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 # Character State: ch-01
 
 ## Liora Voss
-Location: The Weaving Chamber, Threadbinders' Conclave
-Physical: Trembling left hand; smelling of indigo and lanolin; suffering "frayback" (static/blurred vision).
-Emotional: Clinical but desperate; haunted by the "unspooling" of her parents.
-Active obligations: Must catalog and bind Thorne Quill for the Conclave -- UNPAID.
-Open loops: [Liora & Thorne] Encountered a thread that refuses her silver-etched needles -- UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: Witnessed the mechanical gears of the Great Loom fail during her parents' "accident"—it wasn't a soul-error.
-Arc: 05% — Confronted by a thread (Thorne’s) that defies her rigid methodology.
-Permanent: YES
+*   **Location:** The Weaving Chamber, Threadbinders' Conclave.
+*   **Physical:** Suffers from "frayback" (static/blurred vision); left hand trembling; smells of indigo and lanolin used in ritual preparation.
+*   **Emotional:** Desperate and rattled; hyper-focused on the ritual's failure.
+*   **Obligations:** Tasked by the Conclave to catalog and bind Thorne Quill—currently an UNPAID/unfulfilled duty.
+*   **Secrets:** Witnessed the Great Loom’s mechanical failure during her parents' death; knows it wasn't a "soul-error" despite the official Conclave narrative.
+*   **Arc (05%):** Realized her standard silver-etched tools are insufficient against "wild" threads after suffering physical recoil.
 
 ## Thorne Quill
-Location: The Weaving Chamber, Threadbinders' Conclave
-Physical: Vital; skin humming with kinetic energy; reacts violently to silver tools.
-Emotional: Defiant; skeptical of the Conclave’s "order."
-Active obligations: Forced submission to the Binding Assessment -- UNPAID.
-Open loops: [Thorne & The Conclave] The specific nature of his "unbound" status and why Maros wants him specifically -- UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: His threads actively push back against silver-etching; he feels the threads as physical weight.
-Arc: 05% — Exposed his "unbound" nature to the Conclave’s most meticulous binder.
-Permanent: YES
+*   **Location:** The Weaving Chamber (Restrained).
+*   **Physical:** Skin humming with kinetic energy; highly reactive to silver; possesses a "wild" thread that acts as a physical weight or lash.
+*   **Emotional:** Defiant; skeptical of the Conclave’s "binding" theology.
+*   **Obligations:** Forced submission to the Binding Assessment—currently resisting.
+*   **Secrets:** His threads actively repel silver; he perceives the "weight" of the weave as a physical sensation.
+*   **Arc (05%):** Successfully resisted a Master Binder’s tools, exposing his unique, unbound status to the Conclave leadership.
 
 ## Elder Maros
-Location: Observation Gallery
-Physical: Frail, relying on a cane; eyes sharp and predatory.
-Emotional: Calculating; views the friction between Liora and Thorne as a necessary catalyst.
-Active obligations: None.
-Open loops: [Maros & Liora] The demand for a "Master Thread" to stabilize the Loom -- UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: Knows Thorne’s true lineage and why his thread is "wild."
-Arc: 01% — Initiated the collision between the protagonist and the catalyst.
+*   **Location:** Observation Gallery.
+*   **Physical:** Frail, leaning on a cane; predatory gaze.
+*   **Emotional:** Calculating, satisfied by the friction between Liora and Thorne.
+*   **Obligations:** Maintaining the stability of the Great Loom.
+*   **Secrets:** Knows Thorne’s true lineage and why his thread is "wild."
+*   **Arc (01%):** Orchestrated the confrontation to test if a wild thread can stabilize the failing Loom.
 
 # World State: ch-01
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- Elder Maros: Observed Liora's failure to instantly bind Thorne. Note: He is pleased by the difficulty, suggesting he expected it.
+*   **Elder Maros:** Confirmed that standard binding rituals are failing after seeing Liora's needles snap. He views Thorne as a potential "Master Thread."
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- Threadbinders' Conclave: Paranoid/Dogmatic. Increasing focus on "purity of the weave" as frayback incidents rise. They view "unbound" souls as structural flaws.
+*   **Threadbinders' Conclave:** Dogmatic and increasingly paranoid. They view the "Looming Fray" as a heretical instability rather than a mechanical failure.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Great Binding Assessment: A mass ritual to re-tether the populist to the Great Loom.
-- The Looming Fray: A localized phenomenon where souls are becoming unmoored without explanation.
+*   **The Great Binding Assessment:** A forced ritualistic tethering of the populace.
+*   **The Looming Fray:** A localized phenomenon where souls become unmoored, causing spiritual and physical decay.
 
 ## Key Terminology & Mechanics
-- Frayback: Physical and spiritual recoil from a botched or resisted binding.
-- Silver-Etched Tools: The standard instruments of the Conclave; ineffective against Thorne.
-- Soul-Link: The dangerous process of a binder merging their senses with a subject.
-- Bind or Break: Liora’s personal mantra/prayer before high-stakes weaving.
+*   **Frayback:** The violent spiritual recoil and sensory distortion (static vision) caused by a failed or rejected binding.
+*   **Silver-Etched Tools:** Conductive instruments used by Binders to channel soul-links; rendered useless/broken by Thorne’s essence.
+*   **Soul-Link:** A dangerous sensory merger between Binder and Subject.
+*   **The Great Loom:** The metaphysical/mechanical heart of the Conclave, currently failing/glitching.
 
-## Canonical Notes
-- The chamber is cold, heightening the tactile sensation of the threads.
-- Liora hides her trembling hand by braiding her hair, a tell for her anxiety.
-- Thorne’s threads are described as "mercurial" and "kinetic," lacking the typical color-coded intent of standard souls.
+## Open Loops
+*   **[Liora & Thorne]:** Encountered a thread that refuses silver-etched needles—UNRESOLVED.
+*   **[Thorne & The Conclave]:** The mystery of Thorne’s "unbound" status and why Maros specifically targeted him—UNRESOLVED.
+*   **[The Looming Fray]:** The mechanical breakdown Liora witnessed years ago vs. the Conclave’s "soul-error" propaganda—UNRESOLVED.