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 # Character State: ch-05
 
 ## Liora Voss
-Location: Core Drive-Spindle (Lockdown)
-Physical: Ocular hemorrhaging; purple bruising along veins; left palm aperture pulsing violet; indigo staining reaching mid-bicep; persistent tremors; exhaustion.
-Emotional: Defiant; fatalistic; hyper-focused on circuit stabilization; protective of Thorne.
-Active obligations: Owes Loom maintenance of the "Dirty Circuit"—UNPAID; owes Thorne biological stability via shared link—UNPAID.
-Open loops: Escaping the Core Spindle lockdown—UNRESOLVED; Thirteenth Strand consequences—UNRESOLVED; Conclave Purists' coup—UNRESOLVED.
-Arc: 30% — Formed a permanent biological/metaphysical tether with Thorne; accepting a shared fate to prevent Loom collapse.
-Permanent: YES
+- **Location:** Core Drive-Spindle, Weaving Chamber (Lockdown).
+- **Physical:** Ocular hemorrhaging; purple bruising along veins; left palm aperture pulsing violet; indigo staining reaching mid-bicep; severe physical exhaustion.
+- **Emotional:** Defiant; fatalistic; hyper-focused on circuit stabilization; "bind or break" mindset.
+- **Active Obligations:** Owes Loom maintenance of the "Dirty Circuit"—UNPAID; owes Thorne biological stability via shared link—UNPAID.
+- **Open Loops:** Escaping the Core Spindle lockdown—UNRESOLVED; Thirteenth Strand consequences—UNRESOLVED; Conclave Purists' coup—UNRESOLVED.
+- **Arc:** 30% — Accepted a permanent biological/metaphysical tether with Thorne to prevent total Loom collapse.
 
 ## Thorne Quill
-Location: Weaving Chamber, restraint chair.
-Physical: Organs vibrating with Loom frequency; skin etched with indigo ink-blood; bound to Liora by a pulsing violet tether; sensory overload.
-Emotional: Protective; resolute; secretively attuned to the Loom’s "voice."
-Active obligations: Owes Liora biological stabilization/anchor-weight—UNPAID.
-Open loops: Interpreting the Loom's sentient intent—UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: Communicating with the Loom's sentient intent—hidden from Liora.
-Arc: 30% — Accepted role as a sentient anchor, no longer a sacrifice but a necessary component of the machine's survival.
-Permanent: YES
+- **Location:** Weaving Chamber, restraint chair.
+- **Physical:** Internal organs vibrating; skin etched with indigo ink-blood; physically bound to Liora by a pulsing violet tether.
+- **Emotional:** Protective; resolute; secretively attuned to Loom sentience.
+- **Active Obligations:** Owes Liora biological stabilization/anchor-weight—UNPAID.
+- **Open Loops:** Interpreting the Loom's sentient intent—UNRESOLVED.
+- **Known Secrets:** Communicating with the Loom's sentient intent (Liora unaware).
+- **Arc:** 30% — Transitioned from sacrifice to a necessary, sentient anchor for the machine.
 
 ## Elder Maros
-Location: High Observation Gallery.
-Physical: Leaning on bone-white cane; eyes clouded by indigo cataracts.
-Emotional: Politically panicked; desperate to maintain order to ensure personal survival.
-Active obligations: Owes Liora political protection from Purists—UNPAID.
-Open loops: Maros vs. imminent Purist mobilization—UNRESOLVED.
-Arc: 20% — Remains a hostage to the ritual's outcome, forced to defend heresy.
+- **Location:** High Observation Gallery.
+- **Physical:** Leaning on bone-white cane; eyes clouded by indigo cataracts.
+- **Emotional:** Politically panicked; desperate for his own survival.
+- **Active Obligations:** Owes Liora political protection from Purists—UNPAID.
+- **Open Loops:** Survival against imminent Purist mobilization—UNRESOLVED.
+- **Arc:** 20% — Forced to defend heresy to maintain power.
 
 # World State: ch-05
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- Junior Binders: TRAUMATIZED — Witnessed the forbidden Thirteenth Strand binding; high risk of radicalization.
-- Archival Guards: HOSTILE — Enforcing lockdown with lethal intent; viewing the indigo flare as a breach of sanctity.
+- **Junior Binders:** TRAUMATIZED — Witnessed the forbidden Thirteenth Strand binding; high risk of radicalization.
+- **Archival Guards:** HOSTILE — Enforcing lockdown with lethal intent; loyal to the Purist doctrine.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- Conclave Purists: MILITANT — Prepare to purge the "stained" heretics; view the violet light as proof of spiritual corruption.
-- The Stained: NASCENT — Emerging underground faction; view Liora as a prophet of a new weaving era.
+- **Conclave Purists:** MILITANT — Preparing to purge "stained" heretics; view violet light as spiritual corruption.
+- **The Stained (Nascent):** EMERGENT — Underground faction viewing Liora as a prophet of the new weave.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Dirty Circuit: Stabilized by the Liora-Thorne link; requires constant biological resonance to prevent feedback.
-- Indigo Contagion: Gravity fluctuations and violet light bleeds spreading to upper galleries; the "stain" is physical and infectious.
-- Lockdown Protocol: Core Spindle sealed; internal silos armed and hostile; automated defenses active.
-- Loom Frequency: Low-level sentience active; perceptible only to Thorne.
+- **The Dirty Circuit:** Stabilized by the Liora-Thorne link; requires resonance to prevent catastrophic feedback.
+- **Indigo Contagion:** Gravity fluctuations and violet light spreading to upper galleries; physical corruption of the Spindle architecture.
+- **Lockdown Protocol:** Core Spindle sealed; internal automated defenses armed and hostile.
+- **Loom Frequency:** Low-level sentience active; perceptible only to Thorne.
 
 ## Item/Lore Status
-- The Thirteenth Strand: A forbidden, chaotic frequency successfully integrated into the Core but causing systemic instability.
-- The Violet Tether: The permanent metaphysical bond linking Liora and Thorne’s life-forces.
+- **The Thirteenth Strand:** Forbidden/chaotic frequency integrated into the Core; cause of systemic instability and the "Stained" effect.
+- **The Violet Tether:** Permanent metaphysical bond linking Liora and Thorne’s life-forces; the first of its kind.
+- **Soul-Link:** Liora’s signature move; now permanently manifest via the Tether.
+- **Frayback:** The risk of soul-severance; currently looming due to the integration of the Thirteenth Strand.