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 ## Lena Duval
 Location: Safehouse, Lower Ninth Ward, New Orleans.
-Physical: Plunged into "The Severing"—violent tremors, cold sweats, and a sense of hollow deafness where her magic used to hum. The city's iron and hum cause physical nausea.
-Emotional: Violated and trapped; mourning the loss of her connection to the land while fearing the "Urban Wall" will kill her before the Coven does.
-Active obligations: Owes Jax Harlan the truth behind "Phlegethon" (ch-05) — UNPAID; Owes herself a way to muffle Maribelle’s psychic intrusion (ch-05) — UNPAID.
-Open loops: Navigating a world where she is "blind" to the supernatural (ch-05) — UNRESOLVED; Confirming if the voice in her head is truly Maribelle or her own fracturing mind (ch-05) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-05): Knows the developers are targeting the "Heart of the Bend" for Project Phlegethon; CARRIED (ch-05): Realizes her mother's locket is vibrating in sync with the city’s industrial noise, not the swamp.
-Arc: 45% — Transitioned from a defiant runaway to a crippled survivor; her stubborn independence is now her only weapon since her magic is gone.
+Physical: Enduring "The Severing"—severe tremors, nausea, and sensory static; experiencing a "hollow deafness" where her magic used to pulse.
+Emotional: Violated and claustrophobic. Feels hunted by the coven while physically trapped by the city’s "Urban Wall."
+Active obligations: Owes Jax Harlan the reality of "Phlegethon"—UNPAID; needs to muffle Maribelle’s psychic intrusion—UNPAID.
+Open loops: Navigating the world "blind" to the supernatural—UNRESOLVED; determining if Maribelle’s voice is a real intrusion or a mental fracture—UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: (CARRIED) Developers are targeting the "Heart of the Bend" for Project Phlegethon; (CARRIED) Mother’s silver locket is vibrating in sync with industrial machinery, not nature.
+Arc: 45% — Transitioned from defiant runaway to crippled survivor; her stubbornness is her only remaining weapon.
 Permanent: YES
 
 ## Jax Harlan
 Location: Safehouse, Lower Ninth Ward, New Orleans.
-Physical: Tense, sleep-deprived, nursing a bruised shoulder from the frantic retreat.
-Emotional: Growing sense of "out of my depth" awe; he is moving from skepticism to a grim acceptance of the Duval curse.
-Active obligations: Delivering Lena to a "neutral" contact in the city (ch-05) — ACTIVE.
-Open loops: Identifying who leaked their safehouse location (ch-05) — ACTIVE.
-Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-05): Has observed that Lena’s tremors stop only when she touches something organic or him.
-Arc: 20% — His role as a mere "escort" has dissolved into a shared fate; he no longer asks "if" the magic is real, only "how" to survive it.
+Physical: Tense and sleep-deprived; nursing a bruised shoulder from the retreat.
+Emotional: Protective but overwhelmed; shifted from skepticism to grim acceptance of the Duval curse.
+Active obligations: Delivering Lena to a "neutral" contact in New Orleans—ACTIVE.
+Open loops: Identifying the source of the safehouse location leak—ACTIVE.
+Known secrets: (CARRIED) Noticed Lena’s tremors subside only when she has physical contact with him or organic matter.
+Arc: 20% — Evaluates his role not as an escort, but as a linked survivor in a shared fate.
 Permanent: YES
 
 # World State: ch-05
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- Aunt Maribelle / The Coven: HOSTILE — Proved their reach extends beyond the swamp through the "Severing" ritual.
-- The "Neutral" (Mentioned): UNKNOWN — A rumored asset in New Orleans who handles "displaced" talent.
+- Aunt Maribelle (The Coven): HOSTILE — Executed "The Severing" to force Lena’s return; displayed that distance offers no protection from the coven.
+- The "Neutral" (New Orleans): UNKNOWN — A rumored contact for displaced magical practitioners in the city.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- The Duval Coven: Relentless — They are using Lena’s withdrawal symptoms as a leash to pull her back to the Bend.
-- Terrebonne Development Corp: Opportunistic — Clearing the physical brush of the swamp while the Coven clears the metaphysical.
+- The Duval Coven: Relentless — Using Lena’s withdrawal as a leash to drag her back to the swamp.
+- Terrebonne Development Corp: Opportunistic — Moving forward with Project Phlegethon while the coven is distracted by Lena.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Severing: The magical feedback loop causing Lena’s physical collapse as she distances herself from her power source.
-- The Urban Wall: The concept that city iron and electricity act as a static-filled barrier, shielding Lena from Coven tracking but also cutting off her "breath" (magic).
-- The Stagnation: A growing rot in Cypress Bend reported by Lena’s last visions; the land is souring without a Duval to ground it.
+- The Severing: A magical feedback loop causing Lena’s physical collapse as she is forcibly unplugged from her power source.
+- The Urban Wall: The phenomenon where city iron and electricity create a static barrier that shields Lena from tracking but induces physical illness.
+- The Stagnation: A growing ecological rot in Cypress Bend caused by the absence of a Duval blood-anchor.
 
 ## Metadata
-- Current Chapter: 05
-- Key Item: Lena’s silver locket (now a source of irritating vibration).
+- Current Chapter: 05 (Finalized)
+- Key Item: Lena’s silver locket (calibrated to industrial frequencies).
 - Key Term: "The Urban Wall."
 - Mood: Claustrophobic, clinical, and desperate.