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 # Character State: ch-07
 
 ## Sarah Miller
-- **Location:** Miller Household, Second Floor Hallway.
-- **Physical:** Profound bilateral tinnitus and temporary deafness; blood stemming from ears; severe tremors; adrenaline-fueled exhaustion.
-- **Emotional:** High-functioning shock; transition from skepticism to tactical aggression.
-- **Active obligations:** Owes Elias Thorne a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
-- **Open loops:** [Sarah] Digital recorder "ghost-looping" (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] Validation of 1927 occult chants (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] The apparition’s vision of Elias’s death (ch-06) — UNRESOLVED.
-- **Secrets:** Carries 1927 occult chant data (ch-02); the "Whispers" weaponized her professional shaming against her (ch-06).
-- **Arc:** 55% — Her "skeptical anchor" archetype has shattered. She has weaponized her equipment, successfully repelling the entity using a feedback loop.
+Location: Miller Household, Kitchen Floor
+Physical: Bilateral tinnitus; bleeding from ears; neurological shock; severe headache; hands trembling.
+Emotional: Hyper-focused; adrenaline-suppressed terror; grimly vindicated.
+Active obligations: Owes Elias Thorne a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
+Open loops: [Sarah] Digital recorder ghost-looping (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] The apparition’s vision of her death (ch-06) — UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED: 1927 occult chant data; CARRIED: Knows "Whispers" manifest visually.
+Arc: 55% -- Transitioned from victim to engineer. Weaponized acoustic feedback to repel the physical manifestation.
+Permanent: YES
 
 ## Elias Thorne
-- **Location:** En route/Entering Miller Household (Arrival imminent).
-- **Physical:** Heightened sensory perception; biological synchronization with 14Hz hum.
-- **Emotional:** Fear-driven resolve; protective desperation.
-- **Active obligations:** Owes Sarah a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
-- **Open loops:** [Elias] 1927 "Great Silence" signatures (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias] "Wet iron" scent origin (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED.
-- **Secrets:** Signal matches his pulse (ch-01); belief the signal is sentient/biological (ch-02).
-- **Arc:** 30% — Transitioned from passive scholar to active rescuer; fully accepts the "tether" between himself and Sarah.
+Location: Miller Household, Kitchen/Hallway
+Physical: Heightened sensory alertness; uninjured.
+Emotional: Intensely protective; vindicated but wary; sensing the "Great Silence."
+Active obligations: Owes Sarah a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
+Open loops: [Elias] 1927 "Great Silence" signatures (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias] "Wet iron" scent origin (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias/Sarah] The Presence in the sub-structure (ch-07) — UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED: Signal matches his pulse; CARRIED: Belief the signal is sentient/biological.
+Arc: 40% -- Shifted from observer to participant. Theories validated by Sarah’s survival and the feedback's efficacy.
+Permanent: YES
+
+## Mark
+Location: Miller Household, Living Room
+Physical: Immobile; stunned silence.
+Emotional: Profound shock; peripheral irrelevance.
+Active obligations: None.
+Open loops: None.
+Known secrets: None.
+Arc: 05% -- A static skeptical anchor now silenced by physical evidence.
+Permanent: NO
 
 # World State: ch-07
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- **The Whispers (Entities):** Hostile/Receding. Momentarily destabilized by Sarah’s 110dB terminal burst; they have demonstrated the ability to manifest via unpowered electronics.
+- The Whispers: REPELLED. Encountered a 110dB localized feedback loop (Sarah's trap). Retreated into the sub-structures/crawlspaces to regroup.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- **Archive Administration:** Hostile/Alert. Lockdown remains active; monitoring Elias’s breach of protocol and unauthorized movement.
+- Archive Administration: ALERT. Massive acoustic spike and electromagnetic surge detected at the Miller residence. Thorne remains primary person of interest.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- **The Feedback Spike:** A localized high-decibel recursion loop at the Miller residence has fried all electronics and caused structural acoustic damage.
-- **Convergence:** The dual-track investigation has merged into a single survival event at the Miller household.
-- **The Silence:** A supernatural "void" following the spike where the 14Hz hum is momentarily absent or neutralized.
+- The Great Silence: The persistent 14Hz hum has stopped. It is replaced by an unnatural "pressurized" silence that feels physically heavy.
+- Electronic Dead Zone: Miller residence electronics are destroyed by the EM surge. Circuit breakers melted. 
+- Ozone Leak: Air is thick with the scent of ozone, scorched copper, and sulfur.
 
 ## Environmental Constants
-- **Location:** Miller Residence.
-- **Atmosphere:** Scorched copper and ozone; heavy sulfurous lingering scent.
-- **Lighting:** Zero visibility; all bulbs shattered/fuses blown.
-- **Audio:** Absolute silence/ringing.
+- Location: Miller Residence (Post-Shock).
+- Lighting: Pitch black; flashlights only.
+- Audio: Extreme high-frequency tinnitus ringing for all occupants; zero ambient noise.
 
-## Voice Signature: Sarah Miller (Re-Verified)
-- **Stress:** "Get a grip—what the actual fuck?!" (Current level).
-- **Verbal Tic:** "Data doesn't lie" (Used as a mantra while bleeding).
-- **Imperfection:** Stuttering on initial consonants ("Th-this silence...") due to neurological shock.
-- **Dialogue Example:** "Elias, empirically speaking, I shouldn't be able to hear you through the ringing—but I can."
-
-## Voice Signature: Mark
-- **Identity:** Non-canonical/Not Present. No state changes.
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-## Notes for Writers
-- The technology in the Miller house is dead. Communication must be physical or via non-electronic means.
-- Sarah is currently deaf; writing/touch will be her primary modes of reception until her hearing recovers.
-- Elias’s arrival marks the first physical union of the two leads since the inciting incident.
+## POLISHED CANON DATA (ch-07)
+- Key Action: Sarah Miller successfully inverted the "Whisper" signal using a digital recorder/speaker feedback loop, physically driving the manifestation through the floorboards.
+- Key Discovery: The entity is not merely auditory; it has physical weight and reacts to specific frequency interference.
+- Tone: Cold, analytical horror. Adrenaline is fading into the realization that the entity is simply waiting beneath them.