Dais.
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Physical: Looming; clutching the Obsidian Shears like a scepter; his gaze never leaves Lyra's hands.
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Emotional: Triumphant and wary; he smells the "smoke" of Lyra’s emerging power and fears its lack of structure.
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Active obligations: To finalize Lyra's exile before she can speak the truth about the Loom's flaw.
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Open loops: [Malakor/Dorian] Testing Dorian’s loyalty by forcing him to witness the sentencing.
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Known secrets: The Obsidian Shears are losing their edge because the Loom they govern is dying.
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Arc: 20%—Moves from passive architect to active prosecutor.
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Permanent: YES
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## Thorne Quill
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Location: Weaving Chamber, restraint chair.
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Physical: Organs vibrating with Loom frequency; skin etched with indigo ink-blood; metaphysical weight increased; bound to Liora by a violet tether.
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Emotional: Hyper-attuned to the Loom; protective of Liora; seething with newfound power.
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Active obligations: Owes Liora biological stabilization/anchor-weight (ch-04) — UNPAID.
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Open loops: Communication with Loom's consciousness (ch-04) — UNRESOLVED.
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Known secrets: Communicating with the Loom's sentient intent—hidden from Liora.
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Arc: 25% — Transitioned from disposable sacrifice to sentient, necessary anchor for the Loom's stability.
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## Dorian Thorne
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Location: The Shadows of the South Pillar.
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Physical: Perfectly still; left hand rhythmically adjusting his silver cufflink.
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Emotional: Calculatedly distant; experiencing "precision collapse" as he realizes Lyra’s map is technically superior to his own.
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Active obligations: Bound by Guild oath to execute the "Blind Stitch" on any declared heretic.
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Open loops: [Dorian/Lyra] Whether he will anchor his thread to her or let her slip.
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Known secrets: He has already spotted the "seam" in Malakor’s legal argument but remains silent.
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Arc: 15%—The first cracks in his "High-Born" filter appear as he chooses a vantage point that obscures Lyra from the other Guards.
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Permanent: YES
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## Elder Maros
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Location: High Observation Gallery.
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Physical: Leaning on bone-white cane; eyes clouded by indigo cataracts.
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Emotional: Politically panicked; manipulative; fearful of the Purist breach.
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Active obligations: Owes Liora political protection from Purists (ch-04) — UNPAID.
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Open loops: Maros vs. imminent Purist mobilization (ch-04) — UNRESOLVED.
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Arc: 20% — Sanctioned heresy for personal/political survival; now a hostage to the ritual's success.
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# World State: ch-05
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## NPC Memory
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- The Guild Acolytes: CONDEMNATION — They have seen Lyra fail to kneel; they now associate her "precise" posture with the arrogance that "killed" Master Elian.
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- Junior Binders: TRAUMATIZED/INTRIGUED — Witnessed binding; compulsively sketching forbidden patterns; high risk of radicalization.
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- Archival Guards: HOSTILE — Transitioned from gatekeepers to jailers; increasingly likely to use force.
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## Faction Attitudes
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- The Weaver’s Guild: RADICALIZED — The fear of the Great Severing has turned the Guild into a reactionary body seeking blood to satisfy the silence of the Loom.
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- Conclave Purists: MILITANT — Viewing indigo flare as proof of corruption; mobilizing to breach and "purge" the contamination.
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- The Stained: NASCENT — Underground Binders viewing Liora’s survival as the first step in a necessary evolution.
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## Active World Events
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- The Great Severing: ACCELERATING — The ozone scent in the chamber indicates the reality-tear is widening, fed by the vacuum of the Loom’s 14% integrity.
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- The Displacement: ONGOING — The shadows in the Nave are no longer stretching according to the light source, but according to the "Thinning."
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## Technical Stats
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- Loom Integrity: 12% (Falling).
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- Thread Tension: Negative (The threads are beginning to "push" rather than "pull").
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- Judicial Status: Excommunication sequence initiated.
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- Evidence: The Map of Oakhaven (Confiscated by Malakor).
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- The Dirty Circuit: Stabilized by Liora-Thorne link; demanding constant resonance and biological toll.
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- Indigo Contagion: Gravity fluctuations and violet light "bleeds" in upper galleries due to the Thirteenth Strand.
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- Lockdown Protocol: Core Spindle physically sealed; internal silos arming.
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- Loom Frequency: Achieved low-level sentience; audible/perceptible only to Thorne.
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- Ritual Outcome: The Thirteenth Strand is bound; the machine is functional but "stained" with unpredictable energy.
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