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editorial: Ch08 butterfly - Dorian confesses the Protocol Omega secret

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@@ -98,4 +98,10 @@ We weren't just two mages holding hands. We were a storm. We were the very thing
- Kaelen is dead. Do not write him as alive.
- The Ministry's betrayal (if the traitor is found here) gains a new dimension: did the Ministry's sabotage of the academy wards directly cause the vortex that killed Kaelen?
- If yes, that accusation lands with the weight of a murder charge against the Ministry.
- Mira's "I knew" moment (if applicable) connects to Kaelen: she always knew the Ministry was willing to let people die for their agenda.
- Mira's "I knew" moment (if applicable) connects to Kaelen: she always knew the Ministry was willing to let people die for their agenda.
## BUTTERFLY CASCADE NOTE (Ch08)
- When Malchor arrives with the Severance Key, Dorian KNOWS exactly what it is from the Protocol Omega report.
- Dorian's composure BREAKS in this chapter — not just from fear, but from recognition. He has seen the name Aldric Solas on the report. He knows this key does not 'sever' — it kills.
- The moment Malchor activates the key, Dorian CONFESSES to Mira: 'I found something in the Library. I should have told you.'
- Mira's reaction to the betrayal of silence is the emotional climax of this chapter.