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 ## Lena Duval
 Location: Safehouse, Lower Ninth Ward, New Orleans.
-Physical: Suffering from "The Severing"—severe cold tremors, nausea from urban vibrations, and sensory "blindness."
-Emotional: Isolated and defensive; feels a profound sense of betrayal by the land.
-Active obligations: Owes Jax Harlan protection/truth (ch-05) — UNPAID; Owes the land a balancing of scales (ch-05) — UNPAID.
-Open loops: Navigating the "Urban Wall" without magic (ch-05) — UNRESOLVED; Distinguishing Maribelle’s call from true memory (ch-05) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-05—unresolved): Knows the project name "Phlegethon"; CARRIED (ch-05—unresolved): Suspects Maribelle is mimicking her mother’s voice.
-Arc: 45% — Transitioned from a fleeing witch to a "hollow" survivor stripped of her power by the city's iron.
+Physical: Suffering "The Severing"—intense tremors, nausea, and sensory overload from city industrial noise; feels a "hollow deafness" where her magic resided.
+Emotional: Violated, desperate, and claustrophobic; feels hunted by the coven while trapped by the city’s "Urban Wall."
+Active obligations: Owes Jax Harlan the truth behind "Phlegethon" (ch-05) — UNPAID; Owes herself a way to muffle Maribelle’s psychic intrusion (ch-05) — UNPAID.
+Open loops: Navigating a world where she is "blind" to the supernatural (ch-05) — UNRESOLVED; Confirming if the voice in her head is truly Maribelle or her own fracturing mind (ch-05) — UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-05--unresolved): Knows the developers are targeting the "Heart of the Bend" for Project Phlegethon; CARRIED (ch-05--unresolved): Realizes her mother's locket is vibrating in sync with the city’s industrial noise, not the swamp.
+Arc: 45% -- Transitioned from a defiant runaway to a crippled survivor; her stubborn independence is now her only weapon since her magic is gone.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## Jax Harlan
 Location: Safehouse, Lower Ninth Ward, New Orleans.
-Physical: Exhausted, hyper-vigilant, hand remains near his holster.
-Emotional: Burdened and protective; internally acknowledging that the Bayou is a sentient force beyond his control.
-Active obligations: Protective detail for Lena (ch-05) — ACTIVE.
-Open loops: Evading the Coven's reach within city limits (ch-05) — ACTIVE; Finding a "bridge" or neutral asset to assist Lena’s condition (ch-05) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-05—unresolved): Accepts the supernatural reality of the Bayou despite his secular background.
-Arc: 20% — Evolution from a hired guide to a committed protector, prioritizing Lena’s life over his own safety.
+Physical: Tense, sleep-deprived, nursing a bruised shoulder from the retreat.
+Emotional: Protective but overwhelmed; moving from skepticism to a grim acceptance of the Duval curse.
+Active obligations: Delivering Lena to a "neutral" contact in the city (ch-05) — ACTIVE.
+Open loops: Identifying who leaked their safehouse location (ch-05) — ACTIVE.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-05--unresolved): Has observed that Lena’s tremors stop only when she touches something organic or him.
+Arc: 20% -- His role as a mere "escort" has dissolved into a shared fate; he no longer asks "if" the magic is real, only "how" to survive it.
 Permanent: YES
 
 # World State: ch-05
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- Aunt Maribelle / The Coven (Cypress Bend): HOSTILE — Successfully initiated "The Severing" to tether Lena.
-- Remy LeBlanc (Cypress Bend): FRIENDLY — (Absent this chapter) Remains a childhood ally.
+- Aunt Maribelle (The Coven): HOSTILE — Initiated "The Severing" to force Lena's return — Proved the coven’s reach extends into the city.
+- The "Neutral" (New Orleans): UNKNOWN — Rumored contact for displaced magical talent.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- The Duval Coven: Aggressive — Treating Lena as a stray asset to be repossessed through metaphysical pain.
-- Terrebonne Development Corp: Predatory — Utilizing Lena’s absence to accelerate "Project Phlegethon" in the swamp.
+- The Duval Coven: Relentless — Using Lena’s withdrawal symptoms as a leash to pull her back to Cypress Bend.
+- Terrebonne Development Corp: Opportunistic — Exploiting the coven’s distraction to advance Project Phlegethon.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Severing: Active magical withdrawal caused by Lena's distance from Cypress Bend, manifesting as physical illness.
-- The Urban Wall: The industrial interference of New Orleans (iron/electricity) masking Lena from the Coven but severing her power.
-- The Stagnation: Metaphysical decay in Cypress Bend due to the absence of the Duval line's balance.
+- The Severing: A magical feedback loop causing Lena’s physical collapse as she distances herself from her power source.
+- The Urban Wall: The phenomenon where city iron and electricity act as a static barrier, shielding Lena from tracking but inducing physical illness.
+- The Stagnation: A growing rot in the geography of Cypress Bend caused by the absence of a Duval anchor.
 
 ## Metadata
 - Current Chapter: 05
-- Key Item: Lena’s silver locket (Strained).
-- Key Term: "The Urban Wall."
+- Key Item: Lena’s silver locket (vibrating with industrial frequency).
+- Key Term: "The Urban Wall."
+- Mood: Claustrophobic, clinical, and desperate.