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 ## Sarah Miller
 - **Location:** Miller Household, Second Floor Hallway.
-- **Physical:** Bilateral hearing loss (temporary); dried blood on ears/neck; steadying from tremors; severe exhaustion.
-- **Emotional:** Vindicated but shaken; cautious relief; analytical focus.
+- **Physical:** Bilateral hearing loss (profuse ringing); bleeding from ear canals; severe tremors; soot and ozone residue on skin.
+- **Emotional:** Cold, tactical clarity; massive adrenaline crash imminent; grim satisfaction.
 - **Active obligations:** Owes Elias Thorne a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
 - **Open loops:** [Sarah] Digital recorder "ghost-looping" (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] Validation of 1927 occult chants (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] The apparition’s vision of Elias’s death (ch-06) — UNRESOLVED.
-- **Known secrets:** CARRIED (ch-02--unresolved): Carries 1927 occult chant data; CARRIED (ch-06--unresolved): the "Whispers" weaponized her professional shaming against her.
-- **Arc:** 60% — She has successfully transitioned from victim to combatant, using her knowledge of acoustics to drive back the entities.
+- **Known secrets:** CARRIED (ch-02—unresolved): Carries 1927 occult chant data; CARRIED (ch-06—unresolved): the "Whispers" weaponized her professional shaming against her.
+- **Arc:** 60% — She has fully transitioned from observer to combatant, using her specialized equipment to successfully repel a non-physical entity.
 - **Permanent:** YES
 
 ## Elias Thorne
-- **Location:** Miller Household, Second Floor Hallway.
-- **Physical:** Adrenaline spike; sensory hypersensitivity (residual 14Hz sync); no physical injuries.
-- **Emotional:** Fiercely protective; overwhelmed by the visual evidence of Sarah's struggle; deep relief.
+- **Location:** Miller Household, Second Floor Hallway (immediate proximity to Sarah).
+- **Physical:** Exhausted; internal synchronization with the 14Hz hum is peaking; no visible external injuries.
+- **Emotional:** Protective relief; deep-seated fear of the "The Great Silence" following the spike.
 - **Active obligations:** Owes Sarah a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
-- **Open loops:** [Elias] 1927 "Great Silence" signatures (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias] "Wet iron" scent origin (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED.
-- **Known secrets:** CARRIED (ch-01--unresolved): Signal matches his pulse; CARRIED (ch-02--unresolved): belief the signal is sentient/biological.
-- **Arc:** 40% — He has crossed the threshold from observer to rescuer, physically intervening in a phenomenon he previously only studied.
+- **Open loops:** [Elias] 1927 "Great Silence" signatures (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias] "Wet iron" scent origin (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias & Sarah] Physical safety from the Archive's breach response (ch-07) — UNRESOLVED.
+- **Known secrets:** CARRIED (ch-01—unresolved): Signal matches his pulse; CARRIED (ch-02—unresolved): belief the signal is sentient/biological.
+- **Arc:** 35% — Has successfully intervened in the physical world to reach Sarah, moving from theoretical study to active rescue.
 - **Permanent:** YES
 
 # World State: ch-07
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- **The Whispers (Entities):** Banished/Weakened — Forced to retreat by a 110dB feedback loop; Sarah's intervention proved they have physical/frequency-based vulnerabilities.
+- **The Whispers (Entities):** DEFEATED/RECEDING — Blasted by a 110dB feedback loop; Sarah’s experimental gear has effectively "ruptured" their manifestation in the Miller home.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- **Archive Administration:** Hostile/Suspicious — Elias has bypassed security protocols to reach the Miller house; his absence is noted.
+- **Archive Administration:** Hostile/Aggressive — Their containment protocols have been bypassed; Elias's breach is now a matter of internal security.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- **The Miller Loop:** The high-decibel spike has permanently destroyed all electronic infrastructure in the Miller residence.
-- **Thermodynamic Chill:** A localized temperature drop persists in the hallway despite the entities' retreat.
-- **The Reunion:** The two protagonists are now physically united at the site of the manifestation.
+- **The Great Silence:** Following the feedback spike, the supernatural 14Hz hum has vanished from the Miller residence, replaced by a heavy, unnatural quiet.
+- **Electronic Dead Zone:** The Miller household electronics are permanently destroyed by the high-decibel recursion loop and electromagnetic surge.
+- **The Convergence:** Elias and Sarah are now physically united at the epicenter of the investigation.
 
 ## Environmental Constants
-- **Location:** Miller Residence (Suburban).
-- **Atmosphere:** Thick with the smell of ozone, burnt plastic, and copper.
-- **Lighting:** Pitch black; structural electrical failure.
-- **Audio:** A heavy, unnatural silence that Sarah perceives as a low-pressure void due to her hearing damage.
+- **Location:** Miller Residence.
+- **Atmosphere:** Thick with copper, ozone, and the smell of toasted wiring.
+- **Lighting:** Pitch black/Zero visibility; occasional flickering of battery-operated emergency equipment.
+- **Audio:** Absolute silence punctuated by the high-pitched ringing in the characters' ears.