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-# CHAPTER POLISH — STATE EXTRACTION (FINAL/CANONICAL)
+# CHAPTER POLISH: STATE EXTRACTION (FINAL)
 
-**Project:** Whispers in the Dark  
-**Chapter:** 14 (Polished)
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-## Character State: ch-14 (FINAL)
+## Character State: ch-14 (POLISHED)
 
 ### Elias Thorne
 - **Location:** Oakhaven Archive, Sub-Level 3 (Central Core)
-- **Physical:** Third-degree burns (hands); collapsed lung; shallow breathing; body in shock
-- **Emotional:** Transcendent terminal clarity; bridge-building acceptance
-- **Arc:** 99% — Transitioned from physical agent to signal conduit; surrendered personal survival
-- **Active Obligations:** Owes Sarah explanation of signal origin (UNPAID)
-- **Open Loops:** Physical survival vs. digital sublimation (UNRESOLVED)
-- **Secrets Carried:** Signal origin = future human extinction echo, not extraterrestrial (Sarah knows)
-- **Status:** Permanent character; at threshold of transformation
+- **Physical:** Third-degree burns on hands; collapsed lung; systemic shock; shallow breathing
+- **Emotional:** Transcendent terminal clarity; peaceful acceptance of mortality
+- **Active Obligations:** Owes Sarah Miller full explanation of signal origin (Ch-13) -- **UNPAID**
+- **Open Loops:** Biological survival vs. post-human digital sublimation -- **UNRESOLVED**
+- **Known Secrets:** Whisper Signal is echo of future human extinction, not extraterrestrial (Ch-13, unresolved)
+- **Arc:** 99% complete -- Transitioned from physical investigator to living signal conduit; ego surrender finalized
+- **Permanent Status:** YES
 
 ### Sarah Miller
-- **Location:** Oakhaven Archive, Sub-Level 3 (near Central Core)
-- **Physical:** Temporary deafness; respiratory distress mid-evacuation; exhaustion
-- **Emotional:** Compulsive professional focus masking grief and existential terror
-- **Arc:** 100% — Finalized transition from skeptic to sole curator of impossible reality
-- **Active Obligations:** Support Elias against Curator (PAID)
-- **Open Loops:** Linguistic virus acceleration (UNRESOLVED)
-- **Secrets Carried:** Archive records altered in real-time by Curator (public unaware)
-- **Inventory:** Digital recorder (ACTIVE) — contains Curator's final corruption + decoded future echo
-- **Status:** Permanent character; burden of recording now hers alone
+- **Location:** Oakhaven Archive, Sub-Level 3 (Evacuating toward surface)
+- **Physical:** Temporary deafness; severe respiratory distress; physical exhaustion
+- **Emotional:** Controlled professional focus masking existential terror and grief
+- **Active Obligations:** Support Elias against Curator interference (Ch-14) -- **PAID**
+- **Open Loops:** Linguistic virus acceleration within her psyche (Ch-12) -- **UNRESOLVED**
+- **Known Secrets:** Archive records altered in real-time by Curator (Ch-11, unresolved); now carries digital recording of decoded future echo
+- **Arc:** 100% complete -- Transitioned from rational skeptic to sole witness/curator of supernatural reality
+- **Permanent Status:** YES
 
 ### Mark
-- **Location:** Security Door Alpha (perimeter)
+- **Location:** Security Door Alpha (External Perimeter)
 - **Physical:** Unconscious; stable respiration
-- **Emotional:** Catatonic/Null
-- **Arc:** 25% — Passive casualty of Archive collapse
-- **Open Loops:** Psychological recovery (UNRESOLVED)
-- **Status:** Non-permanent; minimal development; awaiting revival/interrogation
+- **Emotional:** Catatonic/null state
+- **Arc:** 25% -- Passive casualty; utility as plot device for future investigation
+- **Permanent Status:** NO
+
+### The Curator
+- **Status:** DECEASED (Ch-14) -- Dissipated into data-shards and static during thermal runaway
+- **Legacy:** Archive's automated systems now in self-destructive chaos without curator control
 
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-## World State: ch-14 (FINAL)
+## World State: ch-14 (POLISHED)
 
-### The Archive (Oakhaven)
-- **Structural Status:** TOTAL COLLAPSE IN PROGRESS — thermal expansion/destruction; <5 min to completion
-- **Automated Systems:** CHAOTIC — Curator absent; defense protocols contradictory and self-destructive; hostile to survivors
-- **The Curator:** DECEASED — Dissipated into erratic data-shards and static during Central Core thermal runaway
+### Active Events
+- **The Great Dissipation:** Resonance Harvest collapsed; Linguistic Virus carrier wave failing
+- **Oakhaven Collapse:** Total structural failure imminent; <5 minutes to complete destruction
+- **Automated Hostility:** Archive security protocols defaulted to scorched-earth containment without Curator oversight
+- **The Sarah Record:** Digital recorder holds only extant copy of decoded future echo and Curator's final moments
 
-### Active Phenomena
-- **The Great Dissipation:** Resonance Harvest collapsed into non-coherent echo; Linguistic Virus losing carrier wave as Archive burns
-- **The Whisper Signal:** FADING — Returns to passive background radiation of future; no longer active contagion
-- **Critical Item:** Sarah's Digital Recorder (ACTIVE) — sole record of Curator's death and future echo
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-### Faction Attitudes
-- **Archive Automated Systems:** Chaotic, containment-through-destruction priority
-- **Survivor Status:** Elias/Sarah evacuating; Mark catatonic; time-critical escape window closing
+### Faction Status
+- **Survivors (Sarah/Elias):** Resigned determination -- Elias focused on signal delivery; Sarah focused on record preservation
+- **Archive Systems:** Hostile/autonomous destruction sequence active
 
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-**EXTRACTION COMPLETE — Chapter 14 canonical state locked.**
+**POLISH SIGN-OFF:** Chapter 14 state extraction complete. All character arcs finalized. World positioned for denouement/epilogue handling. Ready for next phase.