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 # Character State: ch-07
 
 ## Sarah Miller
-Location: The Miller Household, Second Floor Hallway.
-Physical: Severe auditory hemorrhaging; temporary deafness; exhaustion; physical tremors; scorched palms from electrical discharge.
-Emotional: High-functioning shock; hyper-fixated on data survival; wary.
-Active obligations: Owes Elias Thorne a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
-Open loops: [Sarah] The cause of "ghost-looping" on her digital recorder (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] Validation of 1927 occult chants overdubbing her recordings (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] The veracity of the apparition's vision regarding Elias's death (ch-06) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah/Elias] Verification of the "Black Box" recording captured during the spike (ch-07) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-01--unresolved): Monitoring her own recordings for vocal mimicry patterns; CARRIED (ch-02--unresolved): The signal is manifesting as 1927 occult chants; CARRIED (ch-06): The "Whispers" possess intimate knowledge of her past failures and professional shaming.
-Arc: 55% — Weaponized her scientific equipment to force a physical repelling of the entity, transitioning from victim to combatant.
-Permanent: YES
+- **Location:** Miller Household, Second Floor Hallway.
+- **Physical:** Bilateral hearing loss (temporary); dried blood on ears/neck; steadying from tremors; severe exhaustion.
+- **Emotional:** Vindicated but shaken; cautious relief; analytical focus.
+- **Active obligations:** Owes Elias Thorne a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
+- **Open loops:** [Sarah] Digital recorder "ghost-looping" (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] Validation of 1927 occult chants (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] The apparition’s vision of Elias’s death (ch-06) — UNRESOLVED.
+- **Known secrets:** CARRIED (ch-02--unresolved): Carries 1927 occult chant data; CARRIED (ch-06--unresolved): the "Whispers" weaponized her professional shaming against her.
+- **Arc:** 60% — She has successfully transitioned from victim to combatant, using her knowledge of acoustics to drive back the entities.
+- **Permanent:** YES
 
 ## Elias Thorne
-Location: The Miller Household, Second Floor Hallway.
-Physical: Heavy bruising from forced entry; minor lacerations from glass shards; auditory sensitivity.
-Emotional: Relieved but intensely unsettled; protective; hyper-vigilant.
-Active obligations: Owes Sarah Miller a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
-Open loops: [Elias] The significance of the 1927 "Great Silence" signatures (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias] The source of the "wet iron" scent (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED.
-Known secrets: CARRIED (ch-02--unresolved): Conviction that the signal is a sentient entity rewriting his biological rhythms; CARRIED (ch-01--unresolved): Signal frequency matches his pulse.
-Arc: 35% — Successfully navigated the "pull" of the signal to reach Sarah, confirming the physical necessity of their partnership.
-Permanent: YES
+- **Location:** Miller Household, Second Floor Hallway.
+- **Physical:** Adrenaline spike; sensory hypersensitivity (residual 14Hz sync); no physical injuries.
+- **Emotional:** Fiercely protective; overwhelmed by the visual evidence of Sarah's struggle; deep relief.
+- **Active obligations:** Owes Sarah a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
+- **Open loops:** [Elias] 1927 "Great Silence" signatures (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias] "Wet iron" scent origin (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED.
+- **Known secrets:** CARRIED (ch-01--unresolved): Signal matches his pulse; CARRIED (ch-02--unresolved): belief the signal is sentient/biological.
+- **Arc:** 40% — He has crossed the threshold from observer to rescuer, physically intervening in a phenomenon he previously only studied.
+- **Permanent:** YES
 
 # World State: ch-07
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- The Whispers (Entities): Hostile — Dissipated by the constructive interference loop; left behind a residual "static" stain on the architecture.
+- **The Whispers (Entities):** Banished/Weakened — Forced to retreat by a 110dB feedback loop; Sarah's intervention proved they have physical/frequency-based vulnerabilities.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- Archive Administration: Hostile — Elias has officially bypassed lockdown protocols and disappeared from their tracking.
+- **Archive Administration:** Hostile/Suspicious — Elias has bypassed security protocols to reach the Miller house; his absence is noted.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- The Feedback Spike: A 110dB burst triggered by Sarah destroyed all local unshielded electronics and caused structural timber cracking in her home.
-- The Physical Union: Elias and Sarah have successfully met in person during an active manifestation.
-- Electronic Dead Zone: The Miller household is now a localized "dead zone" where the signal's influence is temporarily thinned by the feedback residue.
+- **The Miller Loop:** The high-decibel spike has permanently destroyed all electronic infrastructure in the Miller residence.
+- **Thermodynamic Chill:** A localized temperature drop persists in the hallway despite the entities' retreat.
+- **The Reunion:** The two protagonists are now physically united at the site of the manifestation.
 
 ## Environmental Constants
-- Location: The Miller Residence.
-- Atmosphere: Ozone-saturated; thick smell of burnt circuitry and copper.
-- Lighting: Pitch black; no utility power.
-- Audio: Absolute silence punctuated by the physical ringing in the characters' ears.
+- **Location:** Miller Residence (Suburban).
+- **Atmosphere:** Thick with the smell of ozone, burnt plastic, and copper.
+- **Lighting:** Pitch black; structural electrical failure.
+- **Audio:** A heavy, unnatural silence that Sarah perceives as a low-pressure void due to her hearing damage.